Caitlyn Wins Again
5-7-5 contest entry15 total reviews
Comment from lightink
Lovely and bold! Thank you for giving a voice to this! Also, what an irony: the last line only stings if the reader is misogynistic (like probably most opponents)
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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Lovely and bold! Thank you for giving a voice to this! Also, what an irony: the last line only stings if the reader is misogynistic (like probably most opponents)
Comment Written 21-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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Hahaha. Yes, probably most are! That's what made putting that line there so much fun. So pleased you enjoyed. This did pretty well and got mostly positive responses. So, a good thing. mikey
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Very pleased to hear! You really put yourself out there!
Comment from angel123
Your poem is interesting. Your artwork goes well with your poem. It enhances its meaning. Your poem flows well with humor.
Angel123
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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Your poem is interesting. Your artwork goes well with your poem. It enhances its meaning. Your poem flows well with humor.
Angel123
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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Thank you kindly, mikey
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements beautifully with a spot on line and syllable count. This is very well executed and certainly a true statement - I just find the whole thing a little mind boggling. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully with a spot on line and syllable count. This is very well executed and certainly a true statement - I just find the whole thing a little mind boggling. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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It is mind bending. I clearly remember the Olympics that year. A most unusual life. I can only hope that it helps someone who needs it. mikey
Comment from Bill Schott
This five-seven-five, Caitlyn wins again, certainly takes the high road on this amazing turn of events. Freedom to express one's sexual orientations has seemingly blown the doors off societal restraints. It's good, of course, for the individual.
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This five-seven-five, Caitlyn wins again, certainly takes the high road on this amazing turn of events. Freedom to express one's sexual orientations has seemingly blown the doors off societal restraints. It's good, of course, for the individual.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
Comment from Lovinia
Hi Mikey
Fabulous presentation as always. I just love good satire and certainly I'm well rewarded for reading this one. Hehehehe! Love the way your mind thinks. :)
Though more seriously I do admire the courage to be so public and bringing another minority out in the open, hopefully to gain some recognition and respect. You are who you are!! Inspiration for sure.
Well done ... has to be a winner. I wish you luck anyway. :)) Hugs - Lovi xoxo
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Hi Mikey
Fabulous presentation as always. I just love good satire and certainly I'm well rewarded for reading this one. Hehehehe! Love the way your mind thinks. :)
Though more seriously I do admire the courage to be so public and bringing another minority out in the open, hopefully to gain some recognition and respect. You are who you are!! Inspiration for sure.
Well done ... has to be a winner. I wish you luck anyway. :)) Hugs - Lovi xoxo
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
Comment from Sasha
I wish I had a 6 to give you for this, but it is Saturday and I am out. I applaud you for excellent poem. I agree with you completely and applaud her courage too. Great entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best.
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I wish I had a 6 to give you for this, but it is Saturday and I am out. I applaud you for excellent poem. I agree with you completely and applaud her courage too. Great entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2015
Comment from Dean Kuch
I don't know too much about Bruce/Kaitlyn Jenner's personal story, Mikey. I tend to avoid any articles, television programs, or any other forms of mass media pertaining to the topic like the plague. She/he is an inspiration to some, I suppose, and an aberration of divine creation to others.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
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I don't know too much about Bruce/Kaitlyn Jenner's personal story, Mikey. I tend to avoid any articles, television programs, or any other forms of mass media pertaining to the topic like the plague. She/he is an inspiration to some, I suppose, and an aberration of divine creation to others.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2015
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Caitlyn Wins Again, is a fine 5/7/5 poem. I think this is a great contest entry. I like to find out about women that excel at what they do, specially when is a men's thing.
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Caitlyn Wins Again, is a fine 5/7/5 poem. I think this is a great contest entry. I like to find out about women that excel at what they do, specially when is a men's thing.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2015
Comment from nordicgirl
Wow. I did not think it possible to achieve so much depth with so few words. What a touching tribute. And at the same time you manage to get a big smile out of me to go wit it. What is the world coming to a 5·7·5 worthy of six stars. A sure winner.
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Wow. I did not think it possible to achieve so much depth with so few words. What a touching tribute. And at the same time you manage to get a big smile out of me to go wit it. What is the world coming to a 5·7·5 worthy of six stars. A sure winner.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2015
Comment from mvbrooks
Your poem stays true to the 5-7-5 syllable format.
It's topical ("from current headlines)--and stays positive.
I especially liked the inclusion of the phrase "beat by a girl."
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Your poem stays true to the 5-7-5 syllable format.
It's topical ("from current headlines)--and stays positive.
I especially liked the inclusion of the phrase "beat by a girl."
Comment Written 17-Jul-2015
