Celebration of Christmas
Poem to celebrate Christmas15 total reviews
Comment from lakeport
Celebration of Christmas, indeed it is one of the most joyful holiday of the year, that's a beautiful Christmas poem,I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.Hugs!Lakeport.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2014
Celebration of Christmas, indeed it is one of the most joyful holiday of the year, that's a beautiful Christmas poem,I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2014
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Lakeport, I was surprised to pull this up and see a wonderful review on a Christmas poem. Thanks for visiting my portfolio. It is greatly appreciated. Jerri
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your welcome Jerri, Hugs!lakeport.
Comment from Selina Stambi
Dear gramalot,
This beautifully, festively formatted poem warmed my heart and was like balm to my soul. We've just come out of Christmas celebrations in Canada - where Christ has been wrenched out of Christmas and left the festivities feeling hollow and gaudy.
Later joining in family prayer to honor and praise our Savior and King ... hurrah and amen! My kind of Christmas entirely!
Happy New Year to you, dear lady. God be with you and bless you and yours in 2014.
xxx
Sonali
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
Dear gramalot,
This beautifully, festively formatted poem warmed my heart and was like balm to my soul. We've just come out of Christmas celebrations in Canada - where Christ has been wrenched out of Christmas and left the festivities feeling hollow and gaudy.
Later joining in family prayer to honor and praise our Savior and King ... hurrah and amen! My kind of Christmas entirely!
Happy New Year to you, dear lady. God be with you and bless you and yours in 2014.
xxx
Sonali
Comment Written 02-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2014
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Sonali, thank you for your wonderful comments and review. Yes, more need to do those prayers that's for sure. Have a great New Year as well. Jerri
Comment from rouskin
This is a really good poem and a worthy contest entry
Best of luck in the contest
Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2013
This is a really good poem and a worthy contest entry
Best of luck in the contest
Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays
Comment Written 21-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2013
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Rouskin, thank you so much for your comments and review. It is greatly appreciated.
Comment from Louise Michelle
What a lovely poem this is! Your presentation is wonderful and I know it took effort to form your words into a Christmas tree. A real feel good poem - thank you. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2013
What a lovely poem this is! Your presentation is wonderful and I know it took effort to form your words into a Christmas tree. A real feel good poem - thank you. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 20-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2013
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Lou, thank you, it was fun to do. Your comments and review is greatly appreciated.
Comment from w.j.debi
Wonderful holiday message in a creative shape. Nice presentation of color and words. I salute you for taking the time and having the imagination to put this gem together.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2013
Wonderful holiday message in a creative shape. Nice presentation of color and words. I salute you for taking the time and having the imagination to put this gem together.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2013
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W.J.Debi, thank you. It was fun to do. Your comments and review is greatly appreciated.
Comment from ronnie k
Merry Christmas, and may I say an outstanding job on structure, design coupled with a wonderful message of joy to the world
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2013
Merry Christmas, and may I say an outstanding job on structure, design coupled with a wonderful message of joy to the world
Comment Written 19-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2013
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Ronnie, thank you for your comments and review. It is greatly appreciated.
Comment from Gungalo
Wishing you
the joy and
the serenity
of Christmas
this special time of year
Wonderful wishes for the year's end Grama.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2013
Wishing you
the joy and
the serenity
of Christmas
this special time of year
Wonderful wishes for the year's end Grama.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2013
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Gungalo, thank you as well. May your holidays be joyful! Jerri
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Thanks Jerri.
Comment from adewpearl
I am lousy at shaping, so congratulations on this lovely poem :-)
excellent use of enjambment to keep your thoughts flowing from line to line
good internal rhyme and alliteration in holly jolly jingle
a wonderful message in good poetic form :-) Merry Christmas! Brooke
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2013
I am lousy at shaping, so congratulations on this lovely poem :-)
excellent use of enjambment to keep your thoughts flowing from line to line
good internal rhyme and alliteration in holly jolly jingle
a wonderful message in good poetic form :-) Merry Christmas! Brooke
Comment Written 18-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2013
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Thanks, Brooke... I don't think there's any style of poetry that you would be classified as lousy at... :) Thanks for taking time to comment... always appreciated. Jerri
Comment from Smoothiecool
great picture choice
cleaver set out of your poem
good luck in the contest
your message of the Christmas blessings and cheer are portrayed in this poem
you cover all most of all the peace and joy Christmas should bring to everyone
flows well easy read
cheers SC
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2013
great picture choice
cleaver set out of your poem
good luck in the contest
your message of the Christmas blessings and cheer are portrayed in this poem
you cover all most of all the peace and joy Christmas should bring to everyone
flows well easy read
cheers SC
Comment Written 13-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2013
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SC, thank you for your comments and review. It is greatly appreciated.
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welcome
Comment from Mastery
I absolutely love the tree you made with your words, Jerri. A lot of work went into this, I'm sure and you have extended a wonderful greeting within. Bob
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2013
I absolutely love the tree you made with your words, Jerri. A lot of work went into this, I'm sure and you have extended a wonderful greeting within. Bob
Comment Written 12-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2013
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Bob, yes, it took a few times to get it right, have the correct words to make the tree fit and make sense within the poem. It was fun to do. Thanks for your comments, as always, they are appreciated.