Jesus died on the cross.
A religious Acrostic.26 total reviews
Comment from playinaround
This poem really says what I feel about Jesus and the cross. So many of us forget what a gift this is. So many sins to be carried, so true. He will never lose his strength. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem!!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015
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This poem really says what I feel about Jesus and the cross. So many of us forget what a gift this is. So many sins to be carried, so true. He will never lose his strength. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem!!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015
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Thanks for the kind review, Ine. Have a lovely last part of the week. Thanks for enjoying it.
Comment from Treischel
An excellent Acrostic poem that provides the image of Jesus and his suffering for us on the cross that is draped on the phrase - Jesus died on the Cross. That's a very long Acrostic, but it read smoothly with strong spiritual theme. Very well done.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015
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An excellent Acrostic poem that provides the image of Jesus and his suffering for us on the cross that is draped on the phrase - Jesus died on the Cross. That's a very long Acrostic, but it read smoothly with strong spiritual theme. Very well done.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015
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Thanks for the kind review, Ine. Have a lovely last part of the week.
Comment from Deborah Marie
Virtual six, instead. Love the artwork. Its beautiful. Meaning resonates within me and I agree with it. Lovely presentation especially when paired with artwork. Thanks for sharing, Deb
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015
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Virtual six, instead. Love the artwork. Its beautiful. Meaning resonates within me and I agree with it. Lovely presentation especially when paired with artwork. Thanks for sharing, Deb
Comment Written 22-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015
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Many thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely second part of the week. Thanks for the virtual six.
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the poem. We do not often remember how Jesus died for us. In spite all else, this is a miracle. He died a terrible death to save us. We should remember it more often. Especially when we begin to feel sorry for ourselves. Great work.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015
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I love the picture. I love the poem. We do not often remember how Jesus died for us. In spite all else, this is a miracle. He died a terrible death to save us. We should remember it more often. Especially when we begin to feel sorry for ourselves. Great work.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015
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Many thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely second part of the week. Thanks for the lovely six.
Comment from l.raven
HI Ine, I think so many have faded from the church...it isn't like it was when I was a kid...but I thank God for His son...and for the forgiveness of my sins...very well written you...and a stunning picture...luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2015
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HI Ine, I think so many have faded from the church...it isn't like it was when I was a kid...but I thank God for His son...and for the forgiveness of my sins...very well written you...and a stunning picture...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 20-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from krys123
Ine;
+ An excellent composition basically about the people loving Christ. But most people don't go to church and those that do only do on a certain day of the week and not as often as they do believe in Christ as they should. I enjoyed this to the brought to me the attention of true believers and those that just believe because He's there And not truly believe in him from their heart.
+ Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always my friend.
Alex
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2015
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Ine;
+ An excellent composition basically about the people loving Christ. But most people don't go to church and those that do only do on a certain day of the week and not as often as they do believe in Christ as they should. I enjoyed this to the brought to me the attention of true believers and those that just believe because He's there And not truly believe in him from their heart.
+ Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always my friend.
Alex
Comment Written 20-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
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You are so welcome my friend have a nice week too.
Alex
Comment from pharp
Nicely done, I believe the Acrostic type poem is one of my favorite. The message of Jesus dying for our sins is well received in the poem. Excellent job thanks for sharing.
Portia
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2015
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Nicely done, I believe the Acrostic type poem is one of my favorite. The message of Jesus dying for our sins is well received in the poem. Excellent job thanks for sharing.
Portia
Comment Written 20-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from adewpearl
thoughtfully presented
good use of alliteration
good use of enjambment
a thoughtful look at faith and how each of us expresses that faith in our own way :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2015
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thoughtfully presented
good use of alliteration
good use of enjambment
a thoughtful look at faith and how each of us expresses that faith in our own way :-) Brooke
Comment Written 20-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week. Hope you feel better.
Comment from judiverse
An excellent acrostic with Jesus Died On The Cross. Jesus underwent a horrible death, as you right. Last stanza is especially effective. The church has lost its grip on people. Jesus isn't given much thought any more, in or out of church. People neglect to pray. You've made a very good statement about the state of Christianity in our times. We see Christians being persecuted in many countries. judi
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2015
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An excellent acrostic with Jesus Died On The Cross. Jesus underwent a horrible death, as you right. Last stanza is especially effective. The church has lost its grip on people. Jesus isn't given much thought any more, in or out of church. People neglect to pray. You've made a very good statement about the state of Christianity in our times. We see Christians being persecuted in many countries. judi
Comment Written 19-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
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You're welcome. judi
Comment from catch22
Hi Ine, this is a thoughtful comment on the nature of sacrifice, but unfortunately, the poem does not read like a poem. It reads like prose that is fit to a form. I do think you might want to consider using more poetic devices to give the lines some flow. If you make any edits, please let me know. I'll reread and rerate.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2015
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Hi Ine, this is a thoughtful comment on the nature of sacrifice, but unfortunately, the poem does not read like a poem. It reads like prose that is fit to a form. I do think you might want to consider using more poetic devices to give the lines some flow. If you make any edits, please let me know. I'll reread and rerate.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
