Zero Equals Hope
A-Z short forms w/free verse24 total reviews
Comment from Bobby Jo
Taking a chance is always the hard part of life. Sometimes you win and other times you lose. Both come at a price. This is good.
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Taking a chance is always the hard part of life. Sometimes you win and other times you lose. Both come at a price. This is good.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2014
Comment from l.raven
Hey you, sweetness...you are sooooooooo very right...you have only yourself to blame if you don't put your all in it...Hmmmmm....a great poem Michael full of truth and wisdom you...love it!!! Luff Linda xxoo
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Hey you, sweetness...you are sooooooooo very right...you have only yourself to blame if you don't put your all in it...Hmmmmm....a great poem Michael full of truth and wisdom you...love it!!! Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 15-Jul-2014
Comment from Green Lake Girl
This is an excellent poem, Mikey. It's very hard to write anything from A - Z. I sense that you spent a lot of time on this and it shows. "You slayed my identity." A powerful line filled with hurt! Well done.
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This is an excellent poem, Mikey. It's very hard to write anything from A - Z. I sense that you spent a lot of time on this and it shows. "You slayed my identity." A powerful line filled with hurt! Well done.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2014
Comment from madhatter1977
Mikey, this is incredible! A fantastic poem given the form and a terrific narrative that will appeal to all. Dark picture and type accompanies it really well. Fantastic writing and well done, Pete :)
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Mikey, this is incredible! A fantastic poem given the form and a terrific narrative that will appeal to all. Dark picture and type accompanies it really well. Fantastic writing and well done, Pete :)
Comment Written 14-Jul-2014
Comment from Dawn Munro
Ah, yes, I would have to agree with the message of this poem, ("x is my new name") and you've conveyed it so well! "...left with fading smoke..." describes the feeling too, when the one you love is angry, and leaving...
Nicely done, Michael - a beautiful free verse.
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Ah, yes, I would have to agree with the message of this poem, ("x is my new name") and you've conveyed it so well! "...left with fading smoke..." describes the feeling too, when the one you love is angry, and leaving...
Nicely done, Michael - a beautiful free verse.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2014
Comment from ann marie mazz
hi mikey
this is an exceptional abc format and entry
this is not an easy format to make flow
and yes
you achieved that very well
what can I say
the words speak
they are filled with passion and power
your presentation is excellent
all is well within the entry in its entirety
thank you for sharing your poetic talent and artistry
ann marie
j u s t
w o n d e r f u l
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hi mikey
this is an exceptional abc format and entry
this is not an easy format to make flow
and yes
you achieved that very well
what can I say
the words speak
they are filled with passion and power
your presentation is excellent
all is well within the entry in its entirety
thank you for sharing your poetic talent and artistry
ann marie
j u s t
w o n d e r f u l
Comment Written 14-Jul-2014
Comment from Sankey
Interesting poem my friend loved the picture as well. We never lose our first love I believe. I remember how you shared your first love with us and then that??? woman came3 into your life! Groan!
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Interesting poem my friend loved the picture as well. We never lose our first love I believe. I remember how you shared your first love with us and then that??? woman came3 into your life! Groan!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2014
Comment from fastdigits
You always write with such introspection,
delving deep within on the facets of life
and love that all of us go through, and
write of the heartbreak of love that was
once, but after the anguish there is that
feeling, it was better to have lost in love
than not to have loved at all.
Well done
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You always write with such introspection,
delving deep within on the facets of life
and love that all of us go through, and
write of the heartbreak of love that was
once, but after the anguish there is that
feeling, it was better to have lost in love
than not to have loved at all.
Well done
Comment Written 14-Jul-2014
Comment from krys123
Mikey;
this is an excellent abecedarian type of poem Which is nearly written to perfection for nothing that I can see is perfect. Imagination is truly inventive and brilliantly creative.
Your imagery is so demonstratively descriptive and exquisitely expressive throughout your poem. This in turn makes it very enlightening and truly liberating full of life.
Truly nothing is really lost unless you give it your all and lose it and then when one another comes along you appreciate it that much more.
Thank you for sharing and posting this for everyone to read and may all your endeavors be good ones in the future.
Alex
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Mikey;
this is an excellent abecedarian type of poem Which is nearly written to perfection for nothing that I can see is perfect. Imagination is truly inventive and brilliantly creative.
Your imagery is so demonstratively descriptive and exquisitely expressive throughout your poem. This in turn makes it very enlightening and truly liberating full of life.
Truly nothing is really lost unless you give it your all and lose it and then when one another comes along you appreciate it that much more.
Thank you for sharing and posting this for everyone to read and may all your endeavors be good ones in the future.
Alex
Comment Written 14-Jul-2014
Comment from Patti R.
I was enjoying the poem so much I didn't even notice the A-Z stuff ... duh! A lovely poem, Mikey and I completely agree with your theory about jumping into love full on, both feet - Cannonball!! If you lose at least ya know. I don't want to die with a whole plateful of What Ifs in front of me.
Excellent
Patti
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I was enjoying the poem so much I didn't even notice the A-Z stuff ... duh! A lovely poem, Mikey and I completely agree with your theory about jumping into love full on, both feet - Cannonball!! If you lose at least ya know. I don't want to die with a whole plateful of What Ifs in front of me.
Excellent
Patti
Comment Written 14-Jul-2014
