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The Witches Cauldren

Contest Entry

24 total reviews 
Comment from l.raven
Exceptional
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OMG Michael, how do you ever think of stuff like this...LOL...I don't know where to start...I loved it all...and Elvira yet...I used to love watching the sy-fi movies with her... a great write you...soooooooooo very well thought of...and very well put on paper...luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

Comment from country ranch writer
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LEAVE IT TO YOU TO PICK DADS FAVORITE ELVIRA, THAT IS THE ONLY REASON HE WOULD WATCH CREATURE FEATURE. HE LIKED LOOKING AT THOSE BOOBS

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

Comment from Darkhorse555
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really love how you drew this mikey most delightful piece of writing very enjoyable read dear friend always a pleasure your pieces pal thumbs up

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2014

Comment from K. Lorraine
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Superb! I loved the satire. Very entertaining. Great imagination and a better reality game show that appears on TV right now. Good job....

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2014

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This meets the requirements well. It was creative to use politicians and was funny in places, it just seemed to mirror the other game show theme rather than stand on its own. Thank you for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2014

Comment from gypsycaravan
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How in the world did you get released from the funny farm long enough to write this epistle, mikey? This is hysterical. Where in the world does your mind wander? LOL Terrific.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2014

Comment from robina1978
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A nice entry this story for the contest. I liked the combination of reality and fantasy a lot. Wished I'd been there. Best wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2014

Comment from honeytree
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Very interesting words to read and quite imaginative.

The art work I feel was good for these words.

I liked the following

"The mummy came shuffling up preceded by a stench that was hard to believe."

honey tree

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2014

Comment from Donya Quijote
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Interesting story. I feel like I took a "trip" with Lucy in the sky with Diamonds. What an imagination you have.

Two things. I think I found some spelling errors. Cauldren in the title and the raison (reason, I think). Might want to give it second look to be sure the digits hit the right keys. Fun read...

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2014

Comment from nelliesellie
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I love the picture. I love the show. Reality is the scary thing in this society. Politicians are the most frightful. I love the way you played on their vices. Great Work.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2014