Comment from jlsavell

Excellent

royowen, such beautiful sentiments expressed in poetic verve. Great back rhyme scheme where the lilt adds to the weight of the poem. Very very well done. Jls

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2014

Thank your fine review and comments and I appreciate them, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Artist Dilemma

Excellent

A wonderfully written tribute to a child, (daughter?) with perfect words, appropriate rhymes and without forcing stanza. It is a poem worth reading over and over again.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014

Thank you so much for this wonderful review and comments blessings Roy.

Comment from Zue65

Excellent

Wow, I just love the innocence radiating from the face of your granddaughter.Little children are really God's gift to us, their little nasty tricks and antics brings so much joy that will inspire the writer in us to draft beautiful lines as you did in this poem . Excellent write, God bless.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014

thanks so much for these gracious comments, and review, blessings, Roy

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

What a precious and extremely pretty little one - no wonder you are so proud. This poem is so full of love, and the rhyme and meter are beautiful - very lovely, Roy.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2014

Than Dawn for these most positive comments and review, Blessings to you Roy

Comment from Bina1

Excellent

What a delightful poem, and I do appreciate your love for a grandchild, they are special indeed. Thank you for sharing, simply grand!

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014

Thank you so much for these kind words and glowing comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Yes, I know what you mean, Children should be, and for some of us a joy, a true guft from God that makes us appreciate life and what we have. There are our living legacy. Well done.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014

Thank you for the positive review and comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Maggieluv

Excellent

Well organised with rhyme and rhythm. Beautiful thoughts expressed in your poem and enhanced by photo. I am only a learning poet but. I wonder whether punctuation is necessary in this shiort verse. Well don!

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014

Thanks so much for your wonderful comments and review, some do like punctuation and some don't, how else can you pause or Change emphasis, either way is ok, as long as it's noted! Blessings, Roy.

Comment from ronnie k

Excellent

Such a beautiful picture and poem, children are a gift, that come wrapped in love, in the word the Father reminds us of that fact "...a child will lead the way" " ...suffer the little children to come unto Me"

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014

I think you're right! Thanks for the wonderful review and comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from amahra

Excellent

What a beautiful way to capture a little girl's smile. Especially if she's your granddaughter. I loved the poem and thought the rhyming was really good. Great job.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014

Thank you Amahra, for this wonderful review and comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

How nice Roy that you get to see your Granddaughter every morning. What a wonderful tribute poem to her and a great way to thank God for the gift of her.
Teresa

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014

Thank you Teresa,they are indeed a wonderful gift and a source of joy, great review and comments, thank you, Roy,