Desiring Invitation
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Comment from 9999pool
This story of a verb, a noun and an adjective is seemingly funny but to some poets, they will start to panic - what happens if that verb turns out to be a noun.
Eventually became adjectives due to the power in them for the budding poets.
Adjectives without nouns and verbs in a poem may sound like Irish or Welsh. Worst still Scottish, perhaps?
Good write in a humor way of how all the grammar comes together and decided to call it quits - having read the poet's work here in FS, the grammar experts simply raise the WHITE FLAG happily, LOL.
Cheerio, Ritchie.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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This story of a verb, a noun and an adjective is seemingly funny but to some poets, they will start to panic - what happens if that verb turns out to be a noun.
Eventually became adjectives due to the power in them for the budding poets.
Adjectives without nouns and verbs in a poem may sound like Irish or Welsh. Worst still Scottish, perhaps?
Good write in a humor way of how all the grammar comes together and decided to call it quits - having read the poet's work here in FS, the grammar experts simply raise the WHITE FLAG happily, LOL.
Cheerio, Ritchie.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Right you are, and thanks for your intriguing comments
and thoughts. Glad you enjoyed and appreciated presentation.
Best wishes always...
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Nice interesting write. Enjoyed it.
Take care and have a blessed day.
Ritchie.
Comment from MissMerri
Not silly at all, Ronni, but extremely cute and clever. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I tend to agree with your author notes, words do seem to carry strong emotions and feelings. That is why we depend on them to communicate our feelings for us. You are so creative to even think of this. Well written, and just a lot of fun to read.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Not silly at all, Ronni, but extremely cute and clever. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I tend to agree with your author notes, words do seem to carry strong emotions and feelings. That is why we depend on them to communicate our feelings for us. You are so creative to even think of this. Well written, and just a lot of fun to read.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Yhanks dear Merri...so happy you enjoyed,and shared your
kind and gracious comments. Love, Ronni
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Ronni, I truly love this kind of creative writing. It has pizazz and spice and tells a great story. It has movement to it like a well rehearsed dance. Bravo my friend. This one is wonderful. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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Hi Ronni, I truly love this kind of creative writing. It has pizazz and spice and tells a great story. It has movement to it like a well rehearsed dance. Bravo my friend. This one is wonderful. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 14-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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Thank you dear, so happy you enjoyed and had fun reading it!
It was hoot to try and lots of fun! Appreiciate your
enuthusiastic commetns...best wishes always...Ronni
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Ronni, this refreshingly different and very creative - I thought it was well penned and made me laugh as well. I loved it, great job with strong imagery and life within your words:D
Thanks for sharing.
Love
Maureen
xxoo
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Hi Ronni, this refreshingly different and very creative - I thought it was well penned and made me laugh as well. I loved it, great job with strong imagery and life within your words:D
Thanks for sharing.
Love
Maureen
xxoo
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thanks dear Maureen...glad you enjoyed and made you laugh...
was fun to try. A little variety, and spreading poetic wings..
Always appreciate your thoughtfu comments and compliments.
Love, Ronni ss00
Comment from ravenblack
sentence? surely, the verb can do better than that. at least a run-on sentence or better yet, a paragraph. and eventually a book is born when a verb prepositions, errr, propositions a noun. aarrgh, now you've got me doing it! would be a fun poem to use in high school English.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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sentence? surely, the verb can do better than that. at least a run-on sentence or better yet, a paragraph. and eventually a book is born when a verb prepositions, errr, propositions a noun. aarrgh, now you've got me doing it! would be a fun poem to use in high school English.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you for your intriuing review, yes the ideas and
scenarious could be endless...you might even give a try...
had a good start on it in your review...so go for it sometime..
So happy you enjoyed...and shared your supportive comments..
Best wishes always...Ronni
Comment from DBastian
Very clever, Ronni! Silly is good. You've done so well with this creative thought and I could see man additional scenarios ... with many delicious adjectives and armoring verbs, desperately trying to seduce (and conjugate) those wonderful, sexy nouns!
Too fun!
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Very clever, Ronni! Silly is good. You've done so well with this creative thought and I could see man additional scenarios ... with many delicious adjectives and armoring verbs, desperately trying to seduce (and conjugate) those wonderful, sexy nouns!
Too fun!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thanks David, glad you enjoyed and appreciated...had fun with
this indeed. And you are right, there could be endless
scenarious with this...maybey you might try some too...bet
you could really put one out there too and give grammar
some new twists. Glad it was fun read...Best always...Ronni
Comment from mizzkris20
Your poem is very creative. I like that you use parts of speech and innuendo that makes it more original. Very nice, fun poem to read. It was entertaining
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Your poem is very creative. I like that you use parts of speech and innuendo that makes it more original. Very nice, fun poem to read. It was entertaining
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you for your enjoyment of this poem, and so happy
it was fun and entertaining! Appreciate your kind thoughts.
Best wishes always...Ronni
Comment from Joan E.
I loved your creative and lighthearted piece from its initial alliteration to its clever use of parts of speech and innuendo. When you're in the mood, a sequel would be much appreciated. I'm still chortling...thanks for the smiles and laughs. -Joan
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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I loved your creative and lighthearted piece from its initial alliteration to its clever use of parts of speech and innuendo. When you're in the mood, a sequel would be much appreciated. I'm still chortling...thanks for the smiles and laughs. -Joan
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Hig dear..I should have known...you the 'teacher' would
find this bemusing..thanks for enjoying this one, and sharing
your merriment and appreciations. Actually, I have 2 sequels
in mind.."Punctuation Personified"...and "Invite To A Grammar
Party" LOL...not sure all these teachers on here am hearing
from...including you dear one...can stand more 'sequels' to
Grammarsville Revisted...LOL>.. but will see. And my oh my
THANKS FOR THE EXTRA STAR...I'm stunned, but grateful!
Love and hugs always...Ronni
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Oh, yes, please--we want some more! Giggles- Joan
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
This is adorable and would be excellent for a 4th or 5th reading book. You need to find a children's contest somewhere to enter it, they used to do stuff like that at the Fair. Very nice piece. God loves you and so do I.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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This is adorable and would be excellent for a 4th or 5th reading book. You need to find a children's contest somewhere to enter it, they used to do stuff like that at the Fair. Very nice piece. God loves you and so do I.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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Thank you Evelyn, for your enthusiastic review, so happ you
enjoyed it! Suitable for 4th and 5th grades level? I guess
in these times, indeed they might, and might give it a try
and see what happenes. Thanks for the idea....
Love and blessings...and I love you too.... Ronni
Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
LOL, This is SO cute, Ronni! This has to be the most creative poem I have EVER read! What English teacher wouldn't just LOVE to have a copy of this to read to her class? (Well, High school or college, maybe?) I just absolutely LOVE this! You are very good at this and very English literate to boot!
Thanks so much for sharing. Betty
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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LOL, This is SO cute, Ronni! This has to be the most creative poem I have EVER read! What English teacher wouldn't just LOVE to have a copy of this to read to her class? (Well, High school or college, maybe?) I just absolutely LOVE this! You are very good at this and very English literate to boot!
Thanks so much for sharing. Betty
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013
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Thanks Betty, so pleased you enjoyed this so thoroughly, and
my gracious, the extra star too! Sincerely appreciate it. I
had a very creative and innovative English teacher in college,
until his class, I had a hell of a time with Grammar,...making
it fun and creative made easier learning. This came to mind
from those creative days when imagination was allowed and
not only stringent rules obeyed. This has been fun, and
glad you had fun reading it too. Best wishes always...Ronni
