Women at War
Vivian Bullwinkle - sole female survivor..31 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a wonderful poem in a story, Kay, so well told. There were many heroes out there who put themselves in danger to go to the aid of others. Unfortunately, these stories are not told as much as they should be, our youngsters aren't told of these historic and very heroic stories. Good luck in the contest, my friend. xsx sandra
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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What a wonderful poem in a story, Kay, so well told. There were many heroes out there who put themselves in danger to go to the aid of others. Unfortunately, these stories are not told as much as they should be, our youngsters aren't told of these historic and very heroic stories. Good luck in the contest, my friend. xsx sandra
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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Thank you possum; glad you liked the poem and thanks again for the six shiny Sherriff stars. Lots of love your way - Kay :-) XX
Comment from Alan K Pease
Those of a more recent generations do not remember the brutality of the Japanese during WWII. There were many is Singapore and Malaysa afterward as they were marched north to prison camps doing forced labor. Real heroes were many looking after chums. Vivian was lucky not to be martyred, but remains a living hero in your poetry until she recently passed away. Thank you for the story Aussie and your "talk."
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Those of a more recent generations do not remember the brutality of the Japanese during WWII. There were many is Singapore and Malaysa afterward as they were marched north to prison camps doing forced labor. Real heroes were many looking after chums. Vivian was lucky not to be martyred, but remains a living hero in your poetry until she recently passed away. Thank you for the story Aussie and your "talk."
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Hello dear friend Alan, I have a passion for Aust. history - Vivian went on after the war - one gutsy lady. Thank you for reading. Blessings, Kay :-)
Comment from Eleanor Buron
One of the more moving poems I have read concerning WWII - Not knowing this story of loss of soldiers' lives, sacrifice and bravery made the poem so interesting! Worth many more stars.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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One of the more moving poems I have read concerning WWII - Not knowing this story of loss of soldiers' lives, sacrifice and bravery made the poem so interesting! Worth many more stars.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Hello Elly, Thanks so much for your kind review and high rating. Hugs, Kay.
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As you can see, I haven't been on since January - not sure my account is active for posting. If you receive this, I hope you are well and enjoying the best life holds. Elly
Comment from mermaids
This is an important poem about a hero that needs to be remembered. I always enjoy reading about women in war,history does not always acknowledge them. Well done here.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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This is an important poem about a hero that needs to be remembered. I always enjoy reading about women in war,history does not always acknowledge them. Well done here.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Thank you my friend - glad you liked the story/poem, women don't get the front page. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from jmdg1954
Very well written historic depiction of an occurrence during WW2. The Japanese were merciless during that era. You told the story well, kept the readers interest and provided a good rhyme scheme throughout.
Nicely done... John
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Very well written historic depiction of an occurrence during WW2. The Japanese were merciless during that era. You told the story well, kept the readers interest and provided a good rhyme scheme throughout.
Nicely done... John
Comment Written 25-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Thank you John. Glad you enjoyed the story/poem. Cheers, Kay.
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good use of the abab rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with men/fen...dead/lead. Good description and alliteration. Good storytelling. Good complimentary photo followed by a message that holds my attention from start to finish.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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Good use of the abab rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with men/fen...dead/lead. Good description and alliteration. Good storytelling. Good complimentary photo followed by a message that holds my attention from start to finish.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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Thanks so much for reading - glad you enjoyed the story. Cheers, Kay.
Comment from Mastery
Bravery plus. Was that her real name? Bullwinkle? Over here, Bullwinkle is a moose cartoon. Amazing story about this woman and well said in poetic fashion, Aussie. Bob
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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Bravery plus. Was that her real name? Bullwinkle? Over here, Bullwinkle is a moose cartoon. Amazing story about this woman and well said in poetic fashion, Aussie. Bob
Comment Written 25-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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Yep, Bullwinkle was her real name; glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for reading. Cheers, Kay.
Comment from Cajungirl
You have managed to take a piece of history and turn it in to an exceptional and well written piece of art. The flow and rhyming are excellent. Best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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You have managed to take a piece of history and turn it in to an exceptional and well written piece of art. The flow and rhyming are excellent. Best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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Thanks so much for your kind review; glad you enjoyed the story/poem. Cheers, Kay.
Comment from Selina Stambi
Kay, what an amazing story you have put into verse!
You have conveyed the horror, tension and stress of the awful situation. A grand tribute to an incredible woman.
Loved it. All the best in the contest, dear lady.
Hugs,
xxx
Sonali :)
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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Kay, what an amazing story you have put into verse!
You have conveyed the horror, tension and stress of the awful situation. A grand tribute to an incredible woman.
Loved it. All the best in the contest, dear lady.
Hugs,
xxx
Sonali :)
Comment Written 25-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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Sonali, Thanks so much my dear friend; was a hard write to put it all together in a poem. Bless you, Kay. XX
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
This is so very well written and an extremely interesting story. It is an excellent entry for the story in a poem contest. You have written with vivid images and your rhyme scheme of abab is absolutely perfect. I think this will do well in the Story in a Poem contest. You tell us so much and never waiver in the rhyme. Good Luck. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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This is so very well written and an extremely interesting story. It is an excellent entry for the story in a poem contest. You have written with vivid images and your rhyme scheme of abab is absolutely perfect. I think this will do well in the Story in a Poem contest. You tell us so much and never waiver in the rhyme. Good Luck. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 25-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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Dorothy, Thanks so much for your kind review, glad you enjoyed the story/poem. Thanks also for the good wishes for the contest. Blessings, Kay. XX
