A Stolen Kiss
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Comment from Bill Schott
This is so funny. I enjoy this shot as the poor kid looks for help from anywhere. The poem captures the act well and recognizes this young lad as a heartbreaker.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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This is so funny. I enjoy this shot as the poor kid looks for help from anywhere. The poem captures the act well and recognizes this young lad as a heartbreaker.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Bill, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from rhymelord
Dear Brooke,
This must be the girl next door that I referred to in my comment on another poem of yours. I can see she might search for revenge as Sawyer obviously is not concentrating on the kiss.
Reg
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Dear Brooke,
This must be the girl next door that I referred to in my comment on another poem of yours. I can see she might search for revenge as Sawyer obviously is not concentrating on the kiss.
Reg
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Reg, thank you so much :-) Chloe is far too smitten with Sawyer to do anything but kiss him again. LOL Brooke
Comment from Megajelimind
YOU ARE MAGNIFICENT! You have been sent by the gods of writing to this planet to renew mankind's joy! I love your happy poetry, shining light on the world through the eyes of a child. It's beautiful and inspiring, and Sawyer is just adorable!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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YOU ARE MAGNIFICENT! You have been sent by the gods of writing to this planet to renew mankind's joy! I love your happy poetry, shining light on the world through the eyes of a child. It's beautiful and inspiring, and Sawyer is just adorable!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Megajelimind, thank you so very much for your friendly and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from His Grayness
Dear Brooke: this is spectacular...so amazingly cute and sure to be a feature in the book! You are so blessed to have such a beautiful grandson and he is so blessed to have such a loving AND AMAZINGLY TALENTED Grandmother! Can we work out a discount in advance for the book???? VANCE
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Dear Brooke: this is spectacular...so amazingly cute and sure to be a feature in the book! You are so blessed to have such a beautiful grandson and he is so blessed to have such a loving AND AMAZINGLY TALENTED Grandmother! Can we work out a discount in advance for the book???? VANCE
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, Vance, for your gracious encouragement :-) Brooke
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL, so that is your Sawyer's girlfriend, Chloe! She is as pretty as my granddaughter, Chloe. Sawyer has very good taste already!! What a sweet poem to go with that sweet photo. I did think that Sawyer looked a little bemused by it though. LOl. xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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LOL, so that is your Sawyer's girlfriend, Chloe! She is as pretty as my granddaughter, Chloe. Sawyer has very good taste already!! What a sweet poem to go with that sweet photo. I did think that Sawyer looked a little bemused by it though. LOl. xsx Sandra
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Thanks so very much, Sandra. He has such a crush on Chloe - he calls her up on his play phone whenever she is not around, but he always looks a bit bemused by her public displays of affection. LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from Shirley B
Dear Brooke, This poem is precious. Sawyer looks like he isn't too sure about the kiss and Chloe really is a poacher. :) I can't wait until Sawyer grows up and sees this awesome pictures and beautiful poems. Great job, Shirley
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Dear Brooke, This poem is precious. Sawyer looks like he isn't too sure about the kiss and Chloe really is a poacher. :) I can't wait until Sawyer grows up and sees this awesome pictures and beautiful poems. Great job, Shirley
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, Shirley. Chloe is definitely more into public displays of affection. LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from joeakeefe
This is very well constructed with a complement of rhyme. The theme is fascinating as you choose to illustrate it with the photo of two children. If they were in a public school setting in Massachusetts, the "poacher' would probably be suspended for a sexual assault. The same might be the case in other states as legislatures have enacted a variety of "protective laws.'
joeakeefe
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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This is very well constructed with a complement of rhyme. The theme is fascinating as you choose to illustrate it with the photo of two children. If they were in a public school setting in Massachusetts, the "poacher' would probably be suspended for a sexual assault. The same might be the case in other states as legislatures have enacted a variety of "protective laws.'
joeakeefe
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Joe, yes, it is sad that things change so quickly as children grow older. It's too bad that innocence is given such a short time in our society. Thanks so much for your thoughtful review. Brooke
Comment from Em08
Aw this is such a lovely poem especially with the beautiful photo to go with the poem. Not too long and straight to the point. I also love the layout looks really professional. Thanks for a great read.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Aw this is such a lovely poem especially with the beautiful photo to go with the poem. Not too long and straight to the point. I also love the layout looks really professional. Thanks for a great read.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Em08, thank you so much for your thoughtful comments and generous sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from Izzieshakespeare
I like the sentiment of this poem, but I'm not sure what a "stolen" kiss would be. I guess that would be an unexpected kiss in the sense of your poem; otherwise, there might be harassment problems! Overall, loved the meter and rhyming in the poem.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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I like the sentiment of this poem, but I'm not sure what a "stolen" kiss would be. I guess that would be an unexpected kiss in the sense of your poem; otherwise, there might be harassment problems! Overall, loved the meter and rhyming in the poem.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Thank you, Izzie. Yes, I meant that this little girl sneaked up behind him to plant her kiss. Very innocent. LOL Brooke
Comment from TonyD
A light and airy poem. Easy to read and brings back memories of stolen kisses in my days. Those were certainly not crimes since love was definitely in my heart.
TonyD
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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A light and airy poem. Easy to read and brings back memories of stolen kisses in my days. Those were certainly not crimes since love was definitely in my heart.
TonyD
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Thank you, TonyD, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
