College Daze
Do you remember those hot days?20 total reviews
Comment from michaelcahill
This was one of the most believable encounters of this kind I have read in a long time. Perfectly written. The dialogue was excellent and sounded like things that people would say under the circumstances and the actions were too. Top of the line. mikey
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2014
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This was one of the most believable encounters of this kind I have read in a long time. Perfectly written. The dialogue was excellent and sounded like things that people would say under the circumstances and the actions were too. Top of the line. mikey
Comment Written 24-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2014
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Thank you very much
Comment from nomi338
Damn! To be young, virile and free again. This hot little episode reminds me of too many missed opportunities where I gave in to fear of the unknown or poor timing. Now I'm an old man with nothing but memories and regrets. This was some story, I enjoyed it very much.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2014
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Damn! To be young, virile and free again. This hot little episode reminds me of too many missed opportunities where I gave in to fear of the unknown or poor timing. Now I'm an old man with nothing but memories and regrets. This was some story, I enjoyed it very much.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2014
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Thank you very much
Comment from Acquired Taste
College wasn't like that when I attended - although I wasn't part of the "in-crowd, most special-clique, cheerleaders, etc." Perhaps if I had been in Jen's crowd, that would not have been the case. Your story brings the reader along for your "walk on the wild side." The dialogue seems natural and not forced. AT=/
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2014
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College wasn't like that when I attended - although I wasn't part of the "in-crowd, most special-clique, cheerleaders, etc." Perhaps if I had been in Jen's crowd, that would not have been the case. Your story brings the reader along for your "walk on the wild side." The dialogue seems natural and not forced. AT=/
Comment Written 24-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2014
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Thank you very much
Comment from Eric1
Hi Lancellot, This is a wonderfully written story about young love my friend, it is full of sexual content yet nicely scripted about a normal act between two consenting adults, Great imagery and description, believable dialogue and well drawn characters all make for a beautiful story, just wondering if there is going to be a dating episode lol.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2014
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Hi Lancellot, This is a wonderfully written story about young love my friend, it is full of sexual content yet nicely scripted about a normal act between two consenting adults, Great imagery and description, believable dialogue and well drawn characters all make for a beautiful story, just wondering if there is going to be a dating episode lol.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2014
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Thank you very much
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You are very welcome my friend
Comment from pbroussard209
Wild you say, yes indeed. This was very vivid and well written. The story line was very realistic, and I have known and do know people who would take such a risk, lol.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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Wild you say, yes indeed. This was very vivid and well written. The story line was very realistic, and I have known and do know people who would take such a risk, lol.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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Thank you very much. Mature fiction isn't easy, but it can be fun to explore that genre and let loose.
Comment from Ric Myworld
School days, school days, those good ole break the golden rules days. Thanks for the pleasure of another of your fun stories that brings back memories that we never will forget. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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School days, school days, those good ole break the golden rules days. Thanks for the pleasure of another of your fun stories that brings back memories that we never will forget. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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Thank you very much.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Yeah, I don't mind reading a bit of that from time to time.
Your story does show imagination - more than the usual fuck-story anyway and the exhibitionist nature adds a little thrill.
It is also well written, well-controlled.
Steve
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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Yeah, I don't mind reading a bit of that from time to time.
Your story does show imagination - more than the usual fuck-story anyway and the exhibitionist nature adds a little thrill.
It is also well written, well-controlled.
Steve
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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Thank you very much.
Comment from jmdg1954
Phew... I went to college from 1972-1978 (I volunteered for the extended plan). No, actually it was to much time spent at the Rathskeller on campus. The pitchers of beer never seemed to have a bottom to them. So mix that with the "hot daze" ...
Your story was well written. Just enough spice in it to not put it over the top and vulgar. Nicely done, John
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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Phew... I went to college from 1972-1978 (I volunteered for the extended plan). No, actually it was to much time spent at the Rathskeller on campus. The pitchers of beer never seemed to have a bottom to them. So mix that with the "hot daze" ...
Your story was well written. Just enough spice in it to not put it over the top and vulgar. Nicely done, John
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Well, I like to think of myself as an adult, Lance. But my wife sometimes questions that theory...
I seem to recall a tootsie-roll jingle, in some old commercials from the late sixties and early seventies, I believe. I think it went something like this:
"The world looks mighty good to me, 'cause Tootsie rolls are all I see. Whatever it is I think I see, Becomes a Tootsie roll to me."
Your jingle (or Jen's jingle, as the case were) was very similar, LOL. Of course, it takes on an entirely different meaning the way she sings it.
"She glanced down, and saw her small white fingers straining to surround Derick's dark throbbing penis." -- Holy hell, her fingers had to strain to surround it?! Derick must've been hung like a horse! Abnormal would be a more apt description, as the average size of a male penis is 7" in length. Perhaps he was just short and stubby? Oh well, this is a fantasy story, after all.
The least Derick could've done would been to help her clean up the mess in the cafeteria. Geesh, is there no gratitude among youth these days?
A racy but well written story. The dialogue felt real, genuine.
Nicely done. :}
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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Well, I like to think of myself as an adult, Lance. But my wife sometimes questions that theory...
I seem to recall a tootsie-roll jingle, in some old commercials from the late sixties and early seventies, I believe. I think it went something like this:
"The world looks mighty good to me, 'cause Tootsie rolls are all I see. Whatever it is I think I see, Becomes a Tootsie roll to me."
Your jingle (or Jen's jingle, as the case were) was very similar, LOL. Of course, it takes on an entirely different meaning the way she sings it.
"She glanced down, and saw her small white fingers straining to surround Derick's dark throbbing penis." -- Holy hell, her fingers had to strain to surround it?! Derick must've been hung like a horse! Abnormal would be a more apt description, as the average size of a male penis is 7" in length. Perhaps he was just short and stubby? Oh well, this is a fantasy story, after all.
The least Derick could've done would been to help her clean up the mess in the cafeteria. Geesh, is there no gratitude among youth these days?
A racy but well written story. The dialogue felt real, genuine.
Nicely done. :}
Comment Written 22-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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Thank you very much, Dean.
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You're always welcome, Lance. :}
Comment from GeraldS
I'm sorry, but no, I don't remember those hot days. When I was in college (from '59 to '63) men and women were in separate dorms. In the evening one signed out to leave the dorm and then back in again when they returned. There was a curfew in force and women were not allowed in the men's dorm and vice versa. There was no AC so the hot days I remember were quite unpleasant. Where did you go to college?
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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I'm sorry, but no, I don't remember those hot days. When I was in college (from '59 to '63) men and women were in separate dorms. In the evening one signed out to leave the dorm and then back in again when they returned. There was a curfew in force and women were not allowed in the men's dorm and vice versa. There was no AC so the hot days I remember were quite unpleasant. Where did you go to college?
Comment Written 22-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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Thank you very much. You should have been at my school. Good times.
