BLAZE: Angel from Hell
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Blaze Battles Lucifer"Blaze is one of Lucifer's demons, a fallen angel.
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Comment from nancyjam
Well she tried to talk him out of going but at
least she can warn Ginger.
Great dialogue between them - Luke really is clueless.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Well she tried to talk him out of going but at
least she can warn Ginger.
Great dialogue between them - Luke really is clueless.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Thanks again, Nancy. Looks like only you and I are here now..Sunday afternoons are slow. I have dinner in the oven... fifteen more minutes till I get to eat "breakfast" in late afternoon. Well, I AM trying to lose weight. :)
Comment from forestport12
Interestingy conflicting dynamics between Blaze and Luke. I know if I was trying to change the mind of Satan, I'd be scared out of my wits and would show fear on my face. I really liked the part about how, Blaze contorted her face like it was an exam. I really got that picture and it carried me through the whole interchange.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Interestingy conflicting dynamics between Blaze and Luke. I know if I was trying to change the mind of Satan, I'd be scared out of my wits and would show fear on my face. I really liked the part about how, Blaze contorted her face like it was an exam. I really got that picture and it carried me through the whole interchange.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much for reading, Stan. Wait till you see the body Lucifer chooses and where he finds it. :)
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I finally got BLAZE edited and on Amazon. It's the last book with Lucifer as the Devil, the one where Blaze became an Earth Agent to take the place of Ginger. She turned the senator into a short clown, remember? Anyway, if you do and would like to leave a review,
Comment from Teri7
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Another great chapter you have penned. I enjoyed reading this very much. You are so creative in this story, great imagery. hugs, teri
Comment Written 03-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Thanks, Teri. :)
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I finally got BLAZE edited and on Amazon. It's the last book with Lucifer as the Devil, the one where Blaze became an Earth Agent to take the place of Ginger. She turned the senator into a short clown, remember? Anyway, if you do and would like to leave a review,
Comment from ravenblack
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With all those pumps in his robo- suit, I am sure Luke , though eons old, never has need of Viagra lol. Funny how Blaze is able to manipulate him by appealing to his "wisdom". Butt your sweet butt- but...hilarious line.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Thanks so much, Ed. Good to see you. :)
Comment from Fridayauthor
Very fine writing as usual! I really enjoyed the banter back and forth here.
This piece is easy to read and easy to understand.
thank you!
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Very fine writing as usual! I really enjoyed the banter back and forth here.
This piece is easy to read and easy to understand.
thank you!
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Thank you so verrry much for the six stars. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Comment from Sasha
I am sure it was intentional...at least I hope it was...but you had me laughing all the way through this one. You did a terrific job with the dialogue and now I am anxious to see what happens at the wedding, now that Lucifer is not going (Thank goodness).
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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I am sure it was intentional...at least I hope it was...but you had me laughing all the way through this one. You did a terrific job with the dialogue and now I am anxious to see what happens at the wedding, now that Lucifer is not going (Thank goodness).
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much. Oops.. guess I didn't make that clear enough. Luke IS going to the church wedding. Blaze got out of having to go with him, though.
Comment from Cindy Warren
Something tells me that Luke won't do so well in a church, no matter what pill he takes or what kind of barrier spray he uses. He's the devil, after all. One thing's for sure, this is going to be an interesting wedding. Will Tara and Father Murphy spot him, after Blaze's warning?
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Something tells me that Luke won't do so well in a church, no matter what pill he takes or what kind of barrier spray he uses. He's the devil, after all. One thing's for sure, this is going to be an interesting wedding. Will Tara and Father Murphy spot him, after Blaze's warning?
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Thank you, Cindy. Frankly, Luke will be hard to miss at the wedding. LOL! :)
Comment from boxergirl
Blaze is off to a good start and it seems she will be a formidable match for Mr. Luke. More humorous dialogue from Luke to show off his "charming" personality. Can't wait to see where this is going.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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Blaze is off to a good start and it seems she will be a formidable match for Mr. Luke. More humorous dialogue from Luke to show off his "charming" personality. Can't wait to see where this is going.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much. I wish the Devil were as dumb as my version of him. He seems to be making a lot of progress in the world lately. :)
Comment from Leineco
(Before I forget again. . .on the Characters (carried over) background - you didn't write anything about Blaze! )
Off to a good start :-) I already get the impression Blaze is going to be entertaining ;-)
(and Luke is his same usual egoist LOL)
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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(Before I forget again. . .on the Characters (carried over) background - you didn't write anything about Blaze! )
Off to a good start :-) I already get the impression Blaze is going to be entertaining ;-)
(and Luke is his same usual egoist LOL)
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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Thanks so much, Lorraine. Oops! I guess I didn't mention Blaze. But I talked about her being Ginger's best friend in Hell, I think. People will see a lot of her. :)
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I finally got BLAZE edited and on Amazon. It's the last book with Lucifer as the Devil, the one where Blaze became an Earth Agent to take the place of Ginger. She turned the senator into a short clown, remember? Anyway, if you do and would like to leave a review,
Comment from Curly Girly
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Lucifer is making plans to interfere at Ginger's wedding. Blaze is uncomfortable with his ideas, and she has dared to tell him 'No.' Blaze is not off to a good start with her evil boss.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thanks again. Blaze was Ginger's friend in Hell for a verrrry long time, and neither of them have any respect for Lucifer, so who knows how long she will remain loyal... she already tried to stop him from making trouble at the wedding. But now she'll try a new approach.
