No One Knows
ABC Poem147 total reviews
Comment from Quire's Gal
just stopping by to say how much I love this. This is something I'd expect to see in the Tao D'Ching, a famous book of Japanese wisdom. The final line gives it a mind-boggling punch.
Be well,
Katherine
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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just stopping by to say how much I love this. This is something I'd expect to see in the Tao D'Ching, a famous book of Japanese wisdom. The final line gives it a mind-boggling punch.
Be well,
Katherine
Comment Written 23-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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Katherine, thank you so much, my encouraging friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Fleedleflump
This is beautifully written, Brooke, with a thoughtful pace that suits the form and reminded me of pulsing thoughts, washing back and forth in my mind. Quiet peaceful, and a little soothing - lovely :-)
Mike
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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This is beautifully written, Brooke, with a thoughtful pace that suits the form and reminded me of pulsing thoughts, washing back and forth in my mind. Quiet peaceful, and a little soothing - lovely :-)
Mike
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Thanks so much, Mike :-) Brooke
Comment from IndianaIrish
A great ABC poem, Brooke, that carries the thought through the lines without realization of the letters used. Very nice alliteration, and love the message of looking up to see. Best wishes in the contest.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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A great ABC poem, Brooke, that carries the thought through the lines without realization of the letters used. Very nice alliteration, and love the message of looking up to see. Best wishes in the contest.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Karyn, thank you so very much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Alanna Renee
This is a great mix of beauty and mystery wrapped together in rich language. I especially like "luna luminates the sky, mariposa flutters by". Inspiring message about looking up to find new things. Great job. :) Alanna
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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This is a great mix of beauty and mystery wrapped together in rich language. I especially like "luna luminates the sky, mariposa flutters by". Inspiring message about looking up to find new things. Great job. :) Alanna
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Alanna, thank you so much for your gracious and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from robina1978
Excellent artwork to complement your well written ABC Poem
Oh I thought where is Sawyer but he is part of it too. Best wishes for the contest
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Excellent artwork to complement your well written ABC Poem
Oh I thought where is Sawyer but he is part of it too. Best wishes for the contest
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2014
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Ine, thank you so very much :-) I so appreciate your generous sixth star and kind contest wishes :-) Brooke
Comment from marijmd
Love the first two lines! Great rhyme scheme and the words bring up perfectly formed imagery. Indeed - we dont know what will be coming unless we look.
:) Maria
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Love the first two lines! Great rhyme scheme and the words bring up perfectly formed imagery. Indeed - we dont know what will be coming unless we look.
:) Maria
Comment Written 18-Mar-2014
Comment from Selina Stambi
A lovely little creation. I love the depth of thought expressed in the final lines.
We have to lift up our eyes to SEE.
Best wishes in the contest, prolific lady.
Sonali :)
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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A lovely little creation. I love the depth of thought expressed in the final lines.
We have to lift up our eyes to SEE.
Best wishes in the contest, prolific lady.
Sonali :)
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Sonali, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from rouskin
No one knows what there might be,till they lift their eyes to see. Words of wisdom and excellent artwork I wish you the best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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No one knows what there might be,till they lift their eyes to see. Words of wisdom and excellent artwork I wish you the best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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rouskin, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from amada
Beautiful, beautiful ABC poem. It left me with a wide smile in my face and in my mind. Such a wonderful take from a child point of view.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Beautiful, beautiful ABC poem. It left me with a wide smile in my face and in my mind. Such a wonderful take from a child point of view.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Nancy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from comanalbert
Being from a Latin based country, luna is the same word in my homeland language and I find it more expressive than the English word.
There is so much mystery in their dreams and hopes that it will take us a lifetime just to guess what is going up there, in those pretty heads...
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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Being from a Latin based country, luna is the same word in my homeland language and I find it more expressive than the English word.
There is so much mystery in their dreams and hopes that it will take us a lifetime just to guess what is going up there, in those pretty heads...
Comment Written 17-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2014
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comanalbert, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
