Lord, Make Me A Fountain
spiritual (free Verse)16 total reviews
Comment from kwyattman
Yes indeed. Lord fill us that we might overflow to others. Good reminder that the blessing of God are wasted if we do not affect others with His love. Another nice poem. Hope you had a good Thanksgiving.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
Yes indeed. Lord fill us that we might overflow to others. Good reminder that the blessing of God are wasted if we do not affect others with His love. Another nice poem. Hope you had a good Thanksgiving.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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Thank you for the nice review. I did have a very nice Thanksgiving with my friend and her lovely family.
Comment from JPilcher
Pat, before I even knew you wrote this, I saw the image, and I was practically sold already!! Love your choice of background color too - but this is such a pretty and precious write... I just really think this one deserves to be centered underneath that pretty picture. That's all. :) Jill
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
Pat, before I even knew you wrote this, I saw the image, and I was practically sold already!! Love your choice of background color too - but this is such a pretty and precious write... I just really think this one deserves to be centered underneath that pretty picture. That's all. :) Jill
Comment Written 28-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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Thanks Jull for the review. I did center the poem.
Comment from c_lucas
first stanza is rough:
My suggession:
Bubbling over with love
Love for You Dear Lord
All for You Dear Lord
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Back to back love will never work.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2014
first stanza is rough:
My suggession:
Bubbling over with love
Love for You Dear Lord
All for You Dear Lord
******
Back to back love will never work.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2014
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Thanks for the review, I changed it, not what you suggested though.
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It looks good.
Comment from Dean Kuch
This lovely poetic proclamation of pure faith reads much like a modern-day psalm, Patricia.
"Praise God from whom all blessings flow.
Praise him all creatures hear below.
Praise Him above ye, Heavenly host.
Praise Father, Son, and Holy Ghost...
Amen."
Psalm 95:2-3 - Let us come before him with thanksgiving and extol him with music and song. For the LORD is the great God, the great King above all gods.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2014
This lovely poetic proclamation of pure faith reads much like a modern-day psalm, Patricia.
"Praise God from whom all blessings flow.
Praise him all creatures hear below.
Praise Him above ye, Heavenly host.
Praise Father, Son, and Holy Ghost...
Amen."
Psalm 95:2-3 - Let us come before him with thanksgiving and extol him with music and song. For the LORD is the great God, the great King above all gods.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2014
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Thank you Dean for the nice review. Blessings, Pat
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Sure, Pat. Anytime... :)
Comment from Jammer11
The layout of this poem is cool and the message is awesome. He gives us unconditional love and we need to do our best to the same. I loved it and the flow was great.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2014
The layout of this poem is cool and the message is awesome. He gives us unconditional love and we need to do our best to the same. I loved it and the flow was great.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much for the review.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Pat,
Great pix. I like the symbolism of being the fountain of blessing. Nicely interpreted.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2014
Hi, Pat,
Great pix. I like the symbolism of being the fountain of blessing. Nicely interpreted.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 28-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2014
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Thankyou Jax for the nice review.
Comment from Capricorn30
Well-penned spiritual free verse;
As waters flow from fountains, so too shall our blessings flow both from God's goodness, and our loving hearts.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
Well-penned spiritual free verse;
As waters flow from fountains, so too shall our blessings flow both from God's goodness, and our loving hearts.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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Thank you for the nice review. Blessings, Patricia
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi Pat I enjoyed reading your well written piece of spiritual poetry very much. It is very prayer-like and I like idea of God making us fountains.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
Hi Pat I enjoyed reading your well written piece of spiritual poetry very much. It is very prayer-like and I like idea of God making us fountains.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
Thank you WendyAnne for the nice review.
Comment from emrpoems
Another warm expression of love for the Lord and acceptance of His love for you.
Great choice of picture to compliment your poem
Good free verse with good use of enjambment
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
Another warm expression of love for the Lord and acceptance of His love for you.
Great choice of picture to compliment your poem
Good free verse with good use of enjambment
Comment Written 27-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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Thanks for the kind review.
Comment from misscookie
What a uplifting poem for the day
You captured my attention from the first line to the last.
I love the flow of your words.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
What a uplifting poem for the day
You captured my attention from the first line to the last.
I love the flow of your words.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 27-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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Thanks you for the kind review. Patricia
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It was my pleasure.
Until next time.
Cookie