Leavened with Love
a stunning rebirth59 total reviews
Comment from minopavlic
I am fully overwhelmed by your brilliant creativity which clearly shines through your writing of painted illusions which seem so real.Your unique style certainly leaves it's impact.
Your writing continues as your signature, one of a kind.
No_obstacle
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
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I am fully overwhelmed by your brilliant creativity which clearly shines through your writing of painted illusions which seem so real.Your unique style certainly leaves it's impact.
Your writing continues as your signature, one of a kind.
No_obstacle
Comment Written 19-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
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Thank you so much for this amazing review, No_obstacle. I am honored by your encouragement and generosity. Warmest regards, Bev
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You have definitely earned that recognition and more importantly, as a gifted writer, my respect.
Mino
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Thank you, Mino. You are most gracious. :0)
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, writingfundimension, you did an excellent job writing this story about the conversion of saul, who was given a new name for his new life. i enjoyed reading it and wish i had a six left for you
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
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this is very well written, writingfundimension, you did an excellent job writing this story about the conversion of saul, who was given a new name for his new life. i enjoyed reading it and wish i had a six left for you
Comment Written 19-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
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Thank you so much, sweet. I really appreciate your generous and very encouraging review. Your wish for a six really touches my heart. Warmest regards, Bev
Comment from ladydragonfly49
Unique perspective, well written. Hooks readers in from the beginning and maintains the suspense throughout. Great imagery that reaches the mind and the heart. Sometimes it's worth it to let the muse run wild and break the barriers of an 800 word count. Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
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Unique perspective, well written. Hooks readers in from the beginning and maintains the suspense throughout. Great imagery that reaches the mind and the heart. Sometimes it's worth it to let the muse run wild and break the barriers of an 800 word count. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2013
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Thanks so much, ladydragonfly. I really appreciate this very encouraging and generous review. Glad you stopped by! Warmest regards, Bev
Comment from Tina55
You set a tense atmosphere right from the first line, Bev. Nicely done!
...screeching like a robbed whore - sharp and intense
Great tale from a new perspective.
I love the last line. Nicely done, my dear!
Love,
Tina
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2013
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You set a tense atmosphere right from the first line, Bev. Nicely done!
...screeching like a robbed whore - sharp and intense
Great tale from a new perspective.
I love the last line. Nicely done, my dear!
Love,
Tina
Comment Written 18-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2013
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Tina, thank you for taking time tonight to read my posts. I really appreciate your wonderful review of this story. Your encouragement and generosity are so appreciated! Love, Bev
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You deserve the best, Bev... xxoo
Comment from janalma
Good story. When I read about St. Paul in the bible I didn't really think too much about his personal life before he was struck blind. I knew that he had persecuted Christians but never reflected on it. This story gives the man a persona, even tho it is from your own thoughts. Makes one realize that he was a real person, with real faults and cares. Enjoyed it. Saw no spag.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2013
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Good story. When I read about St. Paul in the bible I didn't really think too much about his personal life before he was struck blind. I knew that he had persecuted Christians but never reflected on it. This story gives the man a persona, even tho it is from your own thoughts. Makes one realize that he was a real person, with real faults and cares. Enjoyed it. Saw no spag.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2013
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Thank you for the generous and encouraging review J. I appreciate you sharing your insights! Warmest regards, Bev
Comment from Doc Holiday
An entertaining account of the story of St. Paul (Saul of Tarsus). Too bad you couldn't have entered it into the contest, but sometimes we just can't sacrifice our story for member dollars. I know how that goes. Nicely told!
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2013
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An entertaining account of the story of St. Paul (Saul of Tarsus). Too bad you couldn't have entered it into the contest, but sometimes we just can't sacrifice our story for member dollars. I know how that goes. Nicely told!
Comment Written 18-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2013
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Hi, Doc. So nice to hear from you. Yes, you have expressed the situation perfectly.
Thanks for reading and for the generous review.
Warmest regards, Bev
Comment from kashmayank
well when some historical thing has to be shown then many times the crust is missed but a nice work is this one i enjoyed reading it all the best
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2013
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well when some historical thing has to be shown then many times the crust is missed but a nice work is this one i enjoyed reading it all the best
Comment Written 18-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2013
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Thank you very much, kashmayank. I really appreciate your generous review. Warm regards, Bev
Comment from mumsyone
Hi Bev,
I have a difficult time reading spiritual fiction because it is usually so far from Bible truth. But I thought I'd give this a try, since it's yours. You've done a good job of keeping it close.
more afraid of a vengeful pagan God (god) than their pious leader's rage
Instinctively, 'Stipes' (Stipes - no need for the quote marks, since the name was explained previously) reached to tighten the girdle, filled with Roman coins, beneath his tunic.
The horse's reins were jerked violently from 'Stipes' (Stipes') hands
Stipes's (Stipes') hoarse voice and stricken countenance gave rise to panic among the three men.
"I say we leave him here and return to Jerusalem before whatever struck him down does the same to us.(,)" Nathan, the brother of Benjamin countered.
To the amazement of his companions, 'Stipes' (Stipes)allowed himself to be led to the cart without any protest.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2013
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Hi Bev,
I have a difficult time reading spiritual fiction because it is usually so far from Bible truth. But I thought I'd give this a try, since it's yours. You've done a good job of keeping it close.
more afraid of a vengeful pagan God (god) than their pious leader's rage
Instinctively, 'Stipes' (Stipes - no need for the quote marks, since the name was explained previously) reached to tighten the girdle, filled with Roman coins, beneath his tunic.
The horse's reins were jerked violently from 'Stipes' (Stipes') hands
Stipes's (Stipes') hoarse voice and stricken countenance gave rise to panic among the three men.
"I say we leave him here and return to Jerusalem before whatever struck him down does the same to us.(,)" Nathan, the brother of Benjamin countered.
To the amazement of his companions, 'Stipes' (Stipes)allowed himself to be led to the cart without any protest.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2013
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Hi, Lois. Thank you for your excellent review. I, especially, appreciate your clarification on the issue of the nickname. Appreciate it! Warm regards, Bev
Comment from Glasstruth
A very entertaining read. Your author notes were of great help. Never quite knew it like this, or maybe I forgot quite a bit? Needed a refresher. Very dramatic. Historical and wonderfully written. Thanks for sharing. Les
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2013
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A very entertaining read. Your author notes were of great help. Never quite knew it like this, or maybe I forgot quite a bit? Needed a refresher. Very dramatic. Historical and wonderfully written. Thanks for sharing. Les
Comment Written 17-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2013
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Hi, Les. Thank you for letting me know what worked for you in this write. That's always helpful. Much appreciate your generosity! Bev
Comment from Cornelius2000
A well told story, with dialogue that sounds right for the period (as far as we know what it should sound like). I don't find anything that needs fixing. Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2013
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A well told story, with dialogue that sounds right for the period (as far as we know what it should sound like). I don't find anything that needs fixing. Well done.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2013
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Thank you, Dave. I really appreciate your encouraging and generous review. :0) Bev
