Comment from amada

Excellent

A very powerful and nostalgic work. I like the second stanza the best because it speaks of those yesterday's days. Lovely assonance and astounding meaning in a line.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2014

Thank you so much my dear friend. Abrazos. Pili

Comment from Benny Beeharry

Exceptional

The beauty of this writing is in its depth and it is not easy to find it. Except the lonely soul caught in a web of memories.
Absolutely good piece of writing.
Benny Beeharry

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2014

Very meaningful comment, thank you so much Benny and for the high rate , it humbles me. Pili

Comment from Ronni

Excellent

Soul searching is always such a private and profound
meditation or reflection that one truly has to 'listen'
with our inner spiritual ear to discern the voice
and depth from which it speaks to us. You have done
so in this compelling 'voice over' musing in your
innate style of attunement and enlightenment peaked.
I especially love your quiet prophecy and portent
of last phrase. Soulfully beautiful presentation,
with melding art work enhancing theme and flow.
Thanks for sharing....

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2014

What a terrific review Ronni, it humbles me. Your depth is truly amazing.
Thank you so very much. Pili

Comment from Starlight's Edge

Excellent

Hi,
it was a nice poem.
I felt a lot of emotion in it. Particularly wistfulness about memories that already passed but still longer.

Love particularly the last verse.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2014

Thank you so very much my poet friend. Pili

Comment from GWinterwin

Excellent

A good poem talking about reflections from the soul. Good word flow and rhyming make it easy to read and comprehend. Something most of us probably encounter now and then.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014

Thank you so very much GW. Pili

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Pili,

Reflections of the soul, indeed, with soft whispering nights and miles of memories, be they bad, good, or indifferent to assimilate.

Nicely penned.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014

Thank you so very much Jax.... Smiles. Pili

Comment from Oatmeal

Excellent

Pili,

Vivid impressions and rich narration, all lines formatted very well. Well chosen words, colorful arrangement and wonderfully decorated thoughts.

There was no SPAG, no typos, no room for improvement.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014

Thank you soooooo much Oatmeal, great review. Smiles. Pili

Comment from acerisestory

Excellent

Your poem is beautiful, Pili.

Your free verse words flow with a nice rhythm and conjure up dreamy feelings for the past. I love the simile you've used in your first stanza:

"My soul
feels
like an island
in a vast universe"

Well done! Thank you for sharing. Alana

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014

Thank you so much , meaningful review. Pili

Comment from padumachitta

Excellent

Hi. I like the lay out and the style of this free style. The words are so magical and evocative.
Thank you for sharing this deep and full hearted poem.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014

Meaningful review, thank you so much Pili

Comment from marijmd

Excellent

Lost words cling to blue stars - that is intriguing - I wonder what you meant by it. I like the free verse - it has a nice flow and a pretty mixing of words.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014

Thank you so very much !! Pili