When God Created Color
rhyming quatrains in 7/6/8/6164 total reviews
Comment from Sanku
God is the best artist ever.His pallette is so amazing and from it comes the colours of dawn, twilight,sea forest, lotus parrts so on ..Even black he makes romantic by adding stars to the sky.Thank you for a sweet poem that is sheer pleasure to read.That of course is your hallmark.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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God is the best artist ever.His pallette is so amazing and from it comes the colours of dawn, twilight,sea forest, lotus parrts so on ..Even black he makes romantic by adding stars to the sky.Thank you for a sweet poem that is sheer pleasure to read.That of course is your hallmark.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Sanku, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from marym224
Well done again, Brooke. When God created colour, is a wonderful concept here. Maybe the trees and leaves, or the glowing daffodils, or perhaps the violets and bluebells are drips from his pallette as he painted the rainbow. Congrats on the awards. Maryx
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Well done again, Brooke. When God created colour, is a wonderful concept here. Maybe the trees and leaves, or the glowing daffodils, or perhaps the violets and bluebells are drips from his pallette as he painted the rainbow. Congrats on the awards. Maryx
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Mary, thank you so much for your generosity and graciousness :-) Brooke
Comment from jaeladarling
What a delightful poem! I love all the colors in Creation. And with Fall coming in, the trees will be covered in it. Nice work, as always! :)
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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What a delightful poem! I love all the colors in Creation. And with Fall coming in, the trees will be covered in it. Nice work, as always! :)
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Thank you, jaeladarling, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Joan E.
You once again found the perfect picture to reinforce your reflections, even though Sawyer wasn't in it! Your use of color and your rhymes are very effective. Hugs- Joan
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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You once again found the perfect picture to reinforce your reflections, even though Sawyer wasn't in it! Your use of color and your rhymes are very effective. Hugs- Joan
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Joan, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Brooke - A lovely children's poem that a child would be able to learn and enjoy reciting. It brings religion into a child's world in a friendly colourful way to which they can relate. Good abcb rhyme scheme. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Hi Brooke - A lovely children's poem that a child would be able to learn and enjoy reciting. It brings religion into a child's world in a friendly colourful way to which they can relate. Good abcb rhyme scheme. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Dorothy, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from daeneam
The world is so colorful. I always love to see the sunset's majestic display of colors. It stirs a happy spirit in me. Likewise, I felt it in this poem of yours. I bet God thought of the rainbow when He created you! c", Mae
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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The world is so colorful. I always love to see the sunset's majestic display of colors. It stirs a happy spirit in me. Likewise, I felt it in this poem of yours. I bet God thought of the rainbow when He created you! c", Mae
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Mae, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A beautiful poem, Brooke. I really like those which incorporate color and adding faith is great A beautiful write. Have a goodf day, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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A beautiful poem, Brooke. I really like those which incorporate color and adding faith is great A beautiful write. Have a goodf day, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Debbie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from BLACKDYKE
As ever, short, dainty and clever.
childrens poetry in a nutshell.
I find it just amazing the way you
magic them out of thin/colourful
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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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As ever, short, dainty and clever.
childrens poetry in a nutshell.
I find it just amazing the way you
magic them out of thin/colourful
air>
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much :-) Brooke
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My pleasure
Comment from hari anand
Resemblance of color with polka dot lady bug, sunshine bursting with glowing gold and I loved first God painted dawn. Beautiful in all respect, your poem.:)
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Resemblance of color with polka dot lady bug, sunshine bursting with glowing gold and I loved first God painted dawn. Beautiful in all respect, your poem.:)
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Tera, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from lakeport
When God created color, indeed He created beautiful colors,
That's a beautiful expressed story poem.Nice rhyming, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!lakeport.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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When God created color, indeed He created beautiful colors,
That's a beautiful expressed story poem.Nice rhyming, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!lakeport.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Erich, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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you are very welcome.Hugs!lakeport.
