Altered Ego
Why Clark Kent and Superman never meet...34 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in good 5/7/5 format and definitely is humorous :-)
love the interrupted line as the speaker realizes Hyde is nowhere in sight and then the play on words with hiding/hyding :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2014
Your poem is in good 5/7/5 format and definitely is humorous :-)
love the interrupted line as the speaker realizes Hyde is nowhere in sight and then the play on words with hiding/hyding :-) Brooke
Comment Written 07-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2014
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Thanks, Brooke.
Steve
Comment from ArtGal
Oh no, lol! Of course we know they can't be at the same place at the same time. How very clever! I used to love watching these on TV, scary at the time but always intrigued. Good one, and I wish you the best in this prompt. . .Sharon
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
Oh no, lol! Of course we know they can't be at the same place at the same time. How very clever! I used to love watching these on TV, scary at the time but always intrigued. Good one, and I wish you the best in this prompt. . .Sharon
Comment Written 04-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
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Thanks, Sharon.
Steve
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You're so very welcome.
Comment from DALLAS01
I loved this. A great play on words. This is really clever, it should do well in the contest. Good luck.
Ah, Doctor Jekyll,
I'd like you to meet Mr.....
Now where's he Hyding?!
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
I loved this. A great play on words. This is really clever, it should do well in the contest. Good luck.
Ah, Doctor Jekyll,
I'd like you to meet Mr.....
Now where's he Hyding?!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
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Thank you!
Steve
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you're welcome
Comment from Ridley Williams
Hi Steve,
I appreciated your clever use of wording to portay this inspired piece of work. I can't believe this did not win, it must have been a very close vote in the contest! Great originality with this entry, well done, Bill
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
Hi Steve,
I appreciated your clever use of wording to portay this inspired piece of work. I can't believe this did not win, it must have been a very close vote in the contest! Great originality with this entry, well done, Bill
Comment Written 04-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
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Thanks, Bill.
In fact there was a runaway winner for this - one entry had a great belly-laugh joke which out-weighed any cleverness anybody else could produce...
Steve
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is a very cute and humorous 5-7-5 poem. Very clever. I hope it did or does well in the contest.
~~Teresa~~
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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
This is a very cute and humorous 5-7-5 poem. Very clever. I hope it did or does well in the contest.
~~Teresa~~
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Comment Written 04-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
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Thanks, Teresa.
No luck in the contest I'm afraid - one very funny entry stole all the votes.
Steve
Comment from Visheshta Dahiya
nice one..!!
the words are well chosen and used. the presentation is nice. the picture complements your work.
best of luck for the contest.
Visheshta
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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
nice one..!!
the words are well chosen and used. the presentation is nice. the picture complements your work.
best of luck for the contest.
Visheshta
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Comment Written 04-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
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Thanks, Visheshta
Steve
Comment from Bobby Jo
Okay this is another joke within itself. My daughter would love this, she is so into this sort of thing right now. Thanks for the smile.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
Okay this is another joke within itself. My daughter would love this, she is so into this sort of thing right now. Thanks for the smile.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
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Thank you!
Steve
Comment from Bill Schott
Besides being a funny 5-7-5, that is a cool ass graphic of the two personalities. It's like a Joker or face card. Nice job with the whole thing.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
Besides being a funny 5-7-5, that is a cool ass graphic of the two personalities. It's like a Joker or face card. Nice job with the whole thing.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
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Thank you.
The really cool thing about the graphic is that when you look at it upside down, the other name is spelled out....
Steve
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I lover the poem. It is really hard to keep track of an altered ego. Especially when you get older. They tend to wanderer off. It is harder to chase them down. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
I love the picture. I lover the poem. It is really hard to keep track of an altered ego. Especially when you get older. They tend to wanderer off. It is harder to chase them down. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
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Thanks for the funny response - gotta go and look for my other half now.
Steve
Comment from 9999pool
A clever, humorous twist of words to bring out the hoot.
Dr Jekyll is Mr Hyde but how can he find someone that is him, smiles.
I have heard of the Hall of Mirrors and maybe the answer is in there, perhaps? Big smiles.
A Great hoot and well pen.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
A clever, humorous twist of words to bring out the hoot.
Dr Jekyll is Mr Hyde but how can he find someone that is him, smiles.
I have heard of the Hall of Mirrors and maybe the answer is in there, perhaps? Big smiles.
A Great hoot and well pen.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
Comment Written 04-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
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Thanks, Ritchie.
Steve
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Welcome, smiles.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))