Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Ine. That's funny about smokey's favorite toy being a stuffed cat LOL. I enjoy the exploits of the little bloke. Well done...

One spag...

"Unfortunately the(y) did not have the same cat anymore."

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week. Thanks for the tip and Good morning Fez.

Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I like the picture of Smokey. You spoil him like I spoiled my dogs. I enjoyed the story, but I was confused by the last sentence. Does he ear floors in some places but not at home? Great work.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I enjoy reading about your dog Smokey
I see there is never a dull moment
.That's why everyone says they are just like kids.

Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week. Yes, You are right.

reply by misscookie on 03-Aug-2015

You're very welcome, you do the same.
Cookie

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

LOL..Ine, Smokey sounds like a hand full...good thing you got him a few more toys...he really is a sweetie...what a cute little...thank you for sharing sweet girl...luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.

Comment from Treischel

Excellent

Yes indeed, you should have a very happy puppy with lots of new play things. He sure is a cute little fellow. Don't you mean he licks the floors, otherwise your last sentence doesn't make any sense.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.

Comment from Bryana

Excellent

Cute dog!!! your story reminds me of kids
when, usually the baby, breaks his brother's
toy. But, as the doggy, gets more than one
toy.

I wish you a very happy Sunday.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Sunday.

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

I think there should be a Y added to make it read "THEY did not have the same cat anymore." The final sentence needs a little clearing up- Did he eat the floor in the store, and you are glad he doesn't eat the floors at home? The photo sure looks like a cherished pet.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Sunday. Thanks for the tip, I will check.

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Cute story. Cute doggie. I have three little dogs so I can relate.

Found an error you didn't mean:

he [eats] the wooden floor at the sites. Fortunately he does not eat it too.

I think you meant to say he LICKS the floor where you typed that first EATS.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Sunday. Thanks.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

It appears you don't agree with Smokey when he expresses his opinion of cats. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. Your post has good imagery.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Sunday.

reply by c_lucas on 02-Aug-2015

You're welcome, Ine. Charlie

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Ine. This is an adorable story of an adorable dog. I think the last sentence is anticlimactic and unnecessary:
"The only thing that is slightly less nice, (this part is confusing--does he eat the floor or doesn't he?)"he eats the wooden floor at the sites. Fortunately he does not eat it too." Do you mean that he chews the floor but does not swallow it? As I mentioned before, I don't think this sentence is necessary. I would end your story at "happy doggy." Marilyn

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Sunday. Thanks, I will change.