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Salute to Camp Cocoon

Camp Cocoon is a Bereavement Camp for kids 8-18 in Georgia

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Comment from Delahay
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This sounds like a wonderful place that is much needed. I cannot imagine how hard it must be for children to deal with the loss of a loved one. It is hard enough for adults but children have so much less experience in life to fall back on and help them cope.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2015
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review, for the thoughtful compassionate comments and the 5 wonderful stars that decorate the Poem. Camp Cocoon is a youth camp provided each summer by my company and over one hundred volunteers. It is not restricted to the families of our patients but open, free for kids who have suffered any loss. The expense is great but the benefit is priceless! May God Bless you.
Comment from mshirachot
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What a GREAT story. And a great idea for a non-profit. That must have been an incedible experience. Thanks for this poetic rendering of your time there.

I loved this last line: If not you, . . who? If not now, . . when? As quoted by the elder Hillel? right?

Thanks for sharing. Best wishes with the contest entry.
Blessings to you!
Marsha

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2015
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review, for the thoughtful compassionate comments and the 5 wonderful stars that decorate the Poem. Camp Cocoon is a youth camp provided each summer by my company and over one hundred volunteers. It is not restricted to the families of our patients but open, free for kids who have suffered any loss. The expense is great but the benefit is priceless! May God Bless you.
Comment from BeasPeas
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I have only 5 stars to give, but consider it 6. I've not heard of Camp Cocoon before, but what a wonderful name for it. I'm impressed by the talent and clarity it took to write your poem. Rhyming and content are great as well as your fine explanation of this organization.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2015


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2015
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review, for the thoughtful compassionate comments and the 5 wonderful stars that decorate the Poem. Camp Cocoon is a youth camp provided each summer by my company and over one hundred volunteers. It is not restricted to the families of our patients but open, free for kids who have suffered any loss. The expense is great but the benefit is priceless! May God Bless you.
reply by BeasPeas on 09-Jan-2015
    Your piece got my vote.
Comment from victor 66
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The outdoors, with many lakes and trees, has been a 'healing place' since the beginning. I could see counselors incorporating the bereaved youth and nature to make some sense of life's tragedies. I enjoyed the poem and the message. Happy New Year.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2014
    Thank you for the thoughtful compassionate comments and the 5 wonderful stars that decorate the Poem. Camp Cocoon is a youth camp provided each summer by my company and over one hundred volunteers. It is not restricted to the families of our patients but open, free for kids who have suffered any loss. The expense is great but the benefit is priceless! May God Bless you.
Comment from misscookie
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Good luck in the contest.
It sounds like a WINNER TO ME.
II BROUGHT BACK MEMORIES WHEN I FIRST WENT TO CAME. THE THINGS THAT Were Taught TO ME I WILL NEVER Forget.
THANK YOU FOR SHARING.
COOKIE

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2014
    Thank you for the thoughtful compassionate comments and the 5 wonderful stars that decorate the Poem. Camp Cocoon is a youth camp provided each summer by my company and over one hundred volunteers. It is not restricted to the families of our patients but open, free for kids who have suffered any loss. The expense is great but the benefit is priceless! May God Bless you.
reply by misscookie on 31-Dec-2014
    You are very welcome. God bless you and your staff for the wonderful work you are doing.
    Peace God be with you.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2014

    Embrace the Love from above!
reply by misscookie on 31-Dec-2014
    I go this everyday.
    Until next time.
    Cookie
Comment from robina1978
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I Iove the photo that complements your poem very well. You had the privilege of being a bereavement counselor. I can see how this must have been very rewarding.
Thanks for sharing this with us.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2014
    Thank you for the thoughtful compassionate comments and the 5 wonderful stars that decorate the Poem. Camp Cocoon is a youth camp provided each summer by my company and over one hundred volunteers. It is not restricted to the families of our patients but open, free for kids who have suffered any loss. The expense is great but the benefit is priceless! May God Bless you.
Comment from kiwisteveh
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Your poem is certainly right on the money as a tribute to this wonderful non-profit venture.

The verse is a little uneven, perhaps, due to the requirement to get details of names etc in, but I understand why you must include those.

What a wonderful idea - not one I have ever seen in other places - long may it continue in its good work.

Steve

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2014
    Thank you for the thoughtful compassionate comments and the 5 wonderful stars that decorate the Poem. Camp Cocoon is a youth camp provided each summer by my company and over one hundred volunteers. It is not restricted to the families of our patients but open, free for kids who have suffered any loss. The expense is great but the benefit is priceless! May God Bless you.
Comment from lalajovanoski
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Wowwww!!!! this was a truly intriguing read!!

I very much enjoyed this fine, well composed, inspiring piece,

Well done!
Very captivating!!

Thanks for sharing!!

this is an interesting poem - I had to read it twice to really figure it out. It is full of vivid concrete imagery

also really good symbolism


 Comment Written 30-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2014
    Thank you for the thoughtful compassionate comments and the 5 wonderful stars that decorate the Poem. Camp Cocoon is a youth camp provided each summer by my company and over one hundred volunteers. It is not restricted to the families of our patients but open, free for kids who have suffered any loss. The expense is great but the benefit is priceless! May God Bless you.
Comment from kittykatnoel
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What a cool idea? I really like your poem, it is well written and tells the story of the camp perfectly in a poem. It is an excellent entry for the contest. I believe that anything that makes things a little bit better for a child or takes even a little bit of pain or suffering away for them is something that God thinks very highly of. Thank you for sharing your writing.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2014
    Thank you for the thoughtful compassionate comments and the 5 wonderful stars that decorate the Poem. Camp Cocoon is a youth camp provided each summer by my company and over one hundred volunteers. It is not restricted to the families of our patients but open, free for kids who have suffered any loss. The expense is great but the benefit is priceless! May God Bless you.
Comment from Lovinia
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Hi Mystery Poet

A great tribute to what sounds like an excellent organisation and what a great idea. Sometimes the children get forgotten when a loved one is lost. Often the parents may be grieving themselves, and unable to find that little extra for their child. Sound like there are so many activities and a lot of caring.

You cover an interesting story, create awareness for those who may wish to help out or send a child there. Also a wonderful tribute to the founders. A great entry for the contest. I wish you the best of luck. Warm Regards - Lovinia xoxo

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2014
    Thank you for the thoughtful compassionate comments and the 5 wonderful stars that decorate the Poem. Camp Cocoon is a youth camp provided each summer by my company and over one hundred volunteers. It is not restricted to the families of our patients but open, free for kids who have suffered any loss. The expense is great but the benefit is priceless! May God Bless you.