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If Love Should Saunter Up My Walk

rhyming quatrains

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Comment from michaelcahill
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I love the message of this. Perfection in the writing. I can't even suggest anything almost helpful! Miranda is getting quite good at these great shots. When are you going to put these in a book? mikey

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2014
    Mikey,thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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Nice rhyming quatrains about allowing love into our lives and into our hearts.
A lovely photo of the shadowed Sawyer waiting for his friend.

valda

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
    valda, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Acquired Taste
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Lest I run The Little Rascals into the ground, this little cutie looks a good bit like Darla.

You have a lovely way of turning all things into a positive and redeeming situation. Sunny dispositions and looking at the best in life is a gift from God and one which you seem to have taken truly into your heart.

Jean

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
    Jean, thank you - and you're right about Darla. :-) Brooke
Comment from Jade Lawson
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Hi,
Lovely way to express how beautiful and important love can be, no need to need to lead our lives with heavy feelings in our heart and mind.
Good flow and rhyme.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
    Jade, thanks so much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from jadapenn
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A beautiful love poem and I love the subject matter. Great photo. You are so adept at turning all these photos into terrific poems. Each one a little gem on its own. Well penned. luv jada

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
    Thank you, Jada, my gracious friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Leineco
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It's such a temptation to fall into the trap of thinking the poem is about
the picture. . .the chronicling of your hopes and dreams for Sawyer -

But I think there is much more to the poem than that simple reaction.
I think it is about a way of life - - -a personal philosophy of love being
at the center of joy and happiness. Both in the giving and the receiving.

Nicely penned Brooke :-)

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
    Leineco, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
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"...sorrow's such a needless way to waste away life's passing." What a profound line! And what a shame it would be indeed to miss love and hope just from not paying attention. Love, Jeanie

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
    Jeanie, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Sanku
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I never stop wondering about your 'instant imagination"-How you aptly write the words that seem to jump out of the picture.-'For in loves possibility/lies hope for each tomorrow' and it is very important that we recognize it when we see it.Enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
    Sanku, thank you so much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from CR Delport
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Ah, look at the Cute Little One waiting for his friend. Love is such a wonderful feeling. Nothing beats that. This is very well written, as always :)

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
    CR, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from NadineM
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Brooke, this poem is so sweet! First, the pic is a perfect compliment to the poem, so much that perhaps the pic inspired the words!?? I love seeing Sawyer's anticipatory stance... So cute these two!!
Love is something special and can sneak up on us! To be attentive to its approach is ideal if one wants to fully benefit from its embrace! Great to read your well-rhymed writing again! Thanks for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014
    Nadine, thanks so much, my friend :-) Yes, the picture definitely inspired the poem. Brooke