Comment from Susanjohn

Excellent

Oh did this bring a smile to my face!!!! I love this! Great imagery, I can place a perfect picture in my mind.love The about grandma and grandpa!.How cute, I can picture that exact conversation. I really enjoyed this poem.

 Comment Written 18-May-2016

Comment from donnadiann

Excellent

I missed this one, and it is beautiful, with great rhyming. Very nice internal rhyming...wiggling, squiggling,...round, round. Very witty to weave in Grandpa and Grandma. Cheerful way to describe the brilliance of the lawn as gold. LOL!

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2016

Comment from Delahay

Excellent

Another pretty children's rhyme about what happens when the rain falls, drop by drop, then what will happen when it has stopped. The rain falls, the worms wriggle from the ground and puddles form. The rain stops, the worms leave and the flowers bloom.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2014

Thank you, WardHays, for your gracious review :-) Brooke

Comment from thee-name

Excellent

Excellent rhyming poem. That's what happened when it rains. Its raining outside for me now. RAIN IS FALLING DROP BY DROP
ONE TWO THREE FOUR FIVE SIX PLOP

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014

thanks so very much, thee-name :-) Brooke

reply by thee-name on 31-Aug-2014

THANK YOU!

Comment from Judy Couch

Excellent

Very good poem. It rhymes well and has good rhythm. It would be fun to read it aloud to kids and then take them outside to look for dandelions.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014

Judy, thanks so much :-) Brooke

Comment from robina1978

Exceptional

An excellent entry for this prompt. An original way to describe rain. The picture from VMarguarite complements your poem excellent. Best wishes for the prompt.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014

Ine, thank you so very much, my thoughtful and generous friend :-) Brooke

Comment from Green Lake Girl

Excellent

This is such a darling children's poem. Next time we have a healthy crop of dandelions, I'll tell my husband the rain Wizards put them there. LOL. Love the accompanying artwork. I'm sorry Sawyer is living in a drought.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014

Thanks so much, Green Lake Girl :-) He's on vacation at Banff right now and spent yesterday in a slicker because it rained :-) I think that was enough rain for him for a while. LOL Brooke

Comment from LoannaLois

Excellent

What a charming,perfectly written poem . I could just see the smiling worms and then a field of dandelions popping up...You can take any subject matter can make it sing.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014

Thanks so much, Lois - so glad you enjoyed it :-) Brooke

Comment from tbacha58

Excellent

Drops have gathered, puddles form,
plops aplenty from the storm --
hundreds, thousands, millions, more,
where there was no rain before.

As usual Brooke, an amazing about children. You reach out to them with your poetry and your rhyming gives the reading a happy thought of the meaning meant in your story. Love the picture, which it was Sawyer to see him. Beautiful Bless u Terry xoxo

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014

Terry, thank you so very much, my friend :-) Brooke

Comment from Eigle Rull

Exceptional

This is a perfect poem for children. It is so well written and as smooth and flowing as silk. The words are interesting and cute. They are easy to read and understand. The little kid in me really loved this little poem, and so does the old guy in me. It was fantastic my friend - perfect.

Always with respect,

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014

Eigle Rull, thank you so very much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke