Seance
Skeptics Beware58 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
You sure said a mouthful in just fifty-five short, concise words. I don't know if people realize just how hard it is to tell a story, complete with a gripping start, a captive middle, then sum it all up with a gut-wrenching ending, in less than sixty words.
You did an exceptional job of doing just that here. Spooky stuff...
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2013
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You sure said a mouthful in just fifty-five short, concise words. I don't know if people realize just how hard it is to tell a story, complete with a gripping start, a captive middle, then sum it all up with a gut-wrenching ending, in less than sixty words.
You did an exceptional job of doing just that here. Spooky stuff...
Comment Written 04-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2013
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Thank you Dean.
Comment from lakeport
Seance indeed it is what one wants to believe, that's a heartfelt expressed story poem,. I enjoyed reading it. God bless you. Hugs!Lakeport.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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Seance indeed it is what one wants to believe, that's a heartfelt expressed story poem,. I enjoyed reading it. God bless you. Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2013
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Hugs back to you. Thank you for reviewing my little story.
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thank you, your welcome,Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment from Spitfire
A great job of creating atmosphere-- although foaming at the mouth made me think of a rabid dog. This reads like a summary of a novel about the paranormal. Also poses an interesting question.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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A great job of creating atmosphere-- although foaming at the mouth made me think of a rabid dog. This reads like a summary of a novel about the paranormal. Also poses an interesting question.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Thank you Spitfire for this very find review.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
Well, hard to confirm if Seance are real or fake, but there are so much talk on them. This is a well done entry for this 55 words fiction contest. Good luck.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Well, hard to confirm if Seance are real or fake, but there are so much talk on them. This is a well done entry for this 55 words fiction contest. Good luck.
ola thomas
Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Thank you Ola. I really do appreciate you stopping by a reviewing.
Comment from Bryana
This is interesting. I've never believed in these things, on the other hand they might be have some truth in it.
In those 55 words you managed to tell a lot that makes your reader think.
I wish you good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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This is interesting. I've never believed in these things, on the other hand they might be have some truth in it.
In those 55 words you managed to tell a lot that makes your reader think.
I wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Thank you Bryana. I'm going need it. Smile
Comment from Righteous Riter
The writer does a good job of getting the message across. The words give life to the photo. The writer does a good job of tapping into the mind of the reader as this piece holds my attention from start to finish.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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The writer does a good job of getting the message across. The words give life to the photo. The writer does a good job of tapping into the mind of the reader as this piece holds my attention from start to finish.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Thank you Rightious Riter. Really appreciate the review.
Comment from Indie Skreet
I took part in a seance 'once' when I was 17 and believe me it was pretty scary. I think it is best not to dabble with things we do not understand. well delivered short write, as required, so best of luck in comp. Indie
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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I took part in a seance 'once' when I was 17 and believe me it was pretty scary. I think it is best not to dabble with things we do not understand. well delivered short write, as required, so best of luck in comp. Indie
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Really! Thanks for reviewing. What happen? Do you believe in them. Why was it scary?
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I wasn't going to, but I will post a poem on Wed I wrote about it - it is a long story, but it explains it if you are interested - it is interesting! best Indie
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Ok. I'll look for it. I wrote a manuscript about a Seance. I'd like to see how closely my imagination comes to your experience.
Comment from Curtis Hatch
amahra,
This is an interesting and engaging situation set in fifty-five words or less. The question remains, was the appearance of the lady's son real or fake? Even the planted expert was confused. It is an interesting read.
Curtis
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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amahra,
This is an interesting and engaging situation set in fifty-five words or less. The question remains, was the appearance of the lady's son real or fake? Even the planted expert was confused. It is an interesting read.
Curtis
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Thank you for an interesting review. I'm so glad you found it enjoyable.
Comment from Selina Stambi
Very well written, amahra. You've created a hushed atmostphere of tension and anxiety, mystery and hope.
The author notes are very good too.
All the very best in the contest, my dear.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Very well written, amahra. You've created a hushed atmostphere of tension and anxiety, mystery and hope.
The author notes are very good too.
All the very best in the contest, my dear.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I really do appreciate it.
Comment from trampwatch
told a good little story in 55 words, which is difficult to do. ive entered the 55 word contest too, so i dont want to wish you too much good luck! in author notes you mention that the undead speak. isnt that because if you're un dead you're alive? makes sense.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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told a good little story in 55 words, which is difficult to do. ive entered the 55 word contest too, so i dont want to wish you too much good luck! in author notes you mention that the undead speak. isnt that because if you're un dead you're alive? makes sense.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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According to some legends, spirits are not considered as being alive, yet..they exist. Thank you for the review. Good luck in the contest.
