Treasure is Transported
rhyming quatrains152 total reviews
Comment from Deniz22
You are so excellent! Sawyer is so sweet in this picture that is so integrated within your words. When I grow up, I wanta be a writer like you..:)
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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You are so excellent! Sawyer is so sweet in this picture that is so integrated within your words. When I grow up, I wanta be a writer like you..:)
Comment Written 25-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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Deniz, thank you so very much for your wonderfully encouraging and generous review :-) Brooke
Comment from 1954speed
Very well said in simple straightforward language. The voice of the child rings alive through your words in how important he feels this is. Or perhaps, just the joy of the task is all he wants! Who can really know a child's mind?
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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Very well said in simple straightforward language. The voice of the child rings alive through your words in how important he feels this is. Or perhaps, just the joy of the task is all he wants! Who can really know a child's mind?
Comment Written 25-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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1954speed, thank you so much for your gracious and generous review :-) Brooke
Comment from Treischel
So cute the photo, so delightful the simple abcb rhymed verse. Spreading springtime, indeed. Nice alliteration in treasure transported, spreading springtime.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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So cute the photo, so delightful the simple abcb rhymed verse. Spreading springtime, indeed. Nice alliteration in treasure transported, spreading springtime.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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Treischel, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from donaldcolson
I like the first stanza best in your youthful poem about a simple pleasure which may be lost to us in adulthood. Brings back pleasant memories. don
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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I like the first stanza best in your youthful poem about a simple pleasure which may be lost to us in adulthood. Brings back pleasant memories. don
Comment Written 25-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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Donald, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from twinklepoems
Ah, someone is teaching Sawyer the joy of dandelions! I like your alliteration with treasure/transported, spreading/springtime. I like the imagery of golden carpets. Short and sweet!
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Ah, someone is teaching Sawyer the joy of dandelions! I like your alliteration with treasure/transported, spreading/springtime. I like the imagery of golden carpets. Short and sweet!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2014
Comment from mermaids
I love your first two lines of treasure being transported in dandelion seeds. They do indeed transport treasure. Your flow of words and lines makes me feel good, spring will arrive yet.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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I love your first two lines of treasure being transported in dandelion seeds. They do indeed transport treasure. Your flow of words and lines makes me feel good, spring will arrive yet.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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Elaine, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Louise Michelle
This is simply charming, Brooke. I love the line: spreading springtime cheer. So original, so delightful. You always spread happiness and joy through your poetry. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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This is simply charming, Brooke. I love the line: spreading springtime cheer. So original, so delightful. You always spread happiness and joy through your poetry. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 25-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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Lou, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from marycec
Good use of alliteration in ,'treasure is transported' and spreading springtime cheer'. Our garden is awash with daffodils right now and we do root out dandelions but there is nothing more glorious than seeing lots of buttercups, daisies and dandelions growing wild - the little children's flowers.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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Good use of alliteration in ,'treasure is transported' and spreading springtime cheer'. Our garden is awash with daffodils right now and we do root out dandelions but there is nothing more glorious than seeing lots of buttercups, daisies and dandelions growing wild - the little children's flowers.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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Mary, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from GracieAnn
Brooke, you have captured the whimsey in the heart of a child that sees the seeds as fascinating entertainment not caring how big people see weeds, but the beauty of a weed in a child's. Well done. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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Brooke, you have captured the whimsey in the heart of a child that sees the seeds as fascinating entertainment not caring how big people see weeds, but the beauty of a weed in a child's. Well done. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 25-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2014
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GracieAnn, thank you so much :-)Brooke
Comment from Irish Rain
Very true, I was reading the other night the amazing design of nature, that enables the transporting...loved the lightness, and of course, the vision of the dandelion carpet! Blessings tonight!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Very true, I was reading the other night the amazing design of nature, that enables the transporting...loved the lightness, and of course, the vision of the dandelion carpet! Blessings tonight!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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justjo, thank you so much :-) Brooke
