I Ain't Afraid of No Ghost
A composite of true stories of supernatural events13 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Your story is wonderful. The theory is that people who see these things are mediums themselves and their bright light attracts those who have crossed over to the other side. The fact that you have moved several times and still have these visits is perhaps confirmation that you have this ability. Perhaps they need your help to continue on their journey toward the light. Your piece is well written an clearly expressed. Very nice.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
Your story is wonderful. The theory is that people who see these things are mediums themselves and their bright light attracts those who have crossed over to the other side. The fact that you have moved several times and still have these visits is perhaps confirmation that you have this ability. Perhaps they need your help to continue on their journey toward the light. Your piece is well written an clearly expressed. Very nice.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you BeasPeas (I love your handle) for your kind observations and review.
Comment from elliejean
I love the story. They do walk among us. It is up to us to believe. I think loved ones spirits are always around the loved ones left behind.My great grandmother was a very polite southern lady. I feel her hand tapping the back of my head every time I am rude. Great work..
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
I love the story. They do walk among us. It is up to us to believe. I think loved ones spirits are always around the loved ones left behind.My great grandmother was a very polite southern lady. I feel her hand tapping the back of my head every time I am rude. Great work..
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you elliejean for your kind review of my story. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from notdeadyet
I love the story about your dad. That is so touching. I, too,have have many experiences that stretched the veil between heaven and earth. Thanks for telling us some of yours. You wrote them well.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
I love the story about your dad. That is so touching. I, too,have have many experiences that stretched the veil between heaven and earth. Thanks for telling us some of yours. You wrote them well.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you for your kind review. I am glad you enjoyed my work.
Comment from Judy Couch
I llked this. It is well written and easy to understand. The stories are interesting. There are no grammatical errors that I noticed. Good work.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2013
I llked this. It is well written and easy to understand. The stories are interesting. There are no grammatical errors that I noticed. Good work.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2013
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Thank you Judy for reviewing my work. I am glad you liked it.
Comment from Just Alyx
It sounds like you might be able to fill a small book with your experiences. Nicely written collection of events, too. The nickel crusade snippet was wonderful. Sometimes reliable habits have their benefits for those left behind, don't they? Enjoyed the way you rounded it out with the link and tribute nickels as a way of saying hello in return. I had bent spoons turning up on clean kitchen benches whenever all were asleep not long ago (antsy teenagers in the house *shrug*) It doesn't happen anymore now that they're no longer antsy. A typo I found: "I called my [parents' names] and no one answered." Good story and entry, gives pause for thought, and much luck in the comp. Alyx.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013
It sounds like you might be able to fill a small book with your experiences. Nicely written collection of events, too. The nickel crusade snippet was wonderful. Sometimes reliable habits have their benefits for those left behind, don't they? Enjoyed the way you rounded it out with the link and tribute nickels as a way of saying hello in return. I had bent spoons turning up on clean kitchen benches whenever all were asleep not long ago (antsy teenagers in the house *shrug*) It doesn't happen anymore now that they're no longer antsy. A typo I found: "I called my [parents' names] and no one answered." Good story and entry, gives pause for thought, and much luck in the comp. Alyx.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2013
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Thanks Alyx for your kind review. I will go back and fix the typo.
Comment from Bobby Jo
This is truly an amazing story. I wonder if some people are more intuned to spirits than other people. It is wonderful how your dad still connects to you, and I am sure it is also really a eye opener to the heart. Good luck with your story. Thumbs up!
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013
This is truly an amazing story. I wonder if some people are more intuned to spirits than other people. It is wonderful how your dad still connects to you, and I am sure it is also really a eye opener to the heart. Good luck with your story. Thumbs up!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013
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Wow! Bobby Jo thank you so much for the great review and stars. I am glad you liked my story. Yes, it always makes me smile when I find a dime. I loved my dad very much.
Comment from Gladness
This is both sweet and spooky. You chose some great happenings to relate. My favorite the same as yours, your dad and the dimes.
One little typo:
"who that the most money." (who has,who took?)
I loved the stories, thanks, Anita
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
This is both sweet and spooky. You chose some great happenings to relate. My favorite the same as yours, your dad and the dimes.
One little typo:
"who that the most money." (who has,who took?)
I loved the stories, thanks, Anita
Comment Written 02-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Thanks Anita for your review and catching my typo. Isn't it funny...I always reread my work sometimes several times and still do not always catch those typos. I will fix.
Comment from Val Crisson
Great story,Jo. I love the one about your dad, but I think the K Mart parking lot one is my favorite. I have a bunch of these experiences too. I think you may have inspired me write them down one day. This piece has great flow and kept me interested beginning to end.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
Great story,Jo. I love the one about your dad, but I think the K Mart parking lot one is my favorite. I have a bunch of these experiences too. I think you may have inspired me write them down one day. This piece has great flow and kept me interested beginning to end.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Thanks Val for your kind comments on my work. I'm glad you enjoyed the piece. They all really did happen...I'd be real interested to read your stories, too.
Comment from TDLRasmar
You have a compelling story there especially the part about the car going up hill. I presume that it wasn't running because if it was then that may explain what happened. I have had some "unusual" events in my life that make me believe that there is more going on in the universe than a lot of people think. Good luck on the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
You have a compelling story there especially the part about the car going up hill. I presume that it wasn't running because if it was then that may explain what happened. I have had some "unusual" events in my life that make me believe that there is more going on in the universe than a lot of people think. Good luck on the contest.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2013
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Thanks TDL for your review and comments. Yes, your assumption is correct. The car had died in the middle of the road and when it began rolling I first looked back to see if maybe someone had stopped and was pushing me. No people or vehicles that I could see. Spooked me real good. :o) I even applied my brakes at first and the car kept rolling up hill. Then I started praying.
Comment from cupa tea
I love the dime story...That is soo cool! I'd have liked the story better if you'd just told the dime story as it is interesting just by itself. Nicely done! Good luck!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2013
I love the dime story...That is soo cool! I'd have liked the story better if you'd just told the dime story as it is interesting just by itself. Nicely done! Good luck!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2013
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Thank you cupa tea for reviewing my story. My favorite,too, is the one about my daddy.