Comment from Warren Rodgers

Excellent

Brooke,
Another terrific topic to ponder "if Heaven ever visits Earth". There's one I had not thought about. I love the images your words project by use of great word choices and perfect meter. I really enjoy reading and writing in 8/6 syllable count. They always seem to come out singing!
All he best,
Rodger

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014

Thank you so very much, Rodger. I appreciate your visits today :-) Brooke

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

This creates such beautiful thoughts and imagery. A delightful view of the world and the wonderful treasure the butterfly is. Heaven must have kaleidoscopes of butterflies. They create such beauty. I am impressed with how you can turn something so simple into a rare find.
Your writing is flawless in rhyme and meter. It gives me a fine example to shoot for.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014

Thank you so much for your reviews tonight :-) Brooke

Comment from Dutchie

Excellent

How nice, butterflies as visitors from heaven. Such a beautiful thought. I did not know a group of butterflies is called a kaleidoscope. Great imagination and wonderfull rhyme.
A little gem, this poem. Fia

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014

Thank you, Fia, for your gracious response to this poem :-) Brooke

Comment from sibhus

Excellent

So wonderful thoughts on a visitation from heaven. I imagen a troop of butterflies as messengers from above, they flit among the flowers as liitle burst of beauty and warmth. Great poem with a great picture, good stuff there, Brooke.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014

Thank you so very much, sibhus :-) Brooke

Comment from lizabethrita

Excellent

So lovely , as usual. Each time I read your work, it is like a drink from a sparkling fountain, in the middle of a scented garden. Really, you add something to my day.
Thank you.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014

What a lovely thing to say, lizabethrita. thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Victoria K

Excellent

Another beautifully evocative poem from you!

It sings out to the reader in its lyricism.

Your photo pairing is perfection :)

Victoria

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014

Thanks so very much, Victoria :-) Brooke

Comment from Laurie Clayton

Excellent

Beautiful imagery and rhythm, Brooke. I have always considered butterflies to be 'Earth's Angels' nice to know I'm not alone on that score.

Thank you for sharing.

Laurie

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014

Thanks so much, Laurie, for your thoughtful comments :-) Brooke

Comment from visionary1234

Excellent

Wow! what truly stunning art work Brooke! (I don't usually comment on art but who can help it with this one!?) a 'kaleidoscope' of butterflies, hmm? A sweetie write!
:)Sharyn

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014

Sharyn, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Exceptional

A stunning and colourful image. How appropriate that a group is called a kaleidoscope. En masse they are really stunning-truly a kaleidoscope of colour.
I love the entire presentation and the beautiful array of golden yellow in the images and text.
How very astute you have been to mesh all these elements together so well and maintain the stated meter and rhyme.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014

Seken, thank you so much for your generous and encouraging response to this poem. Brooke :-)

Comment from rob50ert

Excellent

Very nice read. Beautiful sentiment. excellent construction.

I especially like the last stanze

If Heaven ever visits Earth,
I'm placing my request --
kaleidoscopes of butterflies
be there at my behest.

Beautiful

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014

robert, thank you so much :-) Brooke