Comment from Joe_P

Excellent

A happy poem about the moon. It isn't one of fear and condemnation. Instead. the moon is a companion working in league with the sun to provide comfort during darkness.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014

Joe, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Deborah Marie

Exceptional

Another beautifully written poem and photo used. I'm impressed with your clever use of words, flow, rhythm and progression. Everything surely does seem to build upon each other... Keep 'em coming, Deb

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014

Deb, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke

Comment from Warren Rodgers

Excellent

First the sun, now the moon, what's next he ocean? :)
Beautiful meter and rhyme as always in a cute story with great personification and a duel message floating out there. I enjoyed the read very much.
All the best, Rodger :)

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014

Thanks so much, my friend :-) Brooke

Comment from Winslow

Excellent

Dear Brooke,

Moonlight can be enchanting and a true friend, but it is more fickle than the sun. Moonbeams disappear and only return after a self induced absence.

Warm regards,

Winslow

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2014

Winslow, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke

Comment from MissMerri

Excellent

This is another adorable little poem that makes a whole lot of sense in a world of much confusion. I love the ABCB rhymes and of course your perfect meter, which makes your poems flow like silk in the breeze. This is just beautiful and sweet and charming, and I keep thinking Sawyer is someday going to be reading your beautiful poetry to his children. :p (I'd read them to my great-grandchildren if only I had a book!!!)

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014

Adonna, thank you so much, my encouraging friend :-) Brooke

Comment from Ridley Williams

Excellent

Hello Brooke,
I loved this follow-up to, "I Issued an Invitation". I have to say I enjoy the night as much as the day,(I love to sleep!) Besides, evening should get it's "moment-in-the-sun" also. Lol.
Solid rhyme and meter made for an enjoyable read...it was a pleasure, Bill

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014

Bill, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from DSMalott

Excellent

Everything about this is good.
Strong rhyming pattern.
Strong visual content and word play that created great imagery.
Nicely done.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014

Thank you, DS, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke

Comment from angelface2

Excellent

Very lovely, Brooke. I like the sun, but like watching the moon, when it is out too. That is a beautiful picture for your poem. Well done. Miss Sally

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014

Thanks so much, Miss Sally :-) Brooke

Comment from BunnyS

Excellent

Beautiful picture and poem combination. As always, your rhyming is spot on and the poem tells a wonderful story. Your poetry is almost mesmerizing, and always a pleasure to read. Great job!

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014

Bunny, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Ah, once again you delight with your wonderfully evocative poem, my friend - the moon is my friend too. There is nothing quite as beautifully serene, unless, perhaps, it is the sentiment evoked by such a lovely poem. Gorgeous!!! (Special mention for the stunning srtwork, too!)

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2014

Dawn, thank you so much :-) Brooke

reply by Dawn Munro on 05-Nov-2014

Always my pleasure - still using the library and might for some time. HACKERS!!! :((