Pickles and Ketchup
a love poem for Sawyer151 total reviews
Comment from lakeport
Pickles and ketchup,indeed little Sawyer seem to enjoy that,
that's a delicious story poem. Nice rhyming, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!lakeport.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014
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Pickles and ketchup,indeed little Sawyer seem to enjoy that,
that's a delicious story poem. Nice rhyming, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!lakeport.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014
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Erich, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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you are very welcome,Hugs!lakeport.
Comment from LoveLifeKnight
ooooo sawyer is soo big. i could almost cry look at that!! beautiful love poem. i am so glad there are so many kinds of love, almost as many as waves on the sea!
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2014
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ooooo sawyer is soo big. i could almost cry look at that!! beautiful love poem. i am so glad there are so many kinds of love, almost as many as waves on the sea!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2014
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Angela, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from michaelcahill
I can always count on you to pull me out of the sugary malaise of love soaked tomes that are churned out for this contest! Whew. This is so perfectly flowing. I can't help but smile and commit to trying some pickles and ketchup. Can't argue with his formula for happiness! mikey
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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I can always count on you to pull me out of the sugary malaise of love soaked tomes that are churned out for this contest! Whew. This is so perfectly flowing. I can't help but smile and commit to trying some pickles and ketchup. Can't argue with his formula for happiness! mikey
Comment Written 09-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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Thanks so much, Mikey - yeah, I'm not into that kind of syrupy sweet stuff either :-) Brooke
Comment from DSMalott
So enjoyable.
All of those 'favorite things' were placed with well timed rhymes and clever word connections that offered strong emotional language. This gave the piece a tender touch with warm humor.
Great.
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So enjoyable.
All of those 'favorite things' were placed with well timed rhymes and clever word connections that offered strong emotional language. This gave the piece a tender touch with warm humor.
Great.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
Comment from Gracie619
Fantastic! How adorably cute is he! This poem and the picture just go together hand-in-hand (with you, too!). I was smiling and chuckling to myself the whole way through. Had to read it again just for fun. As I am reading this during my work day (shhhh....), the break for a smile is truly appreciated.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
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Fantastic! How adorably cute is he! This poem and the picture just go together hand-in-hand (with you, too!). I was smiling and chuckling to myself the whole way through. Had to read it again just for fun. As I am reading this during my work day (shhhh....), the break for a smile is truly appreciated.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
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Glad you had fun - thanks so much, Gracie. I am not telling LOL
Comment from TamzinWhite
What a happy poem!
I like the picture of the little boy and the words you use in third stanza: 'pants with a pocket, locks with a key...' before you go on to turn it into lovey doveness, the pocket and key remind me of 'what little boys are made of poem'.
So even though your poem gets quite into loving cuddles and such, I'm still thinking about little boys and their fun.
Cutesy, love it!
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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What a happy poem!
I like the picture of the little boy and the words you use in third stanza: 'pants with a pocket, locks with a key...' before you go on to turn it into lovey doveness, the pocket and key remind me of 'what little boys are made of poem'.
So even though your poem gets quite into loving cuddles and such, I'm still thinking about little boys and their fun.
Cutesy, love it!
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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Thanks so much, Tamzin :-) Brooke
Comment from James Dooney
Oh this is a nice little work here indeed. Your words provoke quite vivid images here Brooke. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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Oh this is a nice little work here indeed. Your words provoke quite vivid images here Brooke. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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James, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from dennis4242
A very thought provoking poem about the things in life.
Some of the stuff we all seem to take for granted. Yet it is a very nice poem. Very good.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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A very thought provoking poem about the things in life.
Some of the stuff we all seem to take for granted. Yet it is a very nice poem. Very good.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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Dennis, thank you so much :-) I appreciate your generous six stars :-) Brooke
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A nice fun rhyming poem full of his favourite things. Full of smiles, giggles and laughter a really cheery poem, Brooke. Good luck in the contest.
valda
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A nice fun rhyming poem full of his favourite things. Full of smiles, giggles and laughter a really cheery poem, Brooke. Good luck in the contest.
valda
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
Comment from Melspoems
Wow, Sawyer has grown up lots since I was last here. He is gorgeous Brooke!
Lovely poem about the important companions to things in the little mans life, written with nice flow and rhymes.
My Mikey used to have mint jelly on everything.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
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Wow, Sawyer has grown up lots since I was last here. He is gorgeous Brooke!
Lovely poem about the important companions to things in the little mans life, written with nice flow and rhymes.
My Mikey used to have mint jelly on everything.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
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Mel, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem. Yep, he is now 29 months and growing by leaps and bounds :-) Brooke
