Love Binds
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Comment from Kingsrookviii
Wow Pili, I love the congruency between your first words and the picture. You have crafted a masterpiece in this poem. I simply cannot tell you enough how much I like it. Take good care, my friend. Bruce.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2014
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Wow Pili, I love the congruency between your first words and the picture. You have crafted a masterpiece in this poem. I simply cannot tell you enough how much I like it. Take good care, my friend. Bruce.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2014
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Wow, what an encouraging review plus six stars, you humble me. Hugs
Comment from Kingsland
This is a short piece of poetic art with a very good last stanza. That stanza just stood out for me in this excellent piece of poetry. I enjoyed reading and writing this response for it... John
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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This is a short piece of poetic art with a very good last stanza. That stanza just stood out for me in this excellent piece of poetry. I enjoyed reading and writing this response for it... John
Comment Written 09-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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Thank you much John for a terrific comment. Pili
Comment from adewpearl
lovely alliteration in
sing softly sighs spread
I love the concrete image of the crumpled flower to go with the melancholic sadness
Brooke
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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lovely alliteration in
sing softly sighs spread
I love the concrete image of the crumpled flower to go with the melancholic sadness
Brooke
Comment Written 03-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Thank you so very much BROOKE.
Comment from LIJ Red
The sad and solemn air of this makes me wonder why you didn't call it the Love-bound blues. I'm joking, of course.
Did you mean sighs spread gently? Excellent writing.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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The sad and solemn air of this makes me wonder why you didn't call it the Love-bound blues. I'm joking, of course.
Did you mean sighs spread gently? Excellent writing.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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Thank you for a great comment and the correction. Big smiles. Pili
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem.
It is a perfect match,
I love how your words flow It expresses that love that is in the air.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem.
It is a perfect match,
I love how your words flow It expresses that love that is in the air.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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Thank you so very much ... Pili
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You're very welcome, until next time.
Cookie
Comment from robina1978
This painting/artwork is absolutely beautiful, and complements your poem extremely well. A very good entry for the love poem contest. Best wishes for it.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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This painting/artwork is absolutely beautiful, and complements your poem extremely well. A very good entry for the love poem contest. Best wishes for it.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much INE, great review. Enjoy your day. Pili
Comment from reconciled
Sorry I'm late....Hey beauty Tree....-smile-...when evening comes covering missing in melancholy and counted wishes add up to spent wind, let memory remind you of all the love gifted and given in the shade of your life's leaves...no doubt....gravity is weightless in the space therein......love lives forever Pili.....Always I love you ...Michael
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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Sorry I'm late....Hey beauty Tree....-smile-...when evening comes covering missing in melancholy and counted wishes add up to spent wind, let memory remind you of all the love gifted and given in the shade of your life's leaves...no doubt....gravity is weightless in the space therein......love lives forever Pili.....Always I love you ...Michael
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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You are a sweetheart... Thanks, smiles, love....
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how are you...you get out today...? you're probably still out...haha...love-
Comment from flamingstar
I think every love poem I've read is tainted with sadness, which is sad. It shouldn't all be sad. But it's true that love definitely binds us, one to the other, forever.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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I think every love poem I've read is tainted with sadness, which is sad. It shouldn't all be sad. But it's true that love definitely binds us, one to the other, forever.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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Thank you so very much ... Pili
Comment from tbacha58
love binds us
like gravity
forever.
Wow Pili, you don't write much, but when you do write, its a magical poem, so sure whoever read this amazing piece, felt a different heart beat. Your depth rises to the surface, and that is who you are, that loving lady. Love u Terry xoxo
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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love binds us
like gravity
forever.
Wow Pili, you don't write much, but when you do write, its a magical poem, so sure whoever read this amazing piece, felt a different heart beat. Your depth rises to the surface, and that is who you are, that loving lady. Love u Terry xoxo
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you my dear friend, wonderful supportive comment and shiny star..... Love Pili
Comment from Starlight's Edge
Hi, there,
I really like this entry, particularly the emotion I could feel through your words, and the alliteration. I really like alliteration, metaphors and emotion in every poem.
The conclusion was great, and so true :)
The best of luck x
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Hi, there,
I really like this entry, particularly the emotion I could feel through your words, and the alliteration. I really like alliteration, metaphors and emotion in every poem.
The conclusion was great, and so true :)
The best of luck x
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Wonderful comment, thank you so much . Pili
