Another Day
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Comment from Winslow
Dear Pili,
For when I sleep my dreams are free of pain. In the morning the pain will return but for now I can sleep and dream.
Warm regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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Dear Pili,
For when I sleep my dreams are free of pain. In the morning the pain will return but for now I can sleep and dream.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 04-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much Winslow, Great comment. Pili
Comment from Selina Stambi
my mind plunges
Into a sea of me ... love the images you create in my mind.
Hi Pili,
I sighed too. :)
I went back and re-read, savouring each line. They filled me with relaxing inner quiet. Thank you,!
Love,
Sonali :)
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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my mind plunges
Into a sea of me ... love the images you create in my mind.
Hi Pili,
I sighed too. :)
I went back and re-read, savouring each line. They filled me with relaxing inner quiet. Thank you,!
Love,
Sonali :)
Comment Written 04-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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I am so glad, thank you so much. Pili
Comment from chasennov
Free Style .Another Day.' This is a very good Free Verse poem you have created here and reminds of similar poem I wrote some time ago. Well done.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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Free Style .Another Day.' This is a very good Free Verse poem you have created here and reminds of similar poem I wrote some time ago. Well done.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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Thank you so very much Chasennov. Pili
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You are very welcome, Pili.
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Smiles. Pili
Comment from Martin Chan
"Another Day"[ is a nicely composed Commentary and Philosophy Poetry in free verse format with a good choice of words and presentation. The picture nicely complements the poem and its theme. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2014
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"Another Day"[ is a nicely composed Commentary and Philosophy Poetry in free verse format with a good choice of words and presentation. The picture nicely complements the poem and its theme. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2014
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Thank you so very much for your very meaningful comment and high rate Martin.
Pili
Comment from mauial
Good free verse on the end of days taking you into lala land. A thousand meanings of what lie within, that about sums it up when it comes to dreams.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2014
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Good free verse on the end of days taking you into lala land. A thousand meanings of what lie within, that about sums it up when it comes to dreams.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much mauial, for a great comment. Pili
Comment from Caressa_08
In depth poem, that at times, if not days, & nights can relate...Though each day is anew & with thankful rest, that can help if we aren't under too much stress...Know , too, it can even reveal itself in our dreams..Especially if one is sorrowful after a loved one's death....I wish you well..
Caresa
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2014
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In depth poem, that at times, if not days, & nights can relate...Though each day is anew & with thankful rest, that can help if we aren't under too much stress...Know , too, it can even reveal itself in our dreams..Especially if one is sorrowful after a loved one's death....I wish you well..
Caresa
Comment Written 04-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2014
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Thank you Caresa, very meaningful comment. Pili
Comment from tbacha58
Inward mysteries
reveal hidden truths
my mind plunges
Into a sea of me
Oh Pili, so sorry I was late, that poem broke my heart, so sad, I just pray you are ok. It is a heartfelt poem, beautifully written of course by you, the usual.
*a thousand meanings
of what lies within
sorrows hide in shadows
in somnolent heaviness
I sigh *
This verse means so many meanings, but for me, it made me sad, because its true, how much we hide inside, not to let others feel our pain. Take care my friend, so sorry I have no six, but I give you my deep heart, feeling with you. Love u Terry xoxo
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2014
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Inward mysteries
reveal hidden truths
my mind plunges
Into a sea of me
Oh Pili, so sorry I was late, that poem broke my heart, so sad, I just pray you are ok. It is a heartfelt poem, beautifully written of course by you, the usual.
*a thousand meanings
of what lies within
sorrows hide in shadows
in somnolent heaviness
I sigh *
This verse means so many meanings, but for me, it made me sad, because its true, how much we hide inside, not to let others feel our pain. Take care my friend, so sorry I have no six, but I give you my deep heart, feeling with you. Love u Terry xoxo
Comment Written 04-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2014
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You words are worth a thousand stars my friend,not to worry , is seven years nowof chronic pain, nothing new, night is welcome... Thank you my friend... Big hugs
Comment from Jay Squires
Inward mysteries
reveal hidden truths
my mind plunges
Into a sea of me [What an image! "Into a sea of me".
The contrast between sun and moon, day and night, consciousness and dream-scape, all combine to create the tension extant in this poem.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2014
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Inward mysteries
reveal hidden truths
my mind plunges
Into a sea of me [What an image! "Into a sea of me".
The contrast between sun and moon, day and night, consciousness and dream-scape, all combine to create the tension extant in this poem.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much for a great comment... Pili
Comment from Ekim777
Sometimes the world within and without is bathed in a surreal light. We are caught in the golden trap of our minds and its memories also unreal. Why does our minds make us sad? Whatever happened to the spirit of Duende? -Ekim777
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2014
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Sometimes the world within and without is bathed in a surreal light. We are caught in the golden trap of our minds and its memories also unreal. Why does our minds make us sad? Whatever happened to the spirit of Duende? -Ekim777
Comment Written 04-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2014
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Is definitely there too, thank you my friend , great comment. Pili
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
"sorrows hide in shadows in somnolent heaviness" - These two lines are stunning in form and construction. This is such a serenely peaceful read. It is very worthy of all the recognition it has received. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing it with me.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2014
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"sorrows hide in shadows in somnolent heaviness" - These two lines are stunning in form and construction. This is such a serenely peaceful read. It is very worthy of all the recognition it has received. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing it with me.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2014
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Thank you Mystic Angel, fabulous comment... Pili
