Cycle of Life
free verse62 total reviews
Comment from Emily George
Life's cycle an alluring, thought provoking piece. I love the tree representing time old wisdom such a great choice for your work.
Beautiful and prophetic as it too must die to be reborn again
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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Life's cycle an alluring, thought provoking piece. I love the tree representing time old wisdom such a great choice for your work.
Beautiful and prophetic as it too must die to be reborn again
Comment Written 25-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much:)
Comment from Tina McKala
I am one
with nature
one with
God
and one
with the universe // wouldn't it sound better without "and" in "and one with the universe"?
very good poem, i almost gave it 6, but the end was a bit off for me. i loved the structure and your images, teh sound of it as such. very well written!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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I am one
with nature
one with
God
and one
with the universe // wouldn't it sound better without "and" in "and one with the universe"?
very good poem, i almost gave it 6, but the end was a bit off for me. i loved the structure and your images, teh sound of it as such. very well written!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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Thank you Tina for the lovely review:)
Comment from TOMORAL
We are born to die, each and every living thing. I loved this beautifully expressed poem of the cycle of life. It describes infinity very well. Good job, poet.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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We are born to die, each and every living thing. I loved this beautifully expressed poem of the cycle of life. It describes infinity very well. Good job, poet.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much:)
Comment from kiwisteveh
There is something fascinating about cycles, especially the huge and perpetual ones we see in many aspects of nature.
Here you even give it a spiritual angle:
I am one
with nature
one with
God
and one
with the universe
Steve
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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There is something fascinating about cycles, especially the huge and perpetual ones we see in many aspects of nature.
Here you even give it a spiritual angle:
I am one
with nature
one with
God
and one
with the universe
Steve
Comment Written 25-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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Thank you Steve for the great review:)
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Reading this, I have a real sense on the tree as part of the landscape, blending in with nature and all of nature's rich gifts, the birds, grass, sunshine and clouds. It is a beautiful piece and I enjoyed it, Giddy
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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Reading this, I have a real sense on the tree as part of the landscape, blending in with nature and all of nature's rich gifts, the birds, grass, sunshine and clouds. It is a beautiful piece and I enjoyed it, Giddy
Comment Written 25-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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Thank you Giddy:)
Comment from emrpoems
well defined cycle of life.
loved the format and the complimentary picture.
I am one
with nature
one with
God
and one
with the universe
loved these lines
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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well defined cycle of life.
loved the format and the complimentary picture.
I am one
with nature
one with
God
and one
with the universe
loved these lines
Comment Written 24-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much:)
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your free verse and its visual format, set off by the accompanying picture. I enjoyed your vivid images and cycle of life. "I am/ the horizon/ where earth touches infinity" is quite evocative. Cheers- Joan, from Costa Rica
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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I admired your free verse and its visual format, set off by the accompanying picture. I enjoyed your vivid images and cycle of life. "I am/ the horizon/ where earth touches infinity" is quite evocative. Cheers- Joan, from Costa Rica
Comment Written 24-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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That was my favorite line too. Thanks for the great review:)
Comment from Charlene0513
To TAB_that's me,
The sun is a star that is the center of attraction and is the main source for radiating energy.
My favorite part:
I am one
with nature
one with
God
and one
with the universe
Just where would we be without warmth to our bodies and home.
Charlene
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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To TAB_that's me,
The sun is a star that is the center of attraction and is the main source for radiating energy.
My favorite part:
I am one
with nature
one with
God
and one
with the universe
Just where would we be without warmth to our bodies and home.
Charlene
Comment Written 24-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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THank you so much:)
Comment from GWHARGIS
am I wrong or was this about leaves. I liked the freestyle format. Nice imagery and characterization of the one. The flow and the emotion was uplifting and upbeat. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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am I wrong or was this about leaves. I liked the freestyle format. Nice imagery and characterization of the one. The flow and the emotion was uplifting and upbeat. Nicely done.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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It is about spiritually and that we are all one with everything that God created. Thanks for the great review:)
Comment from Spitfire
Well put. We are all one in this large universe. I like the format of your poem, the journey through life and then at the end, staring all over. I'm stepping outside now to do my stretching and get in touch with nature.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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Well put. We are all one in this large universe. I like the format of your poem, the journey through life and then at the end, staring all over. I'm stepping outside now to do my stretching and get in touch with nature.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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I'm glad you got the depth of this poem. That last review I read thought it was about leaves - lol. Thanks so much for the review:)
