Grand Operating Design
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Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Cogitator,
Its beginning is smooth and captivating, but "Physicists.. onward almost up to the end - it loses its grip and the theme as well as the wording becomes too much complicated. I feel so.
It would have been better if it had been a little shorter from the view point of coherence. I think so.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Hello Cogitator,
Its beginning is smooth and captivating, but "Physicists.. onward almost up to the end - it loses its grip and the theme as well as the wording becomes too much complicated. I feel so.
It would have been better if it had been a little shorter from the view point of coherence. I think so.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Thanks for the the review. The points in this write will be expanded in detail as it becomes a book. Thanks again...John
Comment from dmt1967
Wow, this piece was enlightening, and very powerful. I liked the easy way the information was portrayed, although some parts did confuse me slightly. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Wow, this piece was enlightening, and very powerful. I liked the easy way the information was portrayed, although some parts did confuse me slightly. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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the depictions will be further developed in the ongoing essays. Thanks much for your review and comments...John
Comment from Emily George
Big bang theory eat your heart out. A very interesting and well resourced piece. Full of interesting and at times complex information.
Divide and conquer I agree with you on that ploy it is used often by those who seek to control.
Sorry no sixes left.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Big bang theory eat your heart out. A very interesting and well resourced piece. Full of interesting and at times complex information.
Divide and conquer I agree with you on that ploy it is used often by those who seek to control.
Sorry no sixes left.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Thanks for the kind words and review. There will be more to expand the individual points...John
Comment from c_lucas
I follow the doctrine that the body has its own pharmacy than that nature has healing plants for any dis-ease. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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I follow the doctrine that the body has its own pharmacy than that nature has healing plants for any dis-ease. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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I appreciate your input. Thanks...John
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You're welcome, John. Charlie
Comment from CHIGYSISKI
Excellently written philosophical essay. made me ponder and think (a lot!). I like the use of the meaning of the abbreviations GOD and GUT- Grand Operating Design and Grand Unification Theory. Well done!
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Excellently written philosophical essay. made me ponder and think (a lot!). I like the use of the meaning of the abbreviations GOD and GUT- Grand Operating Design and Grand Unification Theory. Well done!
Comment Written 04-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Thank you much for the kind words and review...John
Comment from tfawcus
This satirical look at the relationship between man and machine is full of interest. Your acronyms powerfully underline the points you are making. The world would be much improved with less IAM and more GOD.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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This satirical look at the relationship between man and machine is full of interest. Your acronyms powerfully underline the points you are making. The world would be much improved with less IAM and more GOD.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Thank you for the insightful review. There is more coming...John
Comment from sibhus
Wow, fascinateing article that was both interesting and informative. I liked the paragraphs on the laords and masters using their corporations to hear us like cattle, something few people even think about. Good stuff.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Wow, fascinateing article that was both interesting and informative. I liked the paragraphs on the laords and masters using their corporations to hear us like cattle, something few people even think about. Good stuff.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Thank you for your review. There will be more detail coming...John
Comment from country ranch writer
We are complex and full of mystery in the sense no two are alike. We are individuals with our own thoughts and theory about things
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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We are complex and full of mystery in the sense no two are alike. We are individuals with our own thoughts and theory about things
Comment Written 03-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Truth is no theory. Thanks for the review...John
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Comment from kiwisteveh
GOD and GUT - great acronyms - ell done if they are your own creation!
This essay is very cleverly put together. You start with the easily assimilated analogy of human and other life forms to computer systems before leading us gently into the more complex realm of philosophy.
The realisation that this is anti-Christian comes late - which may save you from some fierce responses since the majority of FS members will blind themselves to any reason if they get that far.
I was on the alert for any major illogicality or false assumptions - you do make a lot of very positive (this is true) statements. There is a contradiction in the statement that humans must work towards a desired output, when matched with your later assertion that many are shepherded towards (presumably) harmful goals. I might also question the assumption that Gaea's hemispheres meet in the Mideast...
Overall, though, a fascinating read.
Steve
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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GOD and GUT - great acronyms - ell done if they are your own creation!
This essay is very cleverly put together. You start with the easily assimilated analogy of human and other life forms to computer systems before leading us gently into the more complex realm of philosophy.
The realisation that this is anti-Christian comes late - which may save you from some fierce responses since the majority of FS members will blind themselves to any reason if they get that far.
I was on the alert for any major illogicality or false assumptions - you do make a lot of very positive (this is true) statements. There is a contradiction in the statement that humans must work towards a desired output, when matched with your later assertion that many are shepherded towards (presumably) harmful goals. I might also question the assumption that Gaea's hemispheres meet in the Mideast...
Overall, though, a fascinating read.
Steve
Comment Written 03-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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I am not anti-Christian - more anti-hypocrite, but I know those hypocrites who call themselves Christian will get a rise (hopefully). I truly judge no one.
As for Gaea's hemispheres, they must exist. On the other side of her body, those hemispheres would meet around your home.
Thanks so much for the kind words and generous review...John
Comment from dennis0530
Very illuminating - I felt re-educated reading the article.
Most of the subjects, I had taken up in college are here -Psychology, Religion, Biology, Politics, Physics, etc. But the more common ones not taught like sense and common sense, understanding, introspection are likewise touched on.
In all our endeavors and daily strivings, I have always thought that survival was the main focus. Most, even if unwillingly, choose to be adherents of political and religious groups if it makes them secure and safe.
We cannot survive forever but still, people make forced choices to live another day.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Very illuminating - I felt re-educated reading the article.
Most of the subjects, I had taken up in college are here -Psychology, Religion, Biology, Politics, Physics, etc. But the more common ones not taught like sense and common sense, understanding, introspection are likewise touched on.
In all our endeavors and daily strivings, I have always thought that survival was the main focus. Most, even if unwillingly, choose to be adherents of political and religious groups if it makes them secure and safe.
We cannot survive forever but still, people make forced choices to live another day.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Your comments are very much appreciated. I am trying to develop these points into a book that I hope hit our "Common Sense." Thanks again...John
