COUNTING MY BLESSINGS
We all should occasionally stop and count our blessings60 total reviews
Comment from Muffins
You write with an intense open heart and deep understanding of the homeless and your reaction to them. Many times, I have said that the poor in America is seen as well-off or even rich in other countries. American poor have computers, cell phones, food banks, thrift shops, assistance from the government for food and shelter and in some cases, HDTV.
Thank you for writing and sharing this message with us. And, I'll make sure to count my blessings as well.
reply by the author on 29-May-2014
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You write with an intense open heart and deep understanding of the homeless and your reaction to them. Many times, I have said that the poor in America is seen as well-off or even rich in other countries. American poor have computers, cell phones, food banks, thrift shops, assistance from the government for food and shelter and in some cases, HDTV.
Thank you for writing and sharing this message with us. And, I'll make sure to count my blessings as well.
Comment Written 29-May-2014
reply by the author on 29-May-2014
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The truly poor have become invisible. People pass them on the street everyday but often won't even make eye contact. They don't want to know they are there. They are everywhere, not just here in Mexico. Thank you so much for your heartfelt review, I sincerely appreciate it.
Comment from SaluteDobby
HI Smurphgirl,
Congrats on placing 2nd in the contest! You deserve it! :)
This was a very poignant story. It's sad that so many are homeless and live in abject poverty. It makes us realize how fortunate we truly are. God bless you for looking out for that old lady.
Have a great day!
Regards,
Namratha
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2013
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HI Smurphgirl,
Congrats on placing 2nd in the contest! You deserve it! :)
This was a very poignant story. It's sad that so many are homeless and live in abject poverty. It makes us realize how fortunate we truly are. God bless you for looking out for that old lady.
Have a great day!
Regards,
Namratha
Comment Written 12-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2013
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She has become a significant part of my daily life. When I don't see her, I worry but she always turns up eventually. Mexico is a very poor country and they are trying so hard to catch up, but it is not easy.
Comment from Deejharrington
No matter how rough life gets, how discouraged we get,there always someone who proudly carries on the best they can and grateful for what they have.
Terrific writing, as usual. The reader can "see" the old lady and feel as you did. I'm so happy to be reviewing your wonderful work again.
deb
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2013
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No matter how rough life gets, how discouraged we get,there always someone who proudly carries on the best they can and grateful for what they have.
Terrific writing, as usual. The reader can "see" the old lady and feel as you did. I'm so happy to be reviewing your wonderful work again.
deb
Comment Written 12-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2013
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Thank you so very much. I cannot tell you how pleased I am that you are back. You have been missed. Thanks for the wonderful 6 stars, I sincerely appreciate them too.
Comment from Debbie7
Hi,
For me this is a beautifully written story. Every new sentence made me want more and you delivered. It really puts you in your place to see poor people who have nothing but the clothes on their back. You have become a blessing for her, and God bless you too. I'd love to see some of your art too. Namste, Debbie
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2013
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Hi,
For me this is a beautifully written story. Every new sentence made me want more and you delivered. It really puts you in your place to see poor people who have nothing but the clothes on their back. You have become a blessing for her, and God bless you too. I'd love to see some of your art too. Namste, Debbie
Comment Written 12-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2013
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Thank you so very much. This woman has opened my eyes helping me realize how fortunate I really am. If you are interested, you can see some of my art at http//artiscolor.weebly.com
Comment from Bina1
What an interesting story! A lovely way to help without insulting her dignity. Thank you for sharing, I am so surprised there are no government run agencies to help.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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What an interesting story! A lovely way to help without insulting her dignity. Thank you for sharing, I am so surprised there are no government run agencies to help.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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Mexico is a very poor country. They are trying to catch up but have a long way to go.
Comment from Mrs.G3
Beautifully and tenderly written. It touched me deeper than most stories on this site. It is a true case, of There but for the grace of God.. Thank you.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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Beautifully and tenderly written. It touched me deeper than most stories on this site. It is a true case, of There but for the grace of God.. Thank you.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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Thank you so very much for your generous review and the lovely 6 stars, I sincerely appreciate them.
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
This is such an awesome story and I love how God has used you to be His hand extended, that's really what it's all about. Do they have such a thing as a pup tent there. I think they are cheap and something she could keep in her cart. God bless you for being a blessing to her. Excellent piece.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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This is such an awesome story and I love how God has used you to be His hand extended, that's really what it's all about. Do they have such a thing as a pup tent there. I think they are cheap and something she could keep in her cart. God bless you for being a blessing to her. Excellent piece.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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No, but they do have small tarps that are just as good. Thanks for the great idea. I am so pleased this touched you and that you fe3lt it deserved 6 stars.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
hello Smurphy. This is an extraordinary tale and what I like the best about it, is that we can actually see and know this homeless woman through your brilliant descriptive text. I think it is some of the best writing from you I've seen. Love it. Good luck in your contest. You will have my vote. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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hello Smurphy. This is an extraordinary tale and what I like the best about it, is that we can actually see and know this homeless woman through your brilliant descriptive text. I think it is some of the best writing from you I've seen. Love it. Good luck in your contest. You will have my vote. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 11-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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Thank you very much. Seeing her is heart wrenching. We do what we can but it never seems to be enough. Thank you for your awesome 6 stars. I sincerely appreciate them.
Comment from RJFunston
Good morning,
I just finished your short story and have to say I am impressed. When I read someone's work, I like to look at their profile, and you have one heck of one. As I read this, I thought about homeless people here, in the US and around the world. I've been to Mexico and several other countries and have to agree with you. Very beautiful story, filled with sorrow. Most of the time people look for closure in a story, and you provided it, sad but true. This is a story that will touch the hearts of many. You have my vote.
Great story, great writing.
RJ
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2013
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Good morning,
I just finished your short story and have to say I am impressed. When I read someone's work, I like to look at their profile, and you have one heck of one. As I read this, I thought about homeless people here, in the US and around the world. I've been to Mexico and several other countries and have to agree with you. Very beautiful story, filled with sorrow. Most of the time people look for closure in a story, and you provided it, sad but true. This is a story that will touch the hearts of many. You have my vote.
Great story, great writing.
RJ
Comment Written 10-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2013
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Thank you very much. I haven't seen this lady for several days. I have friends looking for her and hope she just found a better place to sleep.l
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
I admire your great story and wish you the very best in the contest. We are so very fortunate. However, may we always gain examples from women of strength and survival. Thank you for sharing your food and heart with this woman.
:-) Carolyn
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I admire your great story and wish you the very best in the contest. We are so very fortunate. However, may we always gain examples from women of strength and survival. Thank you for sharing your food and heart with this woman.
:-) Carolyn
Comment Written 08-Nov-2013
