Texas Dream Catcher
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "CHAPTER SIETE; PART DOS"Drug & human trafficking, can romance win?
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Comment from irishauthorme
Been gone a while, still catching up. Last review was at chapter 11. Read 12, and jumped to 13. Interesting history(And Accurate)about the Bison, we have a local herd where I live here in Wyoming. Sad but true about starving out the American Indians by killing off their food supply.
This is a good action chapter.
irish
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2014
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Been gone a while, still catching up. Last review was at chapter 11. Read 12, and jumped to 13. Interesting history(And Accurate)about the Bison, we have a local herd where I live here in Wyoming. Sad but true about starving out the American Indians by killing off their food supply.
This is a good action chapter.
irish
Comment Written 11-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2014
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I am so sorry you had to read this with no money attached. I do appreciate it.
Comment from padumachitta
Hi...I had a bumper sticker when I was in my twenties, it read 'When I grow up I wanna be a cowgirl'...my truck got 'keyed' a lot. But i kept it there and stuck it out...she will too.
I like where this is going. I am enjoying it. You have a well written story that is engaing to read.
padumachitta
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Hi...I had a bumper sticker when I was in my twenties, it read 'When I grow up I wanna be a cowgirl'...my truck got 'keyed' a lot. But i kept it there and stuck it out...she will too.
I like where this is going. I am enjoying it. You have a well written story that is engaing to read.
padumachitta
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Comment from Sasha
The note she got makes me wonder if it is just a ruse to make her think the trouble is from people that don't what her around or of it may really be the drug traffickers? this one gave me a lot to think about.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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The note she got makes me wonder if it is just a ruse to make her think the trouble is from people that don't what her around or of it may really be the drug traffickers? this one gave me a lot to think about.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Thanks for the pleasure of another enjoyable chapter that sets the stage for a battle of wills, and I'd be shocked if Soni is the type to be pushed too far. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Thanks for the pleasure of another enjoyable chapter that sets the stage for a battle of wills, and I'd be shocked if Soni is the type to be pushed too far. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Hey, great chapter. Tried to read last night, but my computer was being funky and wouldn't type. Some days are just that way. My phone is possessed by by demons, too. Isn't technology grand. hope your week is going well, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Hey, great chapter. Tried to read last night, but my computer was being funky and wouldn't type. Some days are just that way. My phone is possessed by by demons, too. Isn't technology grand. hope your week is going well, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. I'm not to fond of technology myself.
Comment from James Dooney
I liked what you have given us here. I am not so familiar with the story of Bison, so I learned some new things here ! well done !
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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I liked what you have given us here. I am not so familiar with the story of Bison, so I learned some new things here ! well done !
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
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Comment from chasennov
Chapter 13 of the book Texas Dream Catcher The threat of fire caused the stampede. "CHAPTER SIETE; PART DOS" Absolutely loved this Romance Fiction chapter you have created here, Barbara. Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Chapter 13 of the book Texas Dream Catcher The threat of fire caused the stampede. "CHAPTER SIETE; PART DOS" Absolutely loved this Romance Fiction chapter you have created here, Barbara. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. You're sweet.
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You are most welcome, gorgeous.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
Now the mystery deepens. As suspected the stampeeds were started by humans and now a mysterious warning letter confirms that the incidents were intended as warnings.
Although the warning letter seems to be based on prejudice, I don't think it makes much sense. I realize that women are rarely ranch owners, but certainly not a reason for concern. Some people might harbor racial prejudice, but Soni has been around a long time and would hardly be a problem for other ranchers.
Is someone trying to force Soni out so some or all of the ranch can be converted to nefarious activities? In any case, I think Soni is trying too hard to be independent as she fails to report the warning to the sheriff or Texas Rangers, just as she chose to not have Jim investigated?
I did think that Soni's explanation about the American bison, while interesting, was of little value to the story, because most readers will be well aware that the term 'buffalo' is accepted by most Americans.
I still enjoy your story with its excellent dialog and back story. It is certainly moving faster, One suggestion would be to show Soni and Alex actually finding where the fires had been started and perhaps the action related to turning the bison away fron the reservation. It is a matter of showing rather than just tell. You still have my love and Irish Hugs to keep the story moving forward,
Roger
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Hi Barbara:)
Now the mystery deepens. As suspected the stampeeds were started by humans and now a mysterious warning letter confirms that the incidents were intended as warnings.
Although the warning letter seems to be based on prejudice, I don't think it makes much sense. I realize that women are rarely ranch owners, but certainly not a reason for concern. Some people might harbor racial prejudice, but Soni has been around a long time and would hardly be a problem for other ranchers.
Is someone trying to force Soni out so some or all of the ranch can be converted to nefarious activities? In any case, I think Soni is trying too hard to be independent as she fails to report the warning to the sheriff or Texas Rangers, just as she chose to not have Jim investigated?
I did think that Soni's explanation about the American bison, while interesting, was of little value to the story, because most readers will be well aware that the term 'buffalo' is accepted by most Americans.
I still enjoy your story with its excellent dialog and back story. It is certainly moving faster, One suggestion would be to show Soni and Alex actually finding where the fires had been started and perhaps the action related to turning the bison away fron the reservation. It is a matter of showing rather than just tell. You still have my love and Irish Hugs to keep the story moving forward,
Roger
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Comment from L.M.Mullins
Excellent rise and fall of tension over the stampede, only to have the tension resurrected by the letter. Only fault I can find in todays post is having to wait for the next post.
LM
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Excellent rise and fall of tension over the stampede, only to have the tension resurrected by the letter. Only fault I can find in todays post is having to wait for the next post.
LM
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
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Comment from Curly Girly
I saw AJ editor! Too cute!
I hope Soni is not making a mistake by keeping the spiteful letter to herself. If anything happens to her... nobody would know that she was threatened.
No typos spotted.
Have you ever tasted bison?
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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I saw AJ editor! Too cute!
I hope Soni is not making a mistake by keeping the spiteful letter to herself. If anything happens to her... nobody would know that she was threatened.
No typos spotted.
Have you ever tasted bison?
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. Me too.
