Comment from Sankey

Excellent

Lovely tribute to an obviously wonderful life's partner my frieend. Hate the partner thing much prefer "husband" and "wife" Appreciate the idea for a poem from me as well. Nice meeting your inspiration mate.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014

My partner used in the poem is the proper use, the sharing equality we enjoy! I agree that calling someone a partner is justifying the lack of covenantal agreement that reflects Christ's covenant with His church. It is so important, and trivialised these days, well done, bro, great review, blessings, Geoff, Roy.

reply by Sankey on 01-Nov-2014

Did not mean to question use of partner in the poem mate I think you know that. Lord Bless

Comment from Linda England Bonam

Excellent

What an absolutely beautiful tribute to your wife! She sounds like someone who we would all like to meet! You are a very lucky man, and she is lucky, too, to have someone write something this perfect, for her! I am out of sixes, or you would get one!

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014

Thank you Linda for this outstanding review and comments, my wife and I appreciate them, blessings, Roy.

Comment from brentman99

Excellent

A nice poem that reveals your deep feelings, which is a nice touch. The poem flows well and says it all. Thanks for sharing, Brent.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014

Thanks Brent for the lovely comments and review, blessings Roy.

Comment from James Dooney

Excellent

Very nice poem written in dedication to your wife. I am sure she is every bit as good a person as you write her out to be here. Well done !

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014

Thanks James, for this lovely review and comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from donnadiann

Excellent

Tremendous loving tone here with adoration for your wife. her smile is so representative of all you say. Nice rhyming lines. One suggestion, or maybe two: don't capitalize Godly on first stanza, but do capitalize Son as in God's Son...last verse:) Really nice poem.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014

Thank you for the lovely review and the kind and accurate suggestion, I appreciate them! Blessings, will fix them up!

Comment from Marisa3

Excellent

A lovely tribute to an obviously beautiful spirit. You are truly blessed to have this special love in your life. So nice that you have chosen to honor her in this very beautiful poem.

Marisa

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014

Thank you for this most lovely review and comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from honeytree

Excellent

I love this poem so much

the words and art work is so very special indeed.

Love is giving and sharing within our lives.

Wonderful to read.

honey tree

I have no six

I have no six

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014

Thank you so much for this most beautifully honouring response I could ever ask for! Blessings Roy.

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hi Roy. Well this woman can never get enough of a grand love story! Your devotion and heartfelt love for this woman clearly comes through in this write! Bravo! xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014

Thank you so much for this most beautiful review and comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Caressa_08

Excellent

Happiness is seen on your Dear Wife's face..Smiling, & showing that she appreciates her life...I hope her birthday & sure by the way she is blessed & your poetry exhibits that, it was a Jolly Good One.

Thanks for Sharing,,,It was as Excellent Read!

Caressa

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014

She is everything I have written and more, Caressa, a man couldn't ask for more! Thank you for this beautiful review, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

Excellent

Happy Birthday dear Elaine,
You must be so pleased at receiving this poem of love from your sweet husband Roy. Larry is many things to me, but has never written a poem. This one is summed up in the last verse and is not only appropriate to the occasion but is what we all should strive for. That unbreakable bond in Christ .
Happiness always,
Carolyn

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014

I'm sure Larry would write a poem if he could, you are a delight to me, how much more to him, great review, Elaine is overwhelmed by the response, thank you Dear sister, blessings, Roy.

reply by Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens on 03-Nov-2014

So glad Elaine was pleased, I truly feel as if I know you. Take care, :-) Carolyn