Ezekiel Had Half a Smile
quatrains in 8/6/8/6 pure whimsy163 total reviews
Comment from Jean Lutz
Your words and his pictures have allowed FanStorians to watch him grow up. All of the writings are special to me because of the nanny care I provide for three children under five. The latest one, which will be three months old on January 20th, is managing a half-smile -- with dimples. Life's treasures!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Your words and his pictures have allowed FanStorians to watch him grow up. All of the writings are special to me because of the nanny care I provide for three children under five. The latest one, which will be three months old on January 20th, is managing a half-smile -- with dimples. Life's treasures!
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014
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Jean, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from heyjude
Brooke, I really like this. It is a fun poem, but
we do enjoy those smiles; especially of our grandchildren.
This rhymes and flows really well.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Brooke, I really like this. It is a fun poem, but
we do enjoy those smiles; especially of our grandchildren.
This rhymes and flows really well.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Judy, thank you so much :-)
Brooke
Comment from lakeport
Ezekiel had half a smile. indeed a beautiful photo, that's a beautiful expressed poem, nice rhyming, I enjoyed it, Got bless you. Hugs!lakeport.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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Ezekiel had half a smile. indeed a beautiful photo, that's a beautiful expressed poem, nice rhyming, I enjoyed it, Got bless you. Hugs!lakeport.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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lakeport, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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your welcome.Hugs!lakeport.
Comment from daymanrayne
This poem is a parents biggest joy to see there kid smile like that. I loved the picture that went along with this as well..Good job
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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This poem is a parents biggest joy to see there kid smile like that. I loved the picture that went along with this as well..Good job
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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daymanrayne, thank you so much for your insights and your generous sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from map261354
Nice poem, Adewpearl! You just pointed out a reality, which is simple but never fades and makes the thorns grow to flowers. Nevertheless, nothing is more beautiful than watching a smiling innocent baby. You forget all your sufferings. Thanks for your grand idea!
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Nice poem, Adewpearl! You just pointed out a reality, which is simple but never fades and makes the thorns grow to flowers. Nevertheless, nothing is more beautiful than watching a smiling innocent baby. You forget all your sufferings. Thanks for your grand idea!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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map, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Tatarka2
I just think this is delightful. The rhyming is perfect, and moves the poem along lyrically. I'm saving my poetry 6's for the Poem of the Month competition, but I think this is at least a 5 1/2. Can't think of any suggestions, really. It's a joy and a delight.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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I just think this is delightful. The rhyming is perfect, and moves the poem along lyrically. I'm saving my poetry 6's for the Poem of the Month competition, but I think this is at least a 5 1/2. Can't think of any suggestions, really. It's a joy and a delight.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Thank you for your thoughtful review, Tatarka :-) Brooke
Comment from babylonia
Brooke,
LOL What happens is he melts a lot of hearts. Made smile and giggle and smiggle some more. Easy to read and follow. I know he just lights up a room. Hope you are having a great day.
Love,
Barbara
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Brooke,
LOL What happens is he melts a lot of hearts. Made smile and giggle and smiggle some more. Easy to read and follow. I know he just lights up a room. Hope you are having a great day.
Love,
Barbara
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Barbara, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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Brooke,
You are welcome~
Love,
Barbara
Comment from Spiritual Echo
Man, you have a beautiful grand child. And...photogenic. what a joyful face, and one whose every action will be immortalized by his very talented grandma.
On behalf of all of the grandmas out here...keep going. You make us smile, you make us laugh. Always a pleasure.
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Man, you have a beautiful grand child. And...photogenic. what a joyful face, and one whose every action will be immortalized by his very talented grandma.
On behalf of all of the grandmas out here...keep going. You make us smile, you make us laugh. Always a pleasure.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
Comment from Matoshka
The half smile of Sawyer, in this photo shows in his eyes. The half smile always makes one wonder what up in their minds, what their planning. LOL I so loved this Brooke, have another half today and smile big. LOL Blessings
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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The half smile of Sawyer, in this photo shows in his eyes. The half smile always makes one wonder what up in their minds, what their planning. LOL I so loved this Brooke, have another half today and smile big. LOL Blessings
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Matoshka, thank you so very much for your gracious and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
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So welcome Brooke, it is precious. Blessings
Comment from allinmyhead
I think this little one's half smile is priceless. There is a very old-soul look about him... he finds the world amusing. I'll just bet he will show himself to be quite intelligent as he gets older.
Now on the the poem, reads a bit like a limerick? Like the rhythm.
Cute, amusing, well-worded, with just the right touch of humor balanced with a message. Yes... setting our smiles free on the world can make all the difference, both to ourselves and to those around us.
Love your poetry.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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I think this little one's half smile is priceless. There is a very old-soul look about him... he finds the world amusing. I'll just bet he will show himself to be quite intelligent as he gets older.
Now on the the poem, reads a bit like a limerick? Like the rhythm.
Cute, amusing, well-worded, with just the right touch of humor balanced with a message. Yes... setting our smiles free on the world can make all the difference, both to ourselves and to those around us.
Love your poetry.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Allinmyhead, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
