Morning Love.
Echo style.73 total reviews
Comment from Lost n Thought
This is such a unique and captivating style of poetry! I truly enjoyed the rhythm of this poem and the 'echo' at the end of each line. A beautiful piece, great job!
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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This is such a unique and captivating style of poetry! I truly enjoyed the rhythm of this poem and the 'echo' at the end of each line. A beautiful piece, great job!
Comment Written 21-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much for your great comment. Pili
Comment from acerisestory
I've never heard of echo poetry before, Pili. Your poem is a great "first lesson" for me. I must say, it appears to be a difficult form to master.
Your poem is quite erotic and descriptive. I particularly like the last four lines:
inspiration grows by passionate waves of attraction
action
over soft white silk sheets in sweet arrest
rest
Lovely. Thanks for sharing, my friend! Alana
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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I've never heard of echo poetry before, Pili. Your poem is a great "first lesson" for me. I must say, it appears to be a difficult form to master.
Your poem is quite erotic and descriptive. I particularly like the last four lines:
inspiration grows by passionate waves of attraction
action
over soft white silk sheets in sweet arrest
rest
Lovely. Thanks for sharing, my friend! Alana
Comment Written 21-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Thank you Alana, a friend created the style years ago , I loved it and wrote a few
then , is a challenge for me...
Comment from Kingsrookviii
Wow! I love this, Pili. I never tried this style, but I like it. The photo is perfect, also.This has an up-lifting and inspirational quality to it. Well done. Bruce.
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Wow! I love this, Pili. I never tried this style, but I like it. The photo is perfect, also.This has an up-lifting and inspirational quality to it. Well done. Bruce.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Hey, thank you so much Bruce.... Someone created it in FS years ago, I love it and wrote a few, nice challenge for my English LOL...
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is a lovely, subtly erotic romantic poem, with an interesting rhyme scheme. It is beautifully presented as well. Best regards, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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This is a lovely, subtly erotic romantic poem, with an interesting rhyme scheme. It is beautifully presented as well. Best regards, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 21-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much Jeanie.... Great comment..Take care. Pili
Comment from vapros
The echo style certainly lends some added interest to this romantic poem. Your description of the morning's enjoyment is excellent. Good work.
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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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The echo style certainly lends some added interest to this romantic poem. Your description of the morning's enjoyment is excellent. Good work.
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much Vapros, great review. Pili
Comment from RGstar
A very clever write with the relation between the end rhyme and word before.
Thought gone into this with an even flow that defines your thesis.
Well done. Better than meets the eye.
Best wishes,
RGstar
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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A very clever write with the relation between the end rhyme and word before.
Thought gone into this with an even flow that defines your thesis.
Well done. Better than meets the eye.
Best wishes,
RGstar
Comment Written 21-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much RG. Pili
Comment from reconciled
sounds like a garden we frequent....very beautiful when your there. Hey Tulip...sorry I'm late...been working a lot....but I love you....Michael
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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sounds like a garden we frequent....very beautiful when your there. Hey Tulip...sorry I'm late...been working a lot....but I love you....Michael
Comment Written 21-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Yepyyyyy , glad you enjoy it. Rest a bit my friend..l. Great shiny star ...rest. Love
Comment from Linda England Bonam
I really liked the way you wrote this! The rhyme at the end was very effective throughout!
Loved the photo and the choice of colors to accent your beautifully written piece.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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I really liked the way you wrote this! The rhyme at the end was very effective throughout!
Loved the photo and the choice of colors to accent your beautifully written piece.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much Linda, so glad you enjoy it. Pili
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Pili - I have never heard of Echo style but you have made a very good job of this one. It is well written and I like the way the echo leads into the following line. I particularly like - arrest/rest. A lovely peaceful ending to a fine poem. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Hi Pili - I have never heard of Echo style but you have made a very good job of this one. It is well written and I like the way the echo leads into the following line. I particularly like - arrest/rest. A lovely peaceful ending to a fine poem. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 21-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Love your comment Dorothy, thank you so much. Pili
Comment from seaglass
I have never heard of Eco poetry before and found this fascinating. It would be challenging for me to even try to write one. A happy, "wake and face the morning" poem.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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I have never heard of Eco poetry before and found this fascinating. It would be challenging for me to even try to write one. A happy, "wake and face the morning" poem.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much seaglass, try one , is a nice challenge. Pili
