You'll Never Find
A Rispetto175 total reviews
Comment from melodymavic
Hello Brooke :)
This poem is full of joy and happiness. The words are simple yet catchy to the point that i like to learn to rhythm. :) This reminds me the greatest moment to spend time the person you treasure. It makes life a better.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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Hello Brooke :)
This poem is full of joy and happiness. The words are simple yet catchy to the point that i like to learn to rhythm. :) This reminds me the greatest moment to spend time the person you treasure. It makes life a better.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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melodymavic, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from poetbear
Twelve stars and poetic perfection in technique and execution.
Great image,imagery,and flow!
Wonderful metaphor!
Makes sense and is important.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2014
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Twelve stars and poetic perfection in technique and execution.
Great image,imagery,and flow!
Wonderful metaphor!
Makes sense and is important.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2014
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Maddie, thank you so much for your graciousness and generosity :-) Brooke
Comment from Caressa_08
Oh, Sawyer's look is so precious & quite a compliment for your rhyming poem, You'll Never Find. A very pleasant read & really like the second line of the first stanza.
Caressa
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
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Oh, Sawyer's look is so precious & quite a compliment for your rhyming poem, You'll Never Find. A very pleasant read & really like the second line of the first stanza.
Caressa
Comment Written 22-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014
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Caressa, thank you so much. I just read your grandchild was born a little early. Congratulations on this wonderful addition to your family, and I will keep baby and mom in my prayers :-) Brooke
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Thanks so much Brooke, prayers are always so helpful...I'm calling Baby Breyden, a little miracle baby, & think his 39 yr old mom will be coming home, along with him soon. My son is 37, an Afghan vet that had a lot of medical problems, though better...This is his very first newborn & loves being a father. ..They married last year & with her 2 children I now have a total of 6 grandchildren...Greg's twin brother, Jon & his wife have 2 daughters, Madeline 11 & Olivia 1...My recently divorced daughter, Wendy & oldest lives in Houston, Texas & she has a 17 yr old son named Chance......C.
Comment from stephybs
I like the red writing this clearly states how important things in life and lives are. When we combine the two our heart just melt there is nothing more meaningful as a child's smile. Excellent poetry! And lovely picture's
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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I like the red writing this clearly states how important things in life and lives are. When we combine the two our heart just melt there is nothing more meaningful as a child's smile. Excellent poetry! And lovely picture's
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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steph, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Ridley Williams
Hi Brooke,
I loved this simple message. It seems our perception of happiness has become quite blurred, as of late. We now seem to operate under the idea that contentment is achieved through possessions, when in truth, peace lies within each of our souls...and all for free! Wonderful thought and delivery, with an easy meter that made for an enjoyable read. Well done, and best wishes, Bill
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Hi Brooke,
I loved this simple message. It seems our perception of happiness has become quite blurred, as of late. We now seem to operate under the idea that contentment is achieved through possessions, when in truth, peace lies within each of our souls...and all for free! Wonderful thought and delivery, with an easy meter that made for an enjoyable read. Well done, and best wishes, Bill
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Bill, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Fluffyhead
Have you thought of writing a book with all these poems in it. so so precious is all I have to say and so is the boy in the picture.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Have you thought of writing a book with all these poems in it. so so precious is all I have to say and so is the boy in the picture.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, Fluffyhead, for your thoughtful review and encouragement :-) Brooke
Comment from annp
As a new comer to the world of fanstory I almost didn't write this review for such a high ranking member but I loved reading this and did it with a smile on my face
I sometimes drift off when reading lengthy or abstract verses
so this was right up my street (as they say in England)
short but perfectly conveyed
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2014
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As a new comer to the world of fanstory I almost didn't write this review for such a high ranking member but I loved reading this and did it with a smile on my face
I sometimes drift off when reading lengthy or abstract verses
so this was right up my street (as they say in England)
short but perfectly conveyed
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2014
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annp, Welcome to Fan Story. I hope you have a wonderful experience here. I remember being new over five years ago, and I have loved my time here :-) Thank you for reviewing. Brooke
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thank you
Comment from Connie C
There's nothing like a little red frosting all over a toddler's face to bring on a smile from others. It is so true that a smile, especially a grandchild's smile, is a much greater gift than all the things you mention in your delightful Rispetto. Only five more weeks now until I get to have a darling little grandson like Sawyer. You just know I'll be using him as the subject of many poems. I hope they'll be as enjoyable as yours always are with Sawyer.
My best to you, Brooke.
Connie
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2014
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There's nothing like a little red frosting all over a toddler's face to bring on a smile from others. It is so true that a smile, especially a grandchild's smile, is a much greater gift than all the things you mention in your delightful Rispetto. Only five more weeks now until I get to have a darling little grandson like Sawyer. You just know I'll be using him as the subject of many poems. I hope they'll be as enjoyable as yours always are with Sawyer.
My best to you, Brooke.
Connie
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2014
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Connie, thank you so much :-) Five weeks - the anticipation really kicks in at that point - I can't wait to be reading your grandson poems. Do you know his name yet? Brooke
Comment from daeneam
Sawyer is lovable as ever. I truly agree with you that the best things in life are free... and they are not things... they are the people we loved and cared for... our children, our husband, our friends... our family.
God bless you, Brooke! Been so busy... I stopped by to relax and do the things I love - thanks for sharing your thoughts for free. c", Mae
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Sawyer is lovable as ever. I truly agree with you that the best things in life are free... and they are not things... they are the people we loved and cared for... our children, our husband, our friends... our family.
God bless you, Brooke! Been so busy... I stopped by to relax and do the things I love - thanks for sharing your thoughts for free. c", Mae
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Mae, thanks so very much for your gracious and generous review :-) Brooke
Comment from Smoothiecool
your words allow the reader to see and feel the images portrayed in this short write that no matter how wide and far one look the greatest gift of grace is in a near by smile
yes a smile will always lift the spirit
flows well easy read
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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your words allow the reader to see and feel the images portrayed in this short write that no matter how wide and far one look the greatest gift of grace is in a near by smile
yes a smile will always lift the spirit
flows well easy read
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 19-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2014
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Smoothiecool, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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most welcome..SC
