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FanStorian Animals in Forums - 268 words20 total reviews
Comment from michaelcahill
Hi. My internet is down as usual. This is from my phone so I hope it goes through. This was great fun. I can't believe you got all of this information in your piece. You hit on everything. So true, these are all things that are brought up! This was a fun break from the reguler old stuff. Thank you for sponsoring. I got lucky, it was so close and it looks like everones was received almost equally well. Well, got to charge phone again. The stone age! Mikey
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Hi. My internet is down as usual. This is from my phone so I hope it goes through. This was great fun. I can't believe you got all of this information in your piece. You hit on everything. So true, these are all things that are brought up! This was a fun break from the reguler old stuff. Thank you for sponsoring. I got lucky, it was so close and it looks like everones was received almost equally well. Well, got to charge phone again. The stone age! Mikey
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Thank you for the review, Michael. I had a lot of fun writing this! I express myself better in poetry (smile).
Congrats on your win. It was a delightful and very humorous piece totally deserving of the ribbon.
Take care, my friend, love, Y.
Comment from Judy Couch
This poem is really funny. I laughed as I read it. I especially liked the way it ends with: "I was so much happier back home on a tree!" Good job.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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This poem is really funny. I laughed as I read it. I especially liked the way it ends with: "I was so much happier back home on a tree!" Good job.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much for the superb review and the honor of a six. I am so happy you liked my work.
Comment from Dawny53
I love it love it absolutely love it! Oh my gosh you did such a great job! And thanks for putting out there some feelings that a lot of us fan story writers no doubt share! You've just got to win this one
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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I love it love it absolutely love it! Oh my gosh you did such a great job! And thanks for putting out there some feelings that a lot of us fan story writers no doubt share! You've just got to win this one
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much for your superb review and the honor of a six. I am really flattered.
Comment from Louise Michelle
LOL - I think it was wise to say that the characters should be animals. That really takes the edge off for people who might get offended. I agree with your sentiment regarding the winners of the contests. I don't do contests, so many of them are based on popularity, not talent. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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LOL - I think it was wise to say that the characters should be animals. That really takes the edge off for people who might get offended. I agree with your sentiment regarding the winners of the contests. I don't do contests, so many of them are based on popularity, not talent. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much for your great review and good luck wishes. I had lots of fun writing this.
Comment from seaglass
This is funny and I loved how the rhyme worked out while naming each animal and complaint. I'm a free spirit and enter very few contest. My muse work best untethered so this poem suited me fine.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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This is funny and I loved how the rhyme worked out while naming each animal and complaint. I'm a free spirit and enter very few contest. My muse work best untethered so this poem suited me fine.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much for the great review.
Comment from mermaids
I enjoyed reading this poem and found it humerous. Love the bat gets a role. Can haiku be an ode? is a wonderful line coming from the baboon. Your poem is so much fun to read and pokes fun at ourselves. Best wishes for this unusual contest.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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I enjoyed reading this poem and found it humerous. Love the bat gets a role. Can haiku be an ode? is a wonderful line coming from the baboon. Your poem is so much fun to read and pokes fun at ourselves. Best wishes for this unusual contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much for the great reviews.
Comment from adewpearl
solid use of rhyming couplets
I like the dialogue format
I love the specific references to things people actually have discussed in the fan story forums
good use of animal characters to satirize the silliness of dissatisfied contest members :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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solid use of rhyming couplets
I like the dialogue format
I love the specific references to things people actually have discussed in the fan story forums
good use of animal characters to satirize the silliness of dissatisfied contest members :-) Brooke
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much for the great review, Brooke. I had fun with this one.
Comment from Eric1
I Don't know who you are author, but my goodness, have you got it right!, absolutely loved the chat between the animals, sorry poets, it worked a treat my friend, good luck in THIS contest.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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I Don't know who you are author, but my goodness, have you got it right!, absolutely loved the chat between the animals, sorry poets, it worked a treat my friend, good luck in THIS contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much for the great review.
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You are welcome my friend, sorry about the delayed reply, been on holiday.
Comment from kiwijenny
Ha ha ha
I would be an eagle eyed free verser if I were an animal in your forum
Well penned..haiku ode? My biggest beef if i can join the fray is I think we need more stars for stories and chapters...haikus get as much as a novel chapter....that's why I'd be an eagle ...a chapter raptor
God bless
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Ha ha ha
I would be an eagle eyed free verser if I were an animal in your forum
Well penned..haiku ode? My biggest beef if i can join the fray is I think we need more stars for stories and chapters...haikus get as much as a novel chapter....that's why I'd be an eagle ...a chapter raptor
God bless
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much for the fun review.
Comment from Nosha17
Guess, those animals covered nearly all the poetic possibilities. That was a most enjoyable read and the rhyming was great, too. Good touch of humour. Good luck in the contest. Faye
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Guess, those animals covered nearly all the poetic possibilities. That was a most enjoyable read and the rhyming was great, too. Good touch of humour. Good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much for the great review.
