Mirror ON The Wall
Just a fun observation6 total reviews
Comment from 9999pool
I want to give this Ollie dachshund a big hug.
He looked so suspicious and witty in the pic.
I am sure he had secrets to keep from the way he looked.
He is an 'oily' slippery one and you will never catch him in his mischievous acts cos he is smarter than us, LOL.
Nice shiny coat and if the mirror replied, "Thee is fairer than your owner between you and me!".
I bet Ollie never told anyone that - it's in his left eye, dear Jo. :-).
Cheerio, Ritchie.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013
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I want to give this Ollie dachshund a big hug.
He looked so suspicious and witty in the pic.
I am sure he had secrets to keep from the way he looked.
He is an 'oily' slippery one and you will never catch him in his mischievous acts cos he is smarter than us, LOL.
Nice shiny coat and if the mirror replied, "Thee is fairer than your owner between you and me!".
I bet Ollie never told anyone that - it's in his left eye, dear Jo. :-).
Cheerio, Ritchie.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013
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Thank you Ritchie for reading my little ditty about my beloved friend Ollie. He is so special to me.
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Yes, looks like pets understand us better when we are down and out. They will come to us with those knowing eye, whines a little and rub their bodies against us. Cute.
Cheerio, Ritchie.
Comment from Patricia1
Nice poem! He is so cute. Good that you put the photo so you could get a clear picture of what you were saying. Would like to have heard more about what makes him really special to you besides the fact that he is adorable looking! Good job!
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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Nice poem! He is so cute. Good that you put the photo so you could get a clear picture of what you were saying. Would like to have heard more about what makes him really special to you besides the fact that he is adorable looking! Good job!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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Thank you for the review.
Comment from Polllly
Well, the picture did sort of give it away! But the ending would be a nice surprise otherwise. Nicely done as to the description that could fit a person, too. Cute.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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Well, the picture did sort of give it away! But the ending would be a nice surprise otherwise. Nicely done as to the description that could fit a person, too. Cute.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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Thank you Pollly for the nice review.
Comment from Bill Schott
It's a cute poem about the little wiener dog. I guess the '...long tail?' question derives from our not knowing you're describing a dog. That device is a bit moot since we have a picture. Nice to spin Ollie up into verse though. Happy days.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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It's a cute poem about the little wiener dog. I guess the '...long tail?' question derives from our not knowing you're describing a dog. That device is a bit moot since we have a picture. Nice to spin Ollie up into verse though. Happy days.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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Thanks Bill for reading my little poem about my Ollie.
Comment from poseytoon
It's good to have a loving pet. Ollie looks like just the ticket. Putting him in a nice poem is a special thing.
Thank you. Keep writing, writing, writing.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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It's good to have a loving pet. Ollie looks like just the ticket. Putting him in a nice poem is a special thing.
Thank you. Keep writing, writing, writing.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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Thank you poseytoon for reviewing my little poem about Ollie.
Comment from Shadow Pahn
It's a funny piece and highly creative, however, the last line doesn't flow as well as the rest. Not sure how to fix that though. After all, it is your poem and i shouldn't mess with it in the first place!
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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It's a funny piece and highly creative, however, the last line doesn't flow as well as the rest. Not sure how to fix that though. After all, it is your poem and i shouldn't mess with it in the first place!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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Thanks Shadow Pahn for reviewing my poem.
