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Book Promo: Two Tattered Hearts

A story of a young mother's fight out of an abusive marriage

47 total reviews 
Comment from write hand blue
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As a precis this rates highly.

Interesting to read as an advertisement, you provide enough details to act as a good hook so as to entice a reader of this subject, to rush out and buy (or in this case book online).

A concise, and descriptive read. :) Mel.


 Comment Written 03-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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A great book promo. I hope your book is doing well. It is a fantastic story. It addresses an important issue that deserves more attention. Take care, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
    Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from angelface2
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Wow, this sounds like a book I would like to read. I don't like violence like that, but sometimes it is good to know what happens to women like that and how they manage to get themselves free. good write, Barbara. MIss Sally

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
    Thank you for the kind review and I do hope you buy the book. There's only two areas that are graphic and you just read one.
Comment from Muffins
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This promo draws the readers attention immediately with concern for Anna's and Bobby's outcome. What you have given displays fear, pain, hopelessness, hope, change and possible a future for Anna.

The excerpt chosen is full of drama, conflict, dilemma. I would not hesitate to purchase this book.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
    Thank you for the kind review. I do hope you buy the book.
Comment from Showboat
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Excellent promo, Barbara. I loved this book so much, had a ball with it and I hope you win. You've got my vote!

Okay, paragraph starting with Bobby, remove {. Must have snuck in there from somewhere. And there's a close } after "Strip!" Oh dear, the thought occurs, have I missed something?

Hugs,
Gayle

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
    Maybe I just copied the wrong thing. I will go back and check. LOL Oh dear.
Comment from bob cullen
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Firstly congratulations on being published. Gayle and Jeff are amazing. I see Jeff produced another great cover.

From the short excerpt above, it would appear Two Tattered Hearts is an absorbing read with great contrast between characters.

Hope it sells well,

Bob,
another G & J author

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
    Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
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Stories like this are all to often true. Sometimes abuse doesn't go as far as your story does, however, any physical, emotional or verbal abuse is too much. You have written well the scenes in a home of alcohol and domestic violence.
Carolyn

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
    This is a accumulation of three women's stories that I know and fiction too. I wanted make it as real as possible. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from TheSprite
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Nasty business this abused spouse stuff. Great excerpt! Want to beat the S.O.B. myself! Sigh.

What makes a spouse so hateful? The goal is to get out without becoming a victim yet again.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
    Violence begets Violence, and the cycle continues and is rarely broken. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rtobaygo
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Hello:

Brutal, gut-wrenching, visceral action. I cannot understand why men do this. It's such an alien concept for me to wrap my head around.

Take care and stay safe,

Ray

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
    Women have also been know to abuse. We just don't hear of it as often. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from daeneam
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*Headshake. I guess husband are capable of hurting their wives because they are not able to learn/get respect and love while they are growing up. You can't reason out alcoholism for domestic violence. Violence is their choice. Great book and entry to the contest. c", Mae

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
    Thank you for the kind review.