Comment from Janet Foor

Exceptional

Loved it and oh so true. Great picture and very good rhyming couplets. Especially liked the last two lines. Still laughing. Very well done and definitely deserves a sixer.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014

Thank you so much, Janet. Making you laugh is better than a sixer! Dennis

Comment from Petriesan

Exceptional

well, six for six, right?

and while shorter may be sweeter, I'd like to think the longer pieces that pull people in are the best, you know , the kind you just cannot stop. . .

I like this

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014

I totally agree...thanks for reading and commenting. Dennis

Comment from The Death

Excellent

A very sweet, fun and short poem about the thing we all face sometimes. I like its direct nature and light-heartedness.
It is true that sometimes, we do need luck with the bucks. I enjoyed reading it

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014

Thank you for your kind and understanding review. It is appreciated.

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

Well, you sure a wise guy. And so sincere too. You must be a real Godfather. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Good visual imagery. Expressive and sincere. Great.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014

Hmm, I have my pick of descriptive phrases; wise guy, sincere, Godfather, sincere (again)and I write well (composite of writing observations). Ok, I pick the latter and say thanks! :)

Comment from Gladness

Excellent

Ha ha, aint it the truth? There are times when that's just what we are looking for, some quick money.
Cute and funny poem, rhymed well and made me laugh :)
Anita

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014

Always glad to make you laugh and glad you understand. :) Dennis

Comment from MoIronE13

Excellent

The editor is in the house.
Skip to the chase and run like a turd...LOL
Great little fun read.
Thanks for the humorous write.
Appreciate it..

Mahina

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014

Thank you. So glad you liked it, and appreciate you commenting.

reply by MoIronE13 on 23-Jan-2014

Tis' a pleasure.

Comment from forestport12

Excellent

Oh yea, man. Keep those golden pluses coming baby. I can't get enough of those stellar reviews. I don't you will be getting rich any time soon though. How's the radio show coming?

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014

I'm with you...radio is twice daily 5 minutes...never know whose listening but here from some who seem to appreciate it. Thanks bro!

Comment from Cajungirl

Excellent

Hahahahaha, great job, I love your honesty. I must admit it is very hard to read a 3000 word story for 52 cents when you could read seventeen syllables for the same amount. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2014

Thanks Cajungirl, I agree but some times it's difficult to write a 3 sentence review for 17 syllables as well. :) Dennis

Comment from 24chas

Excellent

So true, Deniz22. I think you captured one of the faults with FS. I was muted by one of the top poets here for giving her a 4.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2014

I think it best to try to capture the real message the writer is seeking to expound and only give technical advice if requested. Frankly, I never give less than a five. I'm not really qualified to be a spag expert but I'm mostly alone in that confession on FS. Thanks for reading and commenting,24chas.

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Good satiric humor in this commentary on motivations for Fan Story reviewing
I love the honesty of admitting that reviewers often think the ideal read is one that's short and pays high
good use of rhyming couplets
Brooke

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2014

I've done my share of two centers I believe but sometimes, gotta make a quick FS buck! :) Thanks...