Should Droughts Deplete the Land
rhyming quatrains in 6//6/8/6129 total reviews
Comment from michaelcahill
I love this and even more so with the back story behind the pictures! That's a good sign to be that overjoyed by a word!!n How uplifting these words are. I hope someone gets a little joy out of my smile, it will be on display all day! mikey
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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I love this and even more so with the back story behind the pictures! That's a good sign to be that overjoyed by a word!!n How uplifting these words are. I hope someone gets a little joy out of my smile, it will be on display all day! mikey
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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Mikey, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from 9999pool
Be it the end of the world or the sun don't shine anymore, your smile can drive away the blues and moaning.
If the sand reclaim the sea as droughts deplete the land, here is hope and happiness in your smile.
If tomorrow fails to wake up for me, then the smile will forever remain close to the heart as the souls go to heaven, smiles.
All it takes is a smile to give gladness and joy to our hearts, smiles.
Great write and very well expressed a smile.
Cheerio, hugs, Ritchie. :))
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Be it the end of the world or the sun don't shine anymore, your smile can drive away the blues and moaning.
If the sand reclaim the sea as droughts deplete the land, here is hope and happiness in your smile.
If tomorrow fails to wake up for me, then the smile will forever remain close to the heart as the souls go to heaven, smiles.
All it takes is a smile to give gladness and joy to our hearts, smiles.
Great write and very well expressed a smile.
Cheerio, hugs, Ritchie. :))
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Ritchie, thanks so much :-) Brooke
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Big smiles.
Ritchie. :))
Have a wonderful day.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
I can see why the joy of a wonderful array of smiles like Sawyer's could make up for a multitude of natural disasters of land, sea and sky. And to think that the smiles can be won by hearing that interesting word! (Your daughter is an excellent photographer. Does she do this professionally, or is she just a gifted amateur?] Love, Jeanie
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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I can see why the joy of a wonderful array of smiles like Sawyer's could make up for a multitude of natural disasters of land, sea and sky. And to think that the smiles can be won by hearing that interesting word! (Your daughter is an excellent photographer. Does she do this professionally, or is she just a gifted amateur?] Love, Jeanie
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Jeanie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from SaluteDobby
Hi Brooke,
aww. Sawyer is getting cuter by the day! And what a heart-warming smile!
I can see why you won't have any regrets, should all life on Earth come to a standstill.
Thanks for sharing. And God bless you and your wonderful family!
Regards,
Namratha
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Hi Brooke,
aww. Sawyer is getting cuter by the day! And what a heart-warming smile!
I can see why you won't have any regrets, should all life on Earth come to a standstill.
Thanks for sharing. And God bless you and your wonderful family!
Regards,
Namratha
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Namratha, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from fastdigits
your poetic artistry is always
on stage, but somehow, this
piece of magic sings its way
down the screen, caressing the
heart and soul in a softness
that gently wraps itself around
me as I pause to read this piece
of magic.
Well done
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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your poetic artistry is always
on stage, but somehow, this
piece of magic sings its way
down the screen, caressing the
heart and soul in a softness
that gently wraps itself around
me as I pause to read this piece
of magic.
Well done
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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fastdigits, thank you so very much for your gracious comments and generous review :-) Brooke
Comment from sibhus
Frightful thoughts, but as you have stated if you have that special person's smile it won't matter in the end. Thought this was good despite the dire look for the world's future, which I'm sure is just around the corner.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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Frightful thoughts, but as you have stated if you have that special person's smile it won't matter in the end. Thought this was good despite the dire look for the world's future, which I'm sure is just around the corner.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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sibhus, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from victor 66
I believe as adults, we 'teach by example' to our children and grandchildren. "Children become their parents" or whom ever they spend the most time. Part of what you saw "within your smile", I'm sure came from you. Best wishes, Brooke.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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I believe as adults, we 'teach by example' to our children and grandchildren. "Children become their parents" or whom ever they spend the most time. Part of what you saw "within your smile", I'm sure came from you. Best wishes, Brooke.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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Victor, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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I just enjoy your poems. Your observations of children make me think that there is hope for this world.
Comment from billscott
The word supercalifr....oh my. After saying that word I need some water to wash it down or something.
Fun poem and poignant just the same.
Love your angle on poetry.
It's no wonder you're popular!
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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The word supercalifr....oh my. After saying that word I need some water to wash it down or something.
Fun poem and poignant just the same.
Love your angle on poetry.
It's no wonder you're popular!
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Bill, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from LoannaLois
A perfect Ten. Those last words are so perfectly and sincerely written, that it made me drop a tear.I am always in awe of the innate talent you have been given, my friend.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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A perfect Ten. Those last words are so perfectly and sincerely written, that it made me drop a tear.I am always in awe of the innate talent you have been given, my friend.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Lois, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Bobby Jo
Thinking in destruction never got us anywhere, worrying about the future and what tomorrow holds. I liked this fun poem. Great job.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Thinking in destruction never got us anywhere, worrying about the future and what tomorrow holds. I liked this fun poem. Great job.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Bobby Jo, thank you so much :-) Brooke
