Comment from jetmichelle

Excellent

This gets five stars for neither of you taking the high road and quitting while you were ahead. What a farce. Sometimes it's best just to let it goooooooo! LOL

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013

There was no need for me to "take the high road and quit!" I won!

Thanks for reading and commenting ... Dennis (winner)

Comment from eowyn0003

Excellent

Clever and sadly istute in many ways. People usual will not stick it out that far with people they have met on FanStory. If they did they might find out they have more in commen then they thought.

Lura

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013

Sage advice indeed! Some of the humor in this piece comes from bad experience with electronic dueling, some of which, I am now ashamed to say was perpetuated by yours truly. Thanks for reading and commenting Lura. We on Cape Cod are anticipating our first big snowstorm in several years. Usually, such storms blow out to sea in this area but word is we are going to get this one. Blessings, Dennis

reply by eowyn0003 on 08-Feb-2013

Snow in Cape Cod, and we had rain in February, in Denver, Colorado! What's the world coming to? I enjoyed your work. Stay warm!

Lura

reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013

Maybe Al Gore was right? Nahhhhhhhhhhh, couldn't be! :)

Comment from beccabootie123

Excellent

wouldn't call it who blames who here but I am glad it was submitted for my read. funny and true done well, felt like I was part of the interactions. well done would read more
keep the dialogg going

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013

Thank you, a sequel is probably in the works ..

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

You two adversaries stand back to back with your chosen weapons. Take twenty paces turn and press your mute buttons. Do you hear it? The silence is golden. (LOL) Very good job.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013

Good idea you have there but not half as much fun. Besides, she's a woman. She has no "mute button." :) Glad you like it! Dennis

reply by c_lucas on 08-Feb-2013

Your welcome, Dennis. Mute button is on the fanstory edit page. Charlie

Comment from Lynn Moses

Excellent

Yes I had fun reading it after I got past the stress when I first thought it was real. Ha! You guys did a great job and the jabs were very well done. It's a pleasure to read something very different/creative and of course I always enjoy a good laugh. Keep 'em coming.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013

Hi, thanks for reading and commenting so nicely. Sorry about the stress but you think you have stress, let me tell you about working with Kady! I had to carry her on my back, her whining and carping all the way. Now THAT'S stress! :) She's really a great gal and she reads all this stuff so send me a private message if you want to know the real deal with HER! LOL Dennis

reply by Lynn Moses on 08-Feb-2013

Oh, I've been reading her stuff, so I think I know her 'real deal', and I think it great. Thanks for the fun message.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, deniz22, you did an excellent job writing this series of emails about overblown egos and inmature behavior. made me smile as i was reading it.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013

Yes, how do we become mature? By first learning the follies of immaturity. Experience is a harsh yet effective teacher. Glad you got a smile out of it. Dennis

Comment from Norbanus

Excellent

This is a damn well written bit of melodramatic satire. You began it smoothly and built it into acrimony and harshness. damn well structured and presented. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013

Thank you. Your reviewing is appreciated

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Fun use of dialogue/if that is what you call email exchanges LOL
I like the friendly, teasing quality of the back and forth
I like snarky people and snarky comments, so this was fun to read :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013

Thanks, Brooke. It wasn't easy for me, carrying Kady but I did it! :) Dennis

Comment from LaDonnaCole

Good

I laughed and laughed! Such veiled honesty is refreshing! Ha!

Stars to the vibrant and refreshing Kady and a nod to the mighty oak! Great stuff, it is the fanstory soap opera!

Thanks for sharing this witty banter.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013

Hey, we get very few blue monkeys around here so really appreciate you swinging by! Thanks for the good words, but please remember that I carried Kady all the way across the finish line on my back! Now she's here ans she wants equal billing ... can you imagine?

I am sure that my clarification will resonate in your true blue heart? Thanks for giving us the unique experience of receiving 4 stars for this piece ... if I didn't have that dead weight, oh well. :)

Comment from kashmayank

Excellent

This is away of having a conversation with the fans nice and interesting way,this is what is good about fan story so much to learn

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013

With all due respect, I believe you miss the fact that this is pure fiction, meant to be humorous. Thanks for reading anway.