Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem. You did a good job expressing your feelings. So many believe love dies as you age. But your poem states the way it should be. Good job. No changes. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014

Thank you for the lovely comments to this poem.

Comment from ravenblack

Excellent

Sun' s scraps wrap us - great line, obviously not the sun of youth where everything blazes, more akin to sunset tying in with age. But when those crow lines merge, if you can still see the color, age is never old. Great love poem . A relief from reading the saccharine-sweet , typical love poem.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014

Thank you for such a nice review!

Comment from Dawny53

Excellent

I love the form taken to write this entry.. I'm especially drawn to this write probably because of my age, and I appreciate the writers emotions so much, very well written. I have a feeling I may know who wrote it.. how exciting, can't wait to find out!

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014

Thank you Dawny53. Lovely comments, blessings.

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

read something about last meeting places on the beach of a tumid river. The last part of your free verse calls that to
mind...excellent post...

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014

Thank you for reading my work and the excellent comments.

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

Love occurs at any age. Some may think older people have fallen out of that, but your poem of enamored lips shows passion. Beautifully written. Les

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014

Thank you for the great comments, Les.

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

Lovely, Amada. ''the farthest shore is here''. Beautiful the lines, truth the essence of its core.

silky and smooth.
A lovely write.

My best wishes,
Rgstar

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014

Thank you Ron for the great review!

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I am seventy-one and enjoyed your love poem and focus on a bit of "seduction". Your "scraps of sun" and "farthest shore" are evocative phrases. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014

Wow! Joan, thank you for the lovely review and details. So sweet...

reply by Joan E. on 01-Oct-2014

My pleasure--I always enjoy your original work. Hugs- Joan

Comment from pipersfancy

Excellent

I thought this was lovely! I've read several reviewers who seemed perplexed by your "sun's scraps wrap us" line... but I immediately felt a warmth about those words, and envisioned a couple walking hand-in-hand along a beach, or perhaps sitting side-by-side, wrapped in each others arms on the shore, as the last rays of a beautiful sunset sparked romance for the coming evening. Ah... romance!

Anyway, I find this beautifully passionate and filled with lovely imagery!

Good luck with this in the contest!

PF

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014

Thank you, thank you specially for getting the rift on the sun's wrap, :-) Romance never gets old, if we are lucky, or work at it.

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hi, Amada. Hope all is well with you. This is a fine piece of romantic poetry. ?As usual you capture the essence of the action so very well. Blessings. Be back soon. Bob

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014

Hi Bob, thank you. Nice!

Comment from flamingstar

Excellent

I think the last two lines were really interesting but I didn't understand "As long as sun's scraps wrap us." All I can say is, I'm so happy being single:)

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014

Thank you for reading my poem anyway...