Mama Tries to Pin the Blame
two wildly wildly modified triolets125 total reviews
Comment from michaelcahill
Hahaha. He has a look on his face like, "This is fun for ME, right?" I love how you've captured the adults gone mad having fun at the little one's expense while he just is bewildered trying to figure out why it is such great fun. I actually remember being in his situation, so it apparently has more lasting affect than we imagine! mikey
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2014
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Hahaha. He has a look on his face like, "This is fun for ME, right?" I love how you've captured the adults gone mad having fun at the little one's expense while he just is bewildered trying to figure out why it is such great fun. I actually remember being in his situation, so it apparently has more lasting affect than we imagine! mikey
Comment Written 14-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2014
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Mikey, thanks so much - Sawyer and his mom are a hoot together. I talk to her on the phone once a day and can't wait for that call to hear the daily stories :-) Brooke
Comment from IndianaIrish
Your poem is wonderful for that fantastic photograph, Brooke. I love Sawyer's expression and his hands that seem to say, "Are you kiddin' me?"
Fun poem to read.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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Your poem is wonderful for that fantastic photograph, Brooke. I love Sawyer's expression and his hands that seem to say, "Are you kiddin' me?"
Fun poem to read.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
Comment Written 14-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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Karyn, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Rose Hearth
That's Sawyer? Also in the You Never Know Photo? My goodness, I've been away far too long..lol I really love this poem, even if it is "wildly, wildly" modified!
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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That's Sawyer? Also in the You Never Know Photo? My goodness, I've been away far too long..lol I really love this poem, even if it is "wildly, wildly" modified!
Comment Written 14-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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Rose, thank you so much for your thoughtful and generous response to this poem. Yep, that's Sawyer. LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from Titan Black
See, that's what i mean... you are deep into the mind of the child... and that's so hot! Nevertheless, you were very funny in your writing this poem. I guess its because i was listening to a little babies point of view. Moreover, your rhyme scheme has improved dramatically. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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See, that's what i mean... you are deep into the mind of the child... and that's so hot! Nevertheless, you were very funny in your writing this poem. I guess its because i was listening to a little babies point of view. Moreover, your rhyme scheme has improved dramatically. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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Titan, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from mfowler
Poor Sawyer. He really sounds distressed in this charming ditty about a moment in time when a boy looks a tad ridiculous. Th eblame is rightly aimed at 'mama', but the credit goes to you, Brooke, for the entertainment value of the verse.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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Poor Sawyer. He really sounds distressed in this charming ditty about a moment in time when a boy looks a tad ridiculous. Th eblame is rightly aimed at 'mama', but the credit goes to you, Brooke, for the entertainment value of the verse.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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thanks so much, mfowler, for your thoughtful review - actually, bath time is his favorite time of the day. His tub looks like a play room. LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from Gaye Hemsley
Hi Brooke What a fun poem.Lovely form of rhyming. I know you don't need inspiration to write poetry but your darling little grandson keeps your creative juices flowing
LOL Gaye
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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Hi Brooke What a fun poem.Lovely form of rhyming. I know you don't need inspiration to write poetry but your darling little grandson keeps your creative juices flowing
LOL Gaye
Comment Written 14-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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Gaye, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from mommydear42
Sawyer, you look fie with gelled up hair and as naked as can
be. That's because your mom has a fairytale writer who writes
great poems to set you up as a model in history. Adewpearl is what she's called, but that is not her name. I'll bet you
call her Gramma or maybe Nana if her fame. My grandsons called
me Mia when they were small and now the slip up and call me Mia even in their twenties and it still pleases me.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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Sawyer, you look fie with gelled up hair and as naked as can
be. That's because your mom has a fairytale writer who writes
great poems to set you up as a model in history. Adewpearl is what she's called, but that is not her name. I'll bet you
call her Gramma or maybe Nana if her fame. My grandsons called
me Mia when they were small and now the slip up and call me Mia even in their twenties and it still pleases me.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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mommydear, thank you so much from Sawyer's Grandma :_) Brooke
Comment from skye
Love the fun times of bath, when soap and water and a few toys could captivate a child for a long time.
Your cute poem is well written, with layers of humour and sparkling with wit.
Great picture.
Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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Love the fun times of bath, when soap and water and a few toys could captivate a child for a long time.
Your cute poem is well written, with layers of humour and sparkling with wit.
Great picture.
Well done.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2014
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Skye, thank you so much. It is always good to hear from you :-) Brooke
Comment from Glasstruth
LOL. Indeed I'm laughing. Awesome picture. Rhyming's very sing-song like, and his complaint sounds believable. Is that really Swayer in the picture? As always, very entertaining. Les
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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LOL. Indeed I'm laughing. Awesome picture. Rhyming's very sing-song like, and his complaint sounds believable. Is that really Swayer in the picture? As always, very entertaining. Les
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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Les, thanks so much. Yep, that's Sawyer! LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from Loren (7)
: ) I'm thinking there is a lot of truth behind those words. And, I'm thinking in a few years that Sawyer will have a lot more to add to this little ditty on blame. Great job, as always - Loren
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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: ) I'm thinking there is a lot of truth behind those words. And, I'm thinking in a few years that Sawyer will have a lot more to add to this little ditty on blame. Great job, as always - Loren
Comment Written 13-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
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Loren, thank you so much :-) Brooke
