Comment from Sasha

Excellent

This is an excellent love poem and a terrific entry for this contest. Beautifully written, flows smoothly and excellent rhyme. I wish you all the best.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2014

Thanks, Sasha.

A little more mushy than my usual - let's hope the judges are in a mellow mood.

Steve

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Your love poem says it all. I'm sure the one you love is pleased with such a beautiful poem. Good luck in the contest.
teresa

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2014

Thanks, Teresa.

Yes SWMBO was pretty chuffed with the sweet words.

Steve

Comment from Sarah Butterfly

Exceptional

Wonderful entry into the contest. The rhyme is unforced, enhancing the flow of the poem. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.

Kind regards

Sarah

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2014

Thanks, Sarah - glad you enjoyed. And thanks for the six stars, too.

Steve

reply by Sarah Butterfly on 07-Oct-2014

You're welcome!

Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

Excellent entry for the love poem contest, well-crafted and truly lovely. I wish you the best of luck with contest and God Bless!

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2014

Thanks again.

Steve

Comment from thee-name

Exceptional

Excellent poem. Everything about it is excellent.
I LOVE YOU MORE THEN SPRING TIME
WHEN THE SWEET FLOWERS BLOOM.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2014

Thank you once again!

Steve

reply by thee-name on 07-Oct-2014

THANK YOU!

Comment from BLACKDYKE

Excellent

Well kiwi' you can't get more romantic
than that, or can you? A picture of roses
round the door and doves in the belfry.
Sooooo sooooo loving and long lasting. I
wonder if you are the subject of an ever
lasting commitment> Eric

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2014

And just to be different a mushy-soppy piece - never know what these judges are going to like!

Thanks again.

Steve

reply by BLACKDYKE on 08-Oct-2014

So true, my pleasure

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

A lovely entry for the Love poem contest. It reads like you love this person more than anything on earth and I would say that this is an important thing in a relationship, within reason. You have written some very nice phrases in abab rhyme and I wish you Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2014

Thanks, Dorothy.

One of the Marx brothers said, 'If you can fake sincerity, you've got it made.'

Steve

reply by Dorothy Farrell on 07-Oct-2014

LOL - I agree - and sometimes it's necessary D

Comment from Oatmeal

Excellent

kiwisteveh,

You did a wonderful job with the challenge that was presented to you. The theme was good. The flow was smooth. The rhyming was very well done. The picture was nice.

There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014

And thank you again for the second review in a row.

Steve

Comment from Dom G Robles

Excellent

The love evoked by the writer to her loved one is straight forward, She says I love you more than fireflies, more than windy days, more than ocean's crashing waves... She had chosen word poem is simple, clear and understandable. The picture of a lady along the shore looking at the blue waters of the ocean supplements the theme.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014

Thanks, Dom.

Steve

Comment from manicblue

Excellent

This is a beautifully descriptive poem about how love conquers all. Without nature, we can't know who we are, such as windy days, crashing waves, wildflowers and moonbeams. It made me feel good. I wish you well in this contest.
Lucretia xx

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014

Thanks, Lucretia

Steve