Destination: Hope
The Last Train Back61 total reviews
Comment from Tina Crute
Browsing some recognized work...What a creative story in a poem! I thoroughly enjoyed it! The train trip was a great metaphor for our journey. I love the phrase ,"solutions lie within." That strong phrase contributes well to an encouraging story of hope.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Browsing some recognized work...What a creative story in a poem! I thoroughly enjoyed it! The train trip was a great metaphor for our journey. I love the phrase ,"solutions lie within." That strong phrase contributes well to an encouraging story of hope.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2019
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Thank you
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You're welcome!:) Have a great Sunday!
Blessings,
Tina
Comment from JosieL
Very well written with great insight. I related to this poem step-by-step. I really like "romantic" suicide. Two words that represent so much. Thank you for a very good read.
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Very well written with great insight. I related to this poem step-by-step. I really like "romantic" suicide. Two words that represent so much. Thank you for a very good read.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2018
Comment from GeorgieBoy
Don't we all wish we had a fatherly conductor to give us wise advice. I loved the fact that you used all these emotions as a place on your journey. You reached the destination, Hope, but had to experience and bypass all the other emotions to reach your destination. Well done!
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Don't we all wish we had a fatherly conductor to give us wise advice. I loved the fact that you used all these emotions as a place on your journey. You reached the destination, Hope, but had to experience and bypass all the other emotions to reach your destination. Well done!
Comment Written 31-Jan-2015
Comment from pantheon
Capturing the beauty of the place and narrating the travel experience tersely
the poem is beautifully written. Enjoyed reading it
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Capturing the beauty of the place and narrating the travel experience tersely
the poem is beautifully written. Enjoyed reading it
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
Comment from JPilcher
This is, without a doubt, the most brilliant piece of work I've read on FanStory EVER. I'm not kidding. This is brrrrriiiiillllliiiiaaaannnnnttttt. WOW. Your title sold me, your illustration made me want to read it only THAT MUCH more and the actual writing did not disappoint - not a single word. WOW.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2014
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This is, without a doubt, the most brilliant piece of work I've read on FanStory EVER. I'm not kidding. This is brrrrriiiiillllliiiiaaaannnnnttttt. WOW. Your title sold me, your illustration made me want to read it only THAT MUCH more and the actual writing did not disappoint - not a single word. WOW.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2014
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What a sweet review, JPilcher. Thank you so much for the sixer, and for your kind words. I'm not really posting here anymore, but I check in every now and then for messages. I truly appreciate the wonderful compliments.
David
Comment from Drew Delaney
Wow! this is totally awesome. I am so impressed with your poetry. I just can't imagine the work you put into this, but if you are like other great poets, they say it just comes. If I had half your talent!!
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Wow! this is totally awesome. I am so impressed with your poetry. I just can't imagine the work you put into this, but if you are like other great poets, they say it just comes. If I had half your talent!!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2014
Comment from Robin Gilmor
Don't know how I missed this one in my messages. I've been so busy that I have not be in the site for some time. This is a beautiful verse and I am so happy for you and all the rewards. They are certainly well deserved.
Love and hugs, Robin :)
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Don't know how I missed this one in my messages. I've been so busy that I have not be in the site for some time. This is a beautiful verse and I am so happy for you and all the rewards. They are certainly well deserved.
Love and hugs, Robin :)
Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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My friend, that is so appreciated. I'm just now returning, so I'm sorry for the delay in my response. Thank you for the sixer and your kind words.
Comment from Hadria
Awesome! Many, many congratulations, my friend. I've been engulfed in family matters and am just trying to catch up on what everyone has been doing. This is another one for my bookcase, and I look forward to reading it regularly. A superb piece of work. Hadria
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Awesome! Many, many congratulations, my friend. I've been engulfed in family matters and am just trying to catch up on what everyone has been doing. This is another one for my bookcase, and I look forward to reading it regularly. A superb piece of work. Hadria
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
I am awe-struck.
What an amazing poem which took me on a convoluted and painful journey from sadness to hope with several pit-stops on the way.
I love the idea of a journey from one emotion to another and the fact that other emotions are acknowledged in the healing process.
This is definitely one of the best poems I''ve read.
Although very worthy of a six I only have a virtual one to give.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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I am awe-struck.
What an amazing poem which took me on a convoluted and painful journey from sadness to hope with several pit-stops on the way.
I love the idea of a journey from one emotion to another and the fact that other emotions are acknowledged in the healing process.
This is definitely one of the best poems I''ve read.
Although very worthy of a six I only have a virtual one to give.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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What a very kind review, seken. Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review it. I gratefully accept your sixer.
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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 A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for the recognition this post has received from the FanStory community. While this was not a Contest Committee decision, the committee recognizes this achievement with a seven star review. |
Comment Written 12-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much for the honor. I appreciate it!
