Comment from JTStone

Excellent

I actually, honestly love this!
I followed your advice to me and spent some time cruising your archives--girl, you are a prolific writer. Yes I was totally wrong, you have some amazing skills. You have a vivid imagination and the extreme capability to put it down on paper (Screen, whatever). I am impressed with your work.

Secondly, I want to give a sincere apology. I am sorry.
I was drunk the night I wrote the first review, and hung-over when I scribbled the apology.
Seriously, it was a blind contest and I thought it was a guy that wrote your story. Not that it would make it right. It's just I wouldn't have said that to a woman...
JT

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2015

Thank you very much for reading this, JT. I was rather harsh in my reply to you, so let me apologize for my abruptness. Now, I hope we can be friends, okay? :)

I will be writing some short stories about Luke and his kingdom of Hell. He was my favorite character of all time, I think, since he's such a total buffoon, dumb as a stump, but mean as any devil can be. I wrote three books, a trilogy, about Ginger and Luke, and that was enough. I still miss the cast tho, and now even have a fondness for the Devil... my harmless, incompetent version anyway. :)

reply by JTStone on 14-Sep-2015

It's kind of ironic Phyllis; I wrote a several volumes of work and 'Luke' is my main character...small world.
I'll look for your writing in the future.
JT

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2015

Your Luke is a man, right? NOt Lucifer the Devil, I hope. Does that include novels? Volumes... I suppose so. :)

reply by JTStone on 14-Sep-2015

He's the angel Lucifer. But keep that a secret, everyone who hs reviewed has been guessing who it might be.
JT
PS, love big red button...

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2015

Now that IS a coincidence. Is it in your portfolio?

reply by JTStone on 14-Sep-2015

yeah, it's called The Angel of the Apocalypse.

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2015

Just read and reviewed it. Good job!

reply by Anonymous Member on 17-Sep-2015

yeah, it's called The Angel of the Apocalypse.

reply by Anonymous Member on 17-Sep-2015

He's the angel Lucifer. But keep that a secret, everyone who hs reviewed has been guessing who it might be.
JT
PS, love big red button...

reply by Anonymous Member on 17-Sep-2015

It's kind of ironic Phyllis; I wrote a several volumes of work and 'Luke' is my main character...small world.
I'll look for your writing in the future.
JT

Comment from Jennpenn

Excellent

I am new to this site, and just reading your writing now. This story is creative, an easy read, and just plain fun. I like the premise, and I'm already enjoying the lively exchange between Luke and Blaze.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2015

Thank you so much, Jenna. Welcome to FanStory.It's nice to meet you.

This is the third book in a trilogy. The previous two are also on the site: Snapshots and Demon. Demon tells the story of the demon Ginger, who becomes Tara when she is redeemed. Blaze doesn't think SHE is redeemable, however, since other demons have always told her she was a member of Lucifer's rebellion against God. Ginger was not, but was tricked by Lucifer.

I hope you enjoy reading it. No need to review all those old chapters if you continue, since they're only worth two cents now. Just enjoy it. :)

Comment from Annette Gulliver

Excellent

You have a great imagination. I could feel the heat from the fires down below as I read. They seem very organised.

now one with my reading,
Annette

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015

Thanks so much for reading, Annette. Of course you need not review any of the old chapters. I hope you enjoy the story. :)

Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

Phyllis, so sorry I've fallen behind and hope to catch up on the story today.
Mary's wedding took up a lot of my FS time.
I like Blaze's loyalty to Ginger/Tara. she is not afraid
to put Luke in his place which I hope will help when he shows
up at the wedding. Nancy

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014

Thank you so much for catching up on the book.... it's really early and I'm not posting every day this time, since I have company coming to stay a while... coming Saturday and we're cleaning the house for the first time in years. I know I can't get it all done, so I know what you mean about being busy.

So you did a wedding book for Mary? Is it online somewhere for us to see? Sounds like a lot of work, but a lot of fun, too! :)

reply by nancyjam on 05-Oct-2014

No not a wedding book - just the poem I posted here.
I gave it to them framed.

reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014

What a sweet thing to do! I'll bet they loved it. I printed and framed a poem for my mom about my dad once. She treasured it. :)

Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

HI Phyllis,

I've been off FS for almost two weeks. I HAD to take a peek at the first chapter I missed.

Your riotous imagination knows no bounds, my dear!

Well done!

Sonali

ps. We had a great FS friends' gathering last week. Hope you'll be able to make it down here sometime. :)


looked at the worn, stained (comma not needed here) leather beneath her and moved

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014

Thanks, Sonali. Glad you all had a good time. Good to see you. :)

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

Hopefully within my schedule I'll be able to keep up with your third in this trilogy (?) and not fall so far behind as before.

Do Luke plans to interfere in gingers wedding... And Blaze is the new Ginger I guess I'll have to wait on that. Good beginning, just starting to set the stage.

Looking forward to some more. John

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014

Thank you very much, John. Glad you got a chance to read a chapter. :)

Comment from Dustybones

Excellent

Good presentation of the terms and characters. Hellevator wow.
Reminds me of a writer, Jim Butcher's series of a wizzard and secrets. Good start.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014

Thank you so much. This is the third and final book of the series... just kept going and going and going and ended up in Heaven and in Hell both. All started with ONE short story about a magic camera. You just never know where a story will go. I swear they're alive! LOL! :)

Comment from onebrit

Excellent

So this is new and interesting. It's a twist on an old tale, and has lots of fun involved. I know I just read the second part, so backwards I am reading it....but now am on track. A compelling read.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014

Thank you so much, Brit. I'm glad you like what you've seen so far. :)

Comment from chasennov

Excellent

Chapter 1 of the book BLAZE: Firebrand from Hell BLAZE: Firebrand from Hell "A Brand New Novel" This is an excellent chapter you have created here, Phyllis, and I enjoyed the read very much.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014

THank you so much, Chase. :)

reply by chasennov on 01-Oct-2014

You are most welcome, Phyllis.

Comment from crystal brandon

Excellent

hi im crystal Brandon,.im an newmeber on fanstory.com,.uh I just read and reviewd your story on fanstory.com and I thought that your story was wickedawesome and down too earth cool,.youre anvery good writer,.i like how you write stories anyway im giving you five starsok,.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014

Hi, Crystal. Nice to meet you. Thank you so much for reading and the nice comments and stars. :)