My Ba Ba Ba, Bounce About Girl
uh huh, da's her72 total reviews
Comment from MissMerri
I like this very much, even though I'm not familiar with the Moanin" song. I am about to go look it up though, and listen. I enjoyed your jazzy poem that much. Very clever and bouncy and cute. Thanks for the new exposure I'm about to experience. :p
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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I like this very much, even though I'm not familiar with the Moanin" song. I am about to go look it up though, and listen. I enjoyed your jazzy poem that much. Very clever and bouncy and cute. Thanks for the new exposure I'm about to experience. :p
Comment Written 21-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Did you like the song, "Moanin'?"
Comment from jackpeg
This would sound much better if voiced to a melody, I'm sure. The photo fits very well with the sentiment of the words, which I don't understand completely.
"Piano me down
Cymbals don' frown
Who's that fellow
a walkin' my cello?"
Your best line. Since I don't really understand your style, I'll not review any more of your postings. Good Luck.
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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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This would sound much better if voiced to a melody, I'm sure. The photo fits very well with the sentiment of the words, which I don't understand completely.
"Piano me down
Cymbals don' frown
Who's that fellow
a walkin' my cello?"
Your best line. Since I don't really understand your style, I'll not review any more of your postings. Good Luck.
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Comment Written 21-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Thanks
Comment from l.raven
HI Victor. my son was once big into Jazz...and this sounds great...feel the rhythm ...feel the rhyme...tap those toes...very well written you...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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HI Victor. my son was once big into Jazz...and this sounds great...feel the rhythm ...feel the rhyme...tap those toes...very well written you...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 21-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Ha ha. Thank you.
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you are so welcome...xxoo
Comment from nomi338
Yah! Get it boy! You got my toes tappin' My head is bobbin' up and down and I'm about ready to go to town. This poem really takes off and now my hat is off to you as this is an accomplishment not easily done. Congratulations.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Yah! Get it boy! You got my toes tappin' My head is bobbin' up and down and I'm about ready to go to town. This poem really takes off and now my hat is off to you as this is an accomplishment not easily done. Congratulations.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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I thank you, toe-tappin.
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. Oh so fine and fun. I could so hear this playing the tune in my head. Jazz lyrics, yo shur 'nuff got 'em down ya did.
Oh ya, baba ba...now I must turn on the tunes,
padumachitta
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Hi. Oh so fine and fun. I could so hear this playing the tune in my head. Jazz lyrics, yo shur 'nuff got 'em down ya did.
Oh ya, baba ba...now I must turn on the tunes,
padumachitta
Comment Written 21-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Ha ha ha. I am so glad you went to turn on the tunes. Thank you so much.
Comment from Louise Michelle
I'm not all that familiar with jazz, but this seems to reflect the essence of how it sounds. Ba ba ba bounce around girl made me hear someone blasting the notes of a saxophone. Well done. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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I'm not all that familiar with jazz, but this seems to reflect the essence of how it sounds. Ba ba ba bounce around girl made me hear someone blasting the notes of a saxophone. Well done. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 21-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Thas rite. Thanks.
Comment from chasennov
uh huh, da's her "My Ba Ba Ba, Bounce About Girl" This is an excellent poem you have created here, and I enjoyed the read very much. Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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uh huh, da's her "My Ba Ba Ba, Bounce About Girl" This is an excellent poem you have created here, and I enjoyed the read very much. Well done.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Thank you, my man.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from dragonpoet
The artwork takes in the subjects of the poem. I guess the poem could be about a cat moving from place to place not caring about what its on. But it also about a girl friend and a trip to a jazz joint.
I don't know "Moanin" but it does sound like jazz scat singing.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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The artwork takes in the subjects of the poem. I guess the poem could be about a cat moving from place to place not caring about what its on. But it also about a girl friend and a trip to a jazz joint.
I don't know "Moanin" but it does sound like jazz scat singing.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 21-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Thank you.
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No problem.
dragonpoet
Comment from misscookie
Thank you for sharing this interesting poem
It sound almost like a dong.
I enjoy the movement of your write. This was a delightful poem to read.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Thank you for sharing this interesting poem
It sound almost like a dong.
I enjoy the movement of your write. This was a delightful poem to read.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Thank you.
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you are very welcome. have a blessed evening
Comment from Sanku
Since i am not familiar with jazz music or jazz artist i could not get the rhythm. but still it was very evident that it is a lyric for an high energy music.'piano me down /cymbals don't frowm' I liked that.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Since i am not familiar with jazz music or jazz artist i could not get the rhythm. but still it was very evident that it is a lyric for an high energy music.'piano me down /cymbals don't frowm' I liked that.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Thank you. Check out the tune.
