senryu (he appeared)
The Gift of Presence?34 total reviews
Comment from words
Oh, I loved this one, P.
A bad-penny boy friend of mine came into my mind the moment I read this. LOL
he appeared on my
front door mat so many times
he wore out WELCOME
Love the irony of this one.
And my friend, most certainly wore out his welcome. LOL
Hugs, d
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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Oh, I loved this one, P.
A bad-penny boy friend of mine came into my mind the moment I read this. LOL
he appeared on my
front door mat so many times
he wore out WELCOME
Love the irony of this one.
And my friend, most certainly wore out his welcome. LOL
Hugs, d
Comment Written 01-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
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LOL Have you been digging woman?
You should be WRITING more great stuffs...
Thanks for sniffing out this winner...I must say when I looked at our worn out mat sweeping this puncher came into mind and I just had to drag it out for a contest.
Seems the judges liked it too...haha.
I get a feeling if I think I've got a real beauty and these days only save my most sterling wit for the 575 contests...
Cheers and big hugs for this one mate
P
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Comment from charlyann
I just read this, good one. I can't think of anything else to say, but I have to keep typing so you'll know I think this is a good one
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013
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I just read this, good one. I can't think of anything else to say, but I have to keep typing so you'll know I think this is a good one
Comment Written 05-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2013
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Oh come on, you can think of more to say than that! LMAO
Thanks for the exhausting read here! LMAO
You crack me up sister!
LOL
Cheers P
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Comment from despiser
What are you trying to say? Why beat around the bush? These don't show up in my message box, but I see you did good with this one clever lil Bunny. Good work, very nice.
-DEE xx
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2013
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What are you trying to say? Why beat around the bush? These don't show up in my message box, but I see you did good with this one clever lil Bunny. Good work, very nice.
-DEE xx
Comment Written 03-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2013
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===(:o-B) Why thankyou berry much DEE! LOL
This was a blind bunns entry ninny.
The other two post notifications you SHOULD get.
I got to visit your pawtfohlio too. This was NOT a bio so relax Haha
X
cpJfB
Comment from l.raven
Hi my darling girl. Where have you been? Really miss you wit. Been gone about a mouth myself. I love your not so welcome message. Have a wonderful New Year and hope your Christmas was the same. Luff ya Linda xxoo hugs
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2012
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Hi my darling girl. Where have you been? Really miss you wit. Been gone about a mouth myself. I love your not so welcome message. Have a wonderful New Year and hope your Christmas was the same. Luff ya Linda xxoo hugs
Comment Written 30-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2012
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Hello right back Linda, thanks for the delightful review. Been busy with family, business and life in general so FS had to get the shaft for a bit. Haha...I have been writing plenty and stashing, NEVER short of a poem my friend. Boy have I got some beauties tucked away. Hopefully I get some ME time over the school holidays...yeah, right what was I thinking? LMAO
Happy New Year
Cheers P
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Comment from Carrie Smith
Hi there, Love the humor and truth is this fine senyru. The welcome on the doormat and capitalizing the word at the end was perfect. I'm not getting notification of your new posts?? So, thought I'd look you up. Wonder what's wrong. xxSusan
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2012
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Hi there, Love the humor and truth is this fine senyru. The welcome on the doormat and capitalizing the word at the end was perfect. I'm not getting notification of your new posts?? So, thought I'd look you up. Wonder what's wrong. xxSusan
Comment Written 25-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2012
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Thanks so much Carrie. I have not posted anything for quite awhile. Only blind entries so you would not have got those notifications. I am rarely here these days. Too much else going on that is higher priority unfortunately.
Cheers and thanks for a beaut review.
Phillippa x
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Hi there, I have just had problems with other fans with this problems, plus I have missed your works. Oh, I feel your pain about all the other stuff keeping us away. Good to be in touch with you again!!! xxSusan
Comment from Carrie Carson
Congratulations!! I just now saw this...I've been distracted of late.
Clever, no spag, great for this prompt.
Hope your Holiday and the New Year are blessed and bountiful. :) Carrie
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2012
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Congratulations!! I just now saw this...I've been distracted of late.
Clever, no spag, great for this prompt.
Hope your Holiday and the New Year are blessed and bountiful. :) Carrie
Comment Written 25-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2012
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Wow, thanks a bunch Carrie, most appreciate the sixer and glad you enjoyed this one so much.
Cheers P
Comment from Sally Carter
Hey, Clopo, you're back! I stumbled across this one and wondered if I'd switched off my "notifications", but I guess it was a blind contest.
What a great little poem. Very clever, and not too "pun-ny", which sometimes happens with these. Natural words, not too contrived, and with a real story built in. Great job - no wonder it won.
Lovely to see you around these parts again. Hope all is well and that you and the family have a wonderful Christmas.
Love
Sal
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2012
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Hey, Clopo, you're back! I stumbled across this one and wondered if I'd switched off my "notifications", but I guess it was a blind contest.
What a great little poem. Very clever, and not too "pun-ny", which sometimes happens with these. Natural words, not too contrived, and with a real story built in. Great job - no wonder it won.
Lovely to see you around these parts again. Hope all is well and that you and the family have a wonderful Christmas.
Love
Sal
Comment Written 22-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2012
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LOL Not really back, just lurking around here and there, mostly entering a few blind ones but rarely here. Thanks so much for the delightful review, hope you had a great xmas and are keeping well these days.
Cheers Clopo x
Comment from GWHARGIS
Now that was clever. I love the tongue in cheek approach to this. The picture of the welcome mat also lended to the humor. The cadence and the flow were great. Nice job.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2012
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Now that was clever. I love the tongue in cheek approach to this. The picture of the welcome mat also lended to the humor. The cadence and the flow were great. Nice job.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2012
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Thanks very much GW. I appreciate your review.
Comment from el twelve
that again was great, you do have a way with words that gets right to the point, effective and efficient, thanks for sharing, this was funny
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2012
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that again was great, you do have a way with words that gets right to the point, effective and efficient, thanks for sharing, this was funny
Comment Written 21-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2012
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Thanks very much. I appreciate your review.
Comment from jaded831
I love your poem, congratulations on winning, I can see why. Your poem has a touch of comedy. Any poem that can give me a laugh gets a thumbs up.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2012
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I love your poem, congratulations on winning, I can see why. Your poem has a touch of comedy. Any poem that can give me a laugh gets a thumbs up.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2012
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Wow, thanks so much. I tend to write in this vein which is NOT always appreciated in senryu or haiku prompts. Fortunately this one paid off and I give YOUR review a big thumbs up too.
Cheers and merry xmas.
Closet
